我有一个套娃娃,放在我家玻璃橱柜里,因为她是红色的,所以在橱窗中她显得十分明显。这个套娃娃是我爸爸去五台山时买回来的,十分可爱,我很喜欢她。
这个套娃娃是由四个小娃娃组成的,第一个娃娃是最大的,她里面包着三个小娃娃,在不打开她的时候,她每时每刻都保护着里面的小娃娃,就算摔到了地上也只有她自己会受伤,而里面的三个小娃娃缺安然无恙。这个大娃娃就像母亲一样保护着自己的孩子,多么伟大呀!接着就是被套在里面的第二个娃娃,她是所有娃娃中最漂亮的,一双浓浓的眉毛、一双水汪汪的大眼睛、一个小巧玲珑的鼻子和一个笑开了花的小嘴,使她看起来惟妙惟肖,真是让人爱不释手。第三个娃娃的身材刚好可以把我的笔装进去,如果把她的上身和下身合起来,就可以当一个精美的铅笔盒,如果只用她的下身就可以当我的铅笔筒了,这样看上去既漂亮,携带又方便,多实用呀!第四个娃娃是最小的一个娃娃,她的身体中间画着一朵小梅花,两个水灵水气的小眼睛好像总是在看着你,显得十分俏皮,在她的身外还抱着一块襁褓花布,真是好可爱呦!
每当朋友们到我家来玩,我都会把这个套娃娃拿给他们玩,看着她们羡慕的眼光,我的心里真是比吃了蜜还甜!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
秋风瑟瑟,我的手经常被冻得通红,妈妈贴心地为我做了一双手套。我爱不释手,但总觉得少了点什么,于是,我在白色的手套上画起了娃娃。
这个娃娃穿着嫩粉色的连衣裙,剪着整齐的刘海,乌黑的长发随风飘荡,背后长出了一双雪白的小翅膀,头上还顶着个光环。呵,真像个小天使!一个也未免太孤单了点吧,于是我又在另一个手套上画了一个娃娃。这一次是个暗黑系的娃娃:黑色的裙子,深粉色的短发,长长的尾巴,尖尖的牙齿,还有一对暗红色的翅膀。哈,小恶魔!我更喜欢这双手套了,整天带着它。
一天,我正在写数学作业,遇到了一道很难的计算题,我算得焦头烂额就想去摸计算器。忽然,一缕白烟飘过来,小天使眨了眨眼睛,跳到了写字台上:“住手!不能不劳而获,还是列个竖式计算一下吧。”我愣了一下,觉得她的话有道理,便将手伸向了草稿本。这时,又一缕黑烟飘过,小恶魔也跳到写字台上:“不!不要听她的,计算器又快又准确,还是用计算器吧!”我还没反应过来,小天使又说话了:“不行不行,照你这样说的话,做作业就没意义了!”“怎么没意义?得个100分,大家都高兴!”“这样的100分也是假的,没有真本事!”“哼……”我一拍桌子,大吼一声:“你们俩个能不能别吵了!”小天使和小恶魔愣了一下,异口同声地说:“不能!”接下来她俩大打出手,一会一块橡皮飞过来,一会又是一个纸团飞过去。混战中,一支黑笔向我飞来……
“啊!”我的头重重地磕到了写字台上,我不确定这是不是一场梦,因为我发现我的脸上的确有一团墨汁。
今天下午,我和表弟表妹还有小姨去遂昌玩。小姨让我们去车站附近玩,她先去办事,说要过会儿再带我们回家去。
我们把表妹带去玩沙,说是沙其实不算是沙,只是颜色跟沙有些相似,而样子却像米粒一样。然后,我们就去套娃娃了。
哇,好多可爱的陶泥娃娃。我赶紧问了价钱,拿来小圆圈,开始套娃娃。我最喜欢的是第一排的小娃娃,可站着套下去,小圆圈是会弹起来的。老板是位已经上了年纪的老人,他很宽容,见我那么喜欢陶泥娃娃,就温和地对我说:“小朋友,你可以蹲下来套娃娃。” “真的可以吗?我也要来试一试手气!”表弟高兴的大声叫道。就这样,不过短短的几分钟,第一排的陶泥娃娃就被我们给套完了。我们可高兴了。于是,我们将这些“战利品”拿到正在玩沙的表妹旁,表妹见了便忙着来到我们这儿来讨,真是淘气呀。
我套来的这些陶泥娃娃中,要数穿绿色毛衣的小男孩最好看:头上戴绿帽,身穿绿色大毛衣,手中抱着一只大花猫,他和大花猫似乎玩得非常开心,大花猫都快爬上他的他脸了,小男孩的笑容还是那么的灿烂。还有一个娃娃的样子非常像我们课文中认识到的闰土,淡红色的帽子,深绿色的衣裳,不仔仔细细地看一番,还真以为这就是闰土陶泥娃娃呢。因为只有一个地方跟闰土不一样,就是闰土有银项圈,而他没有。
怎么样?这些套来的小不点是不是应该好好珍藏起来呢?
您好!
您知道吗?每当我走过语音室时,总会透过明净的玻璃窗去看看里面的设备,语音室里的一切对于我来说都是那么新奇,那么吸引人。跟着您,在高科技设备装配的语音室里学英语,是我当时最大的愿望。可是,自语音室建好以来,您从未带同学们进去参观过,更没带同学们进去上过一节课,这使得我的愿望变得那样渺茫。
王老师,记得您每次在我们教室里上课时,起码有三分之一的同学在小声说笑,因此,教室里总是乱哄哄的`,可您却很少制止。王老师,维持课堂秩序是您的职责呀,您为什么不去制止他们?还有,您每次提问学生时,一旦同学回答不上来,您总会露出一副不耐烦的神情,为此,许多同学感到很伤心,好多同学也不喜欢上您的课。
王老师,学校培育了我五年,我希望学校越办越好,希望老师能教得开心,我们也能学得开心。因此,我诚心诚意地给您提几条建议,希望您能采纳。
一、每周带同学们到语音室上一次英语课。
二、您不要不管那些上课小声说笑的同学。作为一名教师,您有责任对他们进行批评和教育。
三、今后,请您对那些回答不上问题的同学多一些宽容和理解,并耐心地讲解,这些同学会非常感激您的,他们也会越来越喜欢您的。
王老师,如果您能采纳我的建议,我将十分开心。我坚信您一定会成为我们心中的好老师!
祝您工作顺利!
您的学生:张辉君
3月26日
我有一个套娃娃,放在我家玻璃橱柜里,因为她是红色的,所以在橱窗中她显得十分明显。这个套娃娃是我爸爸去五台山时买回来的,十分可爱,我很喜欢她。
这个套娃娃是由四个小娃娃组成的,第一个娃娃是最大的,她里面包着三个小娃娃,在不打开她的时候,她每时每刻都保护着里面的小娃娃,就算摔到了地上也只有她自己会受伤,而里面的三个小娃娃缺安然无恙。这个大娃娃就像母亲一样保护着自己的孩子,多么伟大呀!接着就是被套在里面的第二个娃娃,她是所有娃娃中最漂亮的,一双浓浓的眉毛、一双水汪汪的大眼睛、一个小巧玲珑的'鼻子和一个笑开了花的小嘴,使她看起来惟妙惟肖,真是让人爱不释手。第三个娃娃的身材刚好可以把我的笔装进去,如果把她的上身和下身合起来,就可以当一个精美的铅笔盒,如果只用她的下身就可以当我的铅笔筒了,这样看上去既漂亮,携带又方便,多实用呀!第四个娃娃是最小的一个娃娃,她的身体中间画着一朵小梅花,两个水灵水气的小眼睛好像总是在看着你,显得十分俏皮,在她的身外还抱着一块襁褓花布,真是好可爱呦!
每当朋友们到我家来玩,我都会把这个套娃娃拿给他们玩,看着她们羡慕的眼光,我的心里真是比吃了蜜还甜!
这个套娃娃是由四个小娃娃组成的,第一个娃娃是最大的,她里面包着三个小娃娃,在不打开她的时候,她每时每刻都保护着里面的小娃娃,就算摔到了地上也只有她自己会受伤,而里面的三个小娃娃缺安然无恙。这个大娃娃就像母亲一样保护着自己的孩子,多么伟大呀!接着就是被套在里面的第二个娃娃,她是所有娃娃中最漂亮的,一双浓浓的眉毛、一双水汪汪的大眼睛、一个小巧玲珑的鼻子和一个笑开了花的小嘴,使她看起来惟妙惟肖,真是让人爱不释手》。第三个娃娃的身材刚好可以把我的`笔装进去,如果把她的上身和下身合起来,就可以当一个精美的铅笔盒,如果只用她的下身就可以当我的铅笔筒了,这样看上去既漂亮,携带又方便,多实用呀!第四个娃娃是最小的一个娃娃,她的身体中间画着一朵小梅花,两个水灵水气的小眼睛好像总是在看着你,显得十分俏皮,在她的身外还抱着一块襁褓花布,真是好可爱呦!
每当朋友们到我家来玩,我都会把这个套娃娃拿给他们玩,看着她们羡慕的眼光,我的心里真是比吃了蜜还甜!
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
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