五年级译林版英语期末作文必考题【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级译林版英语期末作文必考题【二】
有一个地方，没有城市的高楼大厦；也没有城市的车水马龙；更没有城市的热闹喧哗。但它有一种内在的美，美得让人陶醉，美得让人流连，它就是乡村。
走在乡村的小路上，抬头是蓝蓝的天空，一片蔚蓝，碧空如洗。映衬着天空的，朵朵棉花似的白云，仿佛是一杯冒着热气的、清香的牛奶。树木郁郁葱葱，一片绿色，它们像一个个守护森林的士兵，那样挺拔，那样高耸。树下，一片片地毯似的小草，它们软绵绵的，像一块块沁人心脾的蛋糕，我多想在上面坐会儿，躺会儿呀！
空气中有一股清香，不知什么时候，我走进了一片花的原野，那一朵朵小花，红的、黄的、紫的，纯洁、娇小、鲜嫩，令人心旷神怡，花下成百的蜜蜂“嗡嗡”地闹着，蝴蝶飞来飞去。
“叽叽喳喳，叽叽喳喳”。头顶上忽然传来了小鸟的歌声，它们展示着自己的歌喉，那声音真好听，仿佛在说：“这里真美，这里真美！”
远处，不时传来赶牛的声音，牛儿在悠闲自在地吃草，享受着自己的幸福时光。赶牛的人，他们的外表虽然简朴，但心灵却是美的。
乡村这一带虽然朴实，但是，它并不比城市差。远在城市的我，希望再次重游乡村。
五年级译林版英语期末作文必考题【三】
在乡村里，一年四季都有说不完的美。
“春色满园关不住，一枝红杏出墙来”春天是百花盛开的季节。看！穿着金色的迎春花时尚，欢迎女孩期待已久的春天;桃粉色张开笑脸，山坡果园可能反映了红艳;像梨待嫁的新娘，充满了白色的面纱，在明媚的春天穿着。有勤劳的农民伯伯会种田地，分布在种子，农民伯伯还种植......真是“小村闲人四月，养蚕前，插入域”啊！
夏天是树木茂盛的季节..此时，最美丽的荷花盛开，就像一个亭亭玉立的姑娘，真是“第二天荷叶无限翠绿，映出荷花不一样的红色”啊！很多小朋友都喜欢小鱼，有的在小池塘里玩，有的在自家院子里的树边凉快的看书津津有味..
秋天不仅是很酷，但也是一个收获的季节。农民伯伯微笑每个人的脸上。当秋风吹过，秋天的金黄的树叶承受的访问，有很多树木开始飘落下来，就像在空气中一只美丽的蝴蝶翩翩起舞。什么！真是“停车枫林坐爱晚，霜叶红于二月花”！
冬天是一个赛季的漫天大雪。一个美丽的花儿朵朵已经枯萎了，只有盛开在雪地里绽放，是“分支角落梅，凌寒独自开的数量。离开知不是雪，为有暗香”。一片雪花在空中飞舞，到披上了洁白的地毯大地。这些雪花真像一个顽皮的孩子，一些在海豚松，长满白色的外衣，这些“卫士”的威风。
什么！多么美丽的乡村季节啊！
