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第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
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第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
您好!
您知道吗?每当我走过语音室时,总会透过明净的玻璃窗去看看里面的设备,语音室里的一切对于我来说都是那么新奇,那么吸引人。跟着您,在高科技设备装配的语音室里学英语,是我当时最大的愿望。可是,自语音室建好以来,您从未带同学们进去参观过,更没带同学们进去上过一节课,这使得我的愿望变得那样渺茫。
王老师,记得您每次在我们教室里上课时,起码有三分之一的同学在小声说笑,因此,教室里总是乱哄哄的`,可您却很少制止。王老师,维持课堂秩序是您的职责呀,您为什么不去制止他们?还有,您每次提问学生时,一旦同学回答不上来,您总会露出一副不耐烦的神情,为此,许多同学感到很伤心,好多同学也不喜欢上您的课。
王老师,学校培育了我五年,我希望学校越办越好,希望老师能教得开心,我们也能学得开心。因此,我诚心诚意地给您提几条建议,希望您能采纳。
一、每周带同学们到语音室上一次英语课。
二、您不要不管那些上课小声说笑的同学。作为一名教师,您有责任对他们进行批评和教育。
三、今后,请您对那些回答不上问题的同学多一些宽容和理解,并耐心地讲解,这些同学会非常感激您的,他们也会越来越喜欢您的。
王老师,如果您能采纳我的建议,我将十分开心。我坚信您一定会成为我们心中的好老师!
祝您工作顺利!
您的学生:张辉君
3月26日
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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
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第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
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第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
有些事随着时间的流逝被淡忘,有些事无论时间怎样推移都无法忘记。那是四年级上学期发生在学校的一件事,却让我记忆犹新,至今难忘。
新学期来到了,又要调座位了,大家都兴奋不已,都在讨论自己会调到那个位置。我也不例外,自己想着会坐到哪一组,前边还是后边?没等我想完,上课铃就响了起来。苏老师走了进来,说:”要调座位了,方法和以前一样。“大家个个兴奋极了,脸上挂着笑容。只有张家南低着头,像在想什么事。只见他跑到苏老师面前,说了些什么。苏老师点点头,然后对同学们说: ”张家南同学的眼睛不好,想坐在前面,谁愿意和张家南换一下座位?“在张家南和苏老师说话的时间里,同学们已经换好了座位,苏老师的这番话犹如平静的湖水投入一枚石子,大家开始议论纷纷。我心里盘算着:我坐在中间第三排这么好的位置,两边又是好朋友,干吗要和张家南换位呢?可是他坐那里又看不见!那多影响学习呀!我心里就像恶魔和天使在做斗争,终于,愿意的思想占据了我的'大脑。我看了一遍教室,已经有好些人举起了手。我也果断地举起手。慢慢地,竟然全班都举起了手。苏老师看着一双双举起的小手,欣慰地笑了。张家南也感激地看着大家。最后,苏老师选了第一个举手的李正宏。张家南做到新位子上,开心地笑了。
这件事虽然小,但见证了集体的温暖。如果可以重新来一次,我一定是第一个举手的!
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
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第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
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第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
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