“你这只懒虫,看你睡到什么时候了?”“哎,这一觉睡得可真久呀!”他们围着我又说又笑。我一看日历,心中一惊,今天是20XX年的3月28日了!而且还是我十岁的生日。怎么回事?原来我和伙伴们不小心呼吸了从太空飘散下来的花粉,竟都沉睡了七十多年。我从床上蹦起来,决定和小伙伴们出去遛一遛。
我从小泥猪里拿出零花钱,当然这还是半个多世纪以前的呢。我想,时过境迁,这些钱成了古币,不知道还能不能流通呢。我们来到古董店。古董店的老板看见我们递过来的钱,惊得直吐舌头:“你们这些钱是从哪儿来的`呀!现在,世界上仅存几张呀!”于是,我们把这些钱换给了这位老板,得到了一大笔钱。
我们买了一台车。这台车比卡丁车大一点,不仅操作便捷,而且安全性能极好,是专为小孩子设计的。我们坐上车,兴冲冲地来到一家宠物店。只见里面好是热闹,传说中的飞马、天龙、凤凰等等都有。我们挑了一匹飞马,一条天龙。接着又来到了武器店,买了一些古代打仗用的剑、盾、长矛之类的东西。
到中午了,我们的肚子都唱起了“空城计”。我和伙伴们来到一家蛋糕店,因为今天是我的生日呀。这里有最新发明的楼层蛋糕,设计人员把我们引到电脑前,让我们自己设计蛋糕的楼层和内部结构。我们一不做,二不休,设计出了一座蛋糕别墅。蛋糕店的人连忙把我们的设计存盘,说我们的设计是最有创意的,他们将会做出一个标志性的蛋糕,以展示他们店最高的水平。并且,我们的蛋糕别墅完全免费!以表示对我们创意的嘉奖和谢意。“哦!”我和伙伴们欢呼起来,把头上的帽子摘了丢来抛去。
我和伙伴们成了十足的“蛋糕寄生虫”,在蛋糕别墅里边吃边玩,还觉得不过瘾,我们又搬来了一台电脑,这台电脑是多维数码全息电脑。我们兴致勃勃地进入游戏区,用手点了一下按钮,忽然什么也看不见了,我们来到了游戏区里。一切都和真的一样,一切就像梦幻一样神奇。我们成了身穿铠甲的勇士,和一群稀奇古怪的外星人搏斗。可不一会儿,他们就把我们这些全没的外行抛了出去。我们只好灰溜溜地滚出电脑。哎,真是不幸。
正沮丧间,忽然听说有一群不明来历的人到了地球,向我们地球人挑战。这还得了!我和伙伴们二话不说,就拿着长矛、盾牌、宝剑,骑着飞马、飞龙去了。那些人是驾着最新的宇宙交通工具来的,不过都戴着面具,看不清模样,个头和我们差不多。他们看见我们的武器都哈哈大笑。他们的头儿说:“咱们先礼后兵,如果我们出的题你们做出来了,我们就不发起战争,如果做不出——”他把手臂举起来,只见上面全是机关,看来藏着非常厉害的武器。我气冲斗牛,说:“来吧!看你们有什么高招!”
那个头儿说:“一个两位数,十位数是个位的两倍,将个位与十位的数字调换,得到新的两位数,这两个两位数的和为132,求这个两位数。”我仰头大笑:“太简单啦,得84!”那些人凑在一块儿商量起来,大概是在验算吧。我心里又是一阵暗笑。
过了一会儿,他们说:“好,算你有种,再出一题。”那个头儿把手一挥,只见地上出现了五个农夫,有四个农夫脸上分别有“大、小、无、食”四个字。他指着最后那个农夫说:“你给这个农夫画张脸吧。”我还没说话,一个最会画画的小伙伴就冒冒失失地跑上去,给这个农夫画起了眼睛……我急坏了,连忙跑上前,抢过笔,在这个农夫脸上写了一个大大的“中”字。那个头儿忙问为什么,我说:“这还不简单吗?把这五个农夫想成五个手指,不就差个‘中’字吗?”那个头儿大叫佩服,伙伴们都为我鼓掌。
那个头儿一定要我和他交朋友。原来,他们是外星上的小朋友,因为老师要他们学习地球人的课程,他们做不出,没办法才到我们地球上来讨教的。我笑着拍拍他的肩,语重心长地说:“好样的,以后多动动脑子,少来点武力。有什么难题,尽管再来找我吧!”
望着他们远去的身影,我的豪情还在心中激荡。此时天色渐晚,夕阳西照,我觉得20XX年的地球好美,好美……
镰刀斧头的旗帜似曾相识,但今日招展在加尔各答的贫民窟里,总觉着带有几分噱闹和滑稽。
在全球一体化的21世纪,不知是经典的革命误导了善良民众?还是贱民们的\'善良亵渎了神圣的革命?也许今天不兴暴力解放,应该推崇议会斗争。也许天下的无产者们要有足够的定力和体力,一俟资本家在毁灭性的经济危机中掘完了他们的坟墓,美好的大同社会才会姗姗到来。也许经过小康中康大康的万年煎熬后,才有彻底消灭私有制的全民安康。也许觉悟的老板和忏悔的穷鬼们,终于不计前嫌,握手言欢,为拯救高温下日益变暖的地球,一同商讨如何开创伟大的低碳生活,合屋抱暖,共渡时艰。也许还有更好的社会模式有待张克思、王克思们发现,以飨人类的美好未来。也许井蛙思云外,杞人忧天倾,这一切都不过然是一厢情愿的的枉然。也许复也许,也许何其多,而今赋也许,只为革命歌。
呜呼!亏了这辈子没投胎在加尔各答。
其实,俺只是个胸鸣虫鸟的遛远闲客,偶然路经此地,既无救人于水火的回天之力,也没有看同类受苦受难的“嗜痂之癖”。只是觉得浑身上下沾满了黏糊糊的臭汗,恨不得插翅高飞,飞离加尔各答的火狱,飞越广袤浩阔的塔尔沙漠,飞到清波送爽的恒河边,向瓦列纳西的大神们,问一声好。
为了不耽误取行李上路,匆匆告别“加尔各答的革命阵营”后,连名闻遐迩的维多利亚纪念馆都没来得及拜访,便抽身返回了火车站。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
写与痴情的朋友,并为他(她祝福
喜欢的人不喜欢你,喜欢你的人你不喜欢所谓的世俗就是这样谁为谁动情谁不把谁当真谁为谁一直努力付出谁又对谁不屑一顾!忘了那无止尽的孤单承受着夜的安抚!刻意的假装不在乎。某些事情来的太仓促!有些人错过再也无法弥补!剩下的回忆当赌!真的累了真的疲惫了一次不小心的眼神而却深陷其中无法自拔那一次的相遇也许是一个误会、却天真的以为那是上天给的`机会;让这一次能够完美不顾一切的转身就让我破灭一种很莫名其妙的感觉,一句话分手可以让原本无交集的两个人。平行线的交叉过了也就再也无法续集。放弃代表着什么只能是自己明白爱已决绝为何还给那么点希望还是因为心中那一个莫名其妙的自私作祟!一年两年直到三年最后的结局呢?始料未及的一句对不起就此划下句点彼此留给彼此就是那残破不堪的回忆!回忆是你们唯一的纪念品了!只是倾尽一生或许唯一能做到的只是淡忘!遗忘!是要付出多大的代价又有谁能明了现在的我能明白快乐永远抵挡不了那痛彻心扉的悲伤永远转身遇见悲伤!也许一首歌会让你淡忘但是代价是余生。可是我能做什么最多也只能是祝福。
尾语
长大了也许就意味着要学会所有的所有相识相遇相知然后接受着分离这是必经之路没人会永远的陪着谁谁说离开是为了下一次相遇谁说等待不是件痛苦的追寻可我为什么在这里碎碎语!眼泪湿了枕头不被人看见我的所有只有夜知道我的难过我懂得让难过升华却不懂如何将它淡化。云的方向风知道,我的感想又有谁明了?最后眼泪知道!我只想逃逃到不属于我的所有不知道。
什么还在眷恋还是为了你们的好。从此我不得不学会勇敢。
谋臣艾子上前问道:“不知大王有何打算?”
齐王说:“我要抽调大批壮丁,沿国境线修起一道长长的城墙。这道城墙东起大海,西经太行,连起轘辕山,接上武关,绵延4000里,同各个强国隔绝开来。从此,秦国无法窥伺我西部,楚国难以威胁我南边,韩国、魏国不敢牵制我左右。你们说,这不是一件很伟大、很有价值的事吗?”
艾子说:“大王,这样大的工程,百姓们能承受得了吗?”
齐王说:“是的,百姓筑城的确要吃很多苦头,但这样做能从此减少战争带来的灾难,这一劳永逸的事,谁会不拥护呢?”
艾子沉吟片刻,认真而恳切地对齐王说:“昨天一大早,天下起了大雪,我在赶赴早朝的途中,看见道旁躺着一个人,他光着身子,都快要冻僵了,却仰望着老天唱赞歌。我十分奇怪,便问他为什么这样做,他回答说:‘老天爷这场雪下得真好啊,可以料到明年麦子大丰收,人们可以吃到廉价的.麦子了。可是,明年却离我太遥远,眼下我就要被冻死了!’大王,臣以为,这件事正像您今天说的筑城墙,老百姓眼下正生活得朝不保夕,哪能奢望将来有什么大福呢?他们还不知道能不能等到修好城墙的那一天,享受永逸的将会是什么人呢!”
齐王无言以对。
所以我们在想问题、做计划时,一定要从实际出发,既要考虑将来,也要顾及当前,统筹兼顾,切实可行。否则,再美好的打算也只能流于幻想。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
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