21年长沙中考英语优秀作文【一】
咸咸的海风，金黄的沙滩，蔚蓝的海水，无不展示着创世神对美的见解，这里便是我最喜欢的海滨景区——小梅沙。虽然这里并未有传说中的椰林树影，但是仔细玩味，你就会发现小梅沙与众不同的美。
清晨的小梅沙，有一种静谧的美。我早早起床来到这里。虽然是清晨，但这里丝毫不平静。层层叠叠的水波，前推后涌地形成巨浪，在跃到最高处的一刹那，便凌空盛开出一朵朵白花。海水溅在沙滩上，发出清脆响亮的声音。阵阵海风带着大海独有的清新与湿润，把游人旅途中的疲惫吹得一干二净。在这里，耳边是自然的天籁之音，脚下是细软如棉的黄沙，沐浴在如母亲手掌般温暖的阳光下，惬意极了。
转眼到了下午，小梅沙逐渐呈现出一种热闹的美。金黄的沙滩上人山人海。有的在堆着堡垒，有的在玩“大埋活人”……海面上也是热闹非凡。滔天白浪从天际滚滚而来，由远而近，越近越高，越高越响，犹如千军万马一般的巨响瞬间奔腾而至。海水冲刷着沙滩，冲刷去内心的烦躁。人们的欢呼声此起彼伏，欢乐的笑容洋溢在每个人的脸上。
天色渐晚，小梅沙自然和谐的美扑面而来。太阳将海水映得通红，仿佛给大海披上了一件薄薄的红纱衣。海面上闪耀着一串串五彩的花圈。在夕阳的照耀下，每个人的脸上都镀上了一层金色光芒。这一刻，天与海仿佛融为一体，分不清哪儿是天，哪儿是海。这真是天中有海，海中有天。在那个瞬间，我突然感觉自己就是大自然的一个分子。
小梅沙那无与伦比的美，已经深深刻在我的心中。
21年长沙中考英语优秀作文【二】
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第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
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第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
21年长沙中考英语优秀作文【三】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
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The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
21年长沙中考英语优秀作文【四】
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第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
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第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
21年长沙中考英语优秀作文【五】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
21年长沙中考英语优秀作文【六】
神仙居的水真清呀！不大的湖面，却“装”满了水。这水犹如一面未经磨拭的镜子，把陆地，天上，水里的景物照的一片光亮。你瞧！这碧绿的山，这蔚蓝的天，这五彩斑斓的鱼……在神仙居里的水的照耀下变得更加光彩夺目。
神仙居的水真秀呀！五彩斑斓的鱼在湖中来回穿梭，红的、蓝的`、黄的、绿的、紫的……真是各式各样，好似一朵朵争奇斗艳的花朵。棕黑色的鹅卵石也在小鱼的衬托下，显得洁白纯净。再加上旁边五彩缤纷的花花草草和高大挺拔的大树，真是美不胜收！
神仙居的山真绿呀！山上栽着许许多多的树，爬到山的最顶端望下看，一条弯弯曲曲的小路像条龙似的绕在山丘上。晚上，一片片绿色的叶子在晚风中飘溢，回荡。让人仿佛身临其境！
但我最喜欢的而是神仙居里的奇峰。
神仙居里的奇峰类型众多，姿态各异。有的像只毛笔高耸入云，想要把天顶破；有的如一只乌龟，站在悬崖上凝视远方，好似在思念家乡的亲人；有的像只老鹰，舒展双翅，准备翩翩起舞，似乎是想展示展示自己的本领；还有的……这些奇峰不仅表现出大自然中的无穷奥妙，还展示出了我国人民的智慧在闪现出耀眼的火花！
这次仙居之行，让我真正的明白了“人在画图中”的含义。哦，亲爱的神仙居，神仙居！
