西宁英语中考作文【一】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
西宁英语中考作文【二】
太好了!今天，我们五(2班和五(1班要代表全校去一小参观科技馆。
一路上，我们兴致勃勃，不一会就到了一小，我放眼望去，啊，人可真多呀!有二小的，马中的，还有职高的……都被邀请来参观科技馆，不一会儿，活动就开始了，一共有六个议程，前面五个都是讲话，最后一个才是参观，等呀等，终于等到最后一个议程了!我们走进了科技馆，呈现在眼前的有好多种游戏，我记得最深的两个就是“无皮鼓”和“无旋竖琴”了，一开始，我还不知道什么是“无皮鼓”见有个启动按钮，就按了一下，在无皮鼓没有皮的那个地方敲了一下，就听见“咚”的一声，怎么回事?我想着，目光慢慢地从无皮鼓移到上面的牌子里，原来，这“无皮鼓”虽然有一面没有皮，但是科员人员用红外线给代替了，所以，才会发出声音，另一个“无旋竖琴”也是利用了这个原理，才能使空旷的轮廓里有“隐形”的旋，所以，用手在空旷处一抹，就会发出各种好听的声音。
参观了不久，我们要回学校了，我边走边望着那高大的科技馆，心中充满了依依不舍，我多想再玩一会呀!回到了学校，我望着高挂在天空中的太阳，心想：这可真是特别的一天，一个跨越新世纪的一天!科学带给了我们种种方便，参观了科技馆，使我学到了许多，让我发现了科学的神奇和人类的伟大，我要好好学习，长大后也用科学去创造更多为人类有用的科学仪器，这真是一堂别开生面的科学课呀!
我似乎已经感觉到了，新鲜的空气就在前头。来吧，让我们好好学习，招手迎接未来吧!( 仪
西宁英语中考作文【三】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
西宁英语中考作文【四】
夏秋季节，当青藏高原的群山和辽阔的草原披上绿装的时候，我和爸爸、妈妈来到了让我向往已久的地方——西宁。
在兰州，我见过了滚滚的黄河水，自西向东，奔流不息，而在贵德，让我见识了“天下黄河贵德清”的由来，在贵德，原来也能看见清清的黄河水！
青海湖又名“库库淖尔”，是蒙语“青色的海”的意思，它位于青海省东北部的青海湖盆地内，是
另外，我们还去了被称为
最后，我们还去了塔尔寺和美丽的坎布拉。这次旅行，让我游览了祖国美丽的河山，还使我懂得了保护环境的重要。
西宁英语中考作文【五】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
西宁英语中考作文【六】
This is my first week in ** Senior Middle School.Everything here is new for me.Our school is an old school but it`s very beautiful.I have 50 new classmates in my class.They`re all very excellent, I think, and I felt a little sad.Because I`m too common.But come to think of it,it`s a very good thing.I believe I can also be very excellent if I study with such excellent classmates.I didn`t know why Ms *** chose me to be the committee of study.But I know it`s a good chance for me to raise my ability.All I can do is do my best in the future.I am sure that Ms *** and my classmates can help me when I do something wrong. Because they`re all very kind.It`s a pleasure to work and study with them.I`m really very happy.I`m not an outstanding student in this class,but I can do the same thing like others.I believe I won`t make anyone disappointed.
