xxx同学:
你好!
转眼间,我们都已经五年级了,在这五年里,你我之间的友谊已经天长地久了。今天借这封信,让我们一起回顾一下你我的友谊之路吧!自从踏入小学的大门,我们就成了形影不离的好朋友。课堂上,我们一起学习,吸收知识;课间,我们俩总是有聊不完的话;中午,你还常常帮我打扫包干区;到了周末,我们还一起做道具,一起编剧本呢!
回想起这些快乐的点点滴滴,我真的很感谢,感谢你给我的小学生活带来那么多的色彩和欢笑。我还记得有一次上体育课的时候,何老师叫我们练习一边跑步一边拍球,因为天刚刚下过雨,草地上又湿又滑。轮到你拍球的时候,我不知道你是滑了一跤,还是腿发抖了,总之你重重地摔在了地上,我赶紧跑过去一看,不由地尖叫一声,因为我看到你膝盖上的一整块皮都掉了,我心里知道这样会非常痛,但你却没有哭,就连一滴眼泪都没有落下来,而是自己站了起来,依靠着同学,一步一步地走向医务室。当时我惊呆了,呆呆的站在原地,望着你的背影我不知所措。如今回想起这件事情我都替你的伤而伤心,从中我也体味到了你的坚强、勇敢。在此,我还想请你改正一个小小的缺点,就是书写要更端正一些,俗话说:“字如其人”,不认识你的人,他们就通过你的字就能大概知道你的人是怎么样的,如果你把字学端正了,那你整个人就更完美了。
最后,愿我们的友谊地久天长!
祝学校进步,身体健康!
此致
敬礼!
xxx
20xx年xx月xx日
王鹏同学:
你好!
听说你在新学期的班长竞选中失败了,所以我特来安慰你。
王鹏你有没有听说过一些古语?如:失败乃成功之母等,连歌中也这样唱到:若不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹!这些古语和歌词都是让大家知道,失败后不要气馁,成功后也不要骄傲。你也是一样的,你不经历失败,怎么能见到成功呢?我国著名的生物学家童第周,也是经历过无数次挫折,才成为一代名人!
他小时候也曾经考过倒数第一的差分,但是他没有气馁,以加倍的努力,比别人多用几个小时去学习,结果竟然考了100分,后来他的成绩总是名列前茅,还完成了高难度的青蛙卵剥离手术,让生物界的人对他刮目相看。正如著名的科学家爱迪生所说:成功是:上天赐给百分之一的灵感,加上自己百分之九十九的汗水。所以说,你不要为了失败而气馁,要战胜失败,只有战胜痛苦的失败,才能得到成功喜悦的回报。
我希望你可以相信我的话,战胜困难,让它成为你的手下败将!
祝你学习更上一层楼,下学期,我希望你还可以成为班长!
此致
敬礼!
xxx
20xx年xx月xx日
亲爱的同学们:
你们可好?
临近期末考试和第二次月考,这正是振奋人心的时刻。大家无不认真复习,奋笔疾书,做这学期的最后一次冲刺。可是你们却一个又一个病倒在家,我为你们捏了一把汗,担心着明天,又接到一个家长请假的消息,又看见一份医院证明,又看见一名同学上课期间背书包匆匆前往医院……每天早晨,看见同桌写晨报,看着他写下一串串请假名单时,心就发颤。看着空荡荡的教室,变了很多也少了很多,少了一个个高举的手臂,少了一声声嘹亮的读书声,少了一张张灿烂的笑脸,我恨不得让病魔马上集中在我的身上。
大家为你们祈祷——我在QQ上慰问你们,告诉你们所学知识;各任课老师都在为我们加油鼓劲;就连外班同学也说七四班可以再登峰顶。这一声声善意的提醒,一句句亲切的问候与叮咛,在时时刻刻的激励我们尽自己最大力量学习。你们不要辜负大家的期望,要在家中边养病,边复习。咱石老师不说过么:“在班里的`同学要努力奋斗,上课专心听讲,等同学们回来了要看你们的笔记,在家中的同学要勤奋用功。”你们不会的,不懂的,不理解的,都可以问我,我会尽我最大努力来为你们讲解;来到学校,我依然可以为你们付出!
挺住,同学们!挺住,七四!期末考试——四班依然可以威风凛凛,一鸣惊人。
祝你们早日康复!
此致
敬礼!
xxx
20xx年xx月xx日
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
导入:
第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
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