亲爱的消费者:
进入21世纪,网络成了人们生活必不可少的一部分,我当然也不例外。一个周末,我经过妈妈的允许,我打开了电脑。我先挂上QQ,再打开“千千静听”,听起了音乐。就在这时,一个网名叫“狂野飞人”的玩家向我发来信息,邀请我和他一起玩QQ堂,我接受了邀请。游戏一开始,便进入了“白热化”状态,“狂野飞人”非常勇猛,一上场就接连放泡泡向我进攻,企图将我炸得“面目全飞”。我呢,凭借着自己的灵敏,一次又一次快速地躲过了他的泡泡阵。“狂野飞人”不甘心失败,又一次向我发起了进攻,可没想到被我炸了个“粉身碎骨”。就这样,我得了1分。
第二局开始了,“狂野飞人”显然有些气愤,他暗自打开一个游戏挂,启动了作弊系统。我感到事出蹊跷:“狂野飞人”的泡泡多得用不完,在我旁边放了一排又一排泡泡,令我躲闪不及。更令我惊奇的是:即使再多的泡泡炸到他,他也安然无恙。“狂野飞人”的得分直线上升。眼看就要输了,豆大的汗珠不住往外冒。突然,在电脑左下方的系统提示告诉我:如若发现任何玩家有作弊行为,可以在官方网站上投诉该玩家。于是,我打开官方网站投诉了这位名为“狂野飞人”的玩家。
网管立刻使用了扫描系统,制止了他的作弊行为。一场真正依靠实力的游戏拉开了帷幕。这次网络奇遇,使我懂得:网络时代,诚信与实力同等重要!
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亲爱的消费者:
生活如酒,或芳香,或浓烈,或馥郁,因为诚实,它变得醇厚;生活如歌,或高昂,或悲戚,或低沉,因为守信,它变得悦耳;生活如画,或明朗,或黯淡,或素雅,因为诚信它变得美丽。诚信是一种美德、一种品质,为我们中华民族世代所信奉,从古至今,诚信问题历来都是非常重要的。尤其是现代高科技术的快速发展,诚信问题在网络时代的今天也尤为重要。
近年来,随着高新技术的日新月异,互联网的迅猛发展,对社会经济生活产生了深刻影响,为企业提升了形象,为推广产品提供了新的平台。从李总理赞赏泉州网络平台建设,指出“互联网”未知远大于已知,未来空间无限,到冒雨参观浙江义乌青岩村,肯定了该村的网络经营在虚拟空间服务实体经济,开拓巨大的市场空间,不愧是“网店第一村”!总理的高度评价,足以证明了“互联网”的高速发展对我国的社会经济运行体系起到了“鸣锣击鼓”的作用。
纵观互联网给人们的生产生活带来巨大便利的同时,网络虚假信息的发布与急速传播,电子商务的欺骗问题都增加了社会与经济建设运行的成本。无论是冒充温州动车事故发布虚假信息骗取捐款,还是淘宝知名网店虚假宣传以次充好,无论是微信发布的造谣诽谤、蛊惑人心的谣言,还是“网络水军”、“删帖公司”的非法行为,凡此种种,网络失信的社会后果是严重的,将会给社会、企业和个人增加很多的额外成本。网络传递信息方便快捷,受众广泛,一经发布流传,其负面影响很难消除,会影响社会的稳定运行,增加社会的管理成本。
打击非法网络宣传,需要全社会的共同参与和数亿网民的监督,立足当前,着眼长远,抓好基础管理和源头治理,把集中整治行动和加强日常监管结合起来,创造互联网的良好氛围,通过行业自律和法制保障,为我国互联网的持续健康发展提供内在的动力和切实保障。
国无信不兴,人无信不立,市无信不旺,商无信不发。让我们共同行动起来,抓住网络诚信建设的关键,使网络诚实守信成为全社会共同的价值追求和行为准则,为经济社会的发展奠定良好的道德基础,为全面建成规范有序、文明诚信的网络环境,实现中华民族伟大复兴的中国梦提供强有力的支撑。
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古人云:“人无信不立。”
人生是复杂的,道理却是简单的。一句话,能够受用一辈子。虽然我们还只是一个小学生,也同样要讲求诚信,否则,将来就很难在社会上立足。
一天放学时一个同学向我借一元钱。我知道他常借钱不还,所以很不乐意借给他。但怕他没钱回不了家,我还是借给他了。过了几天,他丝毫没有还钱的意思,我就主动提醒他还钱。他一边说“好的好的”,一边让我把手伸出来。他猛地在我手上打了一巴掌转身跑了。唉,他得到了一元钱,丢掉的却是最珍贵的东西----诚信。
有一次,我和老爸去奶奶家。车上人多,我们从前门挤上了车。售票员一直没有过来,老爸也一直没有买票。我心想,老爸可是个很守信的人,难道今天也要坐“霸王车”?车要到站了,老爸才拉着我慢慢挤到中门。他伸手买了两张票领着我下车了。哦,我长嘘了一口气。
就个人来说,诚信是一生中最珍贵的东西之一,如同生命。就一个企业来说,诚信是财富的源泉。世界上许多大型企业之所以成为大型知名企业,你不难看出他们都有一个共同特点,那就是非常地讲求诚信。风靡一时的'“锅王胡师傅”为什么“炒” 糊了自己,就是因为他背弃了这两个最重要的字。
以诚实守信为荣,以见利忘义为耻。只有全体民众都讲求诚信,民族才能立足于世界之林,国家才能和谐富强!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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