寒假回忆英语作文中考【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
寒假回忆英语作文中考【二】
How time flies(时间过得真快,unconsciously(不知不觉地 the next winter vacation (寒假will soon come.In order to improve(提高 myself as well as enjoy a happy holiday,I made the winter vacation plan.
Firstly i want to continue with my study,i think study is a life process,so no matter what the situation I am in,i will look for chances to continue it.I have bought several new books ,including those books on my major(专业and some novels ,I will try to finish reading them in the holiday and write notes.
Secondly,since it is the holiday,I will share it with my family and friends .You know the spring festival will soon come, I believe I would chatting and play games with my friends and family .I think I will enjoy the vacation.
时间过得真快，不知不觉得下一个寒假就要到了，为了提高我自己同时快乐的度过假期，我制定了寒假计划。
首先，我会继续学习，我认为学习是一种终身的过程，所以不管我处在那种情况之下，我都会寻找机会学习。我已经买了一些新书，这些书有的跟我的专业有关，也包括一些小说。我将努力读完他们并写下。
其次，既然是放假，我将和我的家人朋友一起度过，你知道春节就要来临了，届时我会和我的家人朋友一起聊天啊，玩游戏啊
等等，我相信我定会度过一个快乐的假期。
寒假回忆英语作文中考【三】
那个晚上，老榕树落了一地的果子。我蹲下去想要拾一颗尝尝，却被父亲在手背上拍了一下，我的眼里流出了委屈的泪水。父亲后悔而爱怜地说：“孩子，这果不能吃。爸爸给你买能吃的。”说罢，他便把我抱上了秋千，轻轻地推了起来。秋千是每个孩子的梦想。我高兴地望着天空，笑个不停，想要乘着这小船，飞向月亮的小床。我回头望着父亲，望见他忽远忽近的脸庞，望见他那短短的胡茬；望见父亲的眼里有比月亮更皎洁的光芒。父亲就是那月亮的小床。噢，我沉浸在浓浓的父爱里！
那个星期日，我就睡在好朋友的身旁，嗅着她头发的幽香。她望着窗外的树影，眼里是望不见底的惆怅。“怎么办？我对爸妈撒了谎。”她轻轻地叹息。我把头枕在她的\'肩膀上，说道：“没关系，坦白吧。诚实就是对自己最好的原谅。”好朋友轻轻地抚摸我乌黑的长发，说道：“嗯，你要支持我噢。不管什么事，有你在，我就有勇气走下去。你是上帝派给我的天使。”听了这话，我心里久久不能平静，直到在她温热的气息中熟睡过去。噢，那幽幽的友情！
那个下午，我聆听蟋蟀的歌声，数着老师脸上那深深浅浅的皱纹。她讲的内容，我早就在八百里之外给丢了。我不敢请教，更不敢坦白。“我这样说，你明白了么？”老师问道。我连忙回过神，低头说道：“不明白，老师。”“那我再讲一次。”老师轻声地说。我吃惊地抬起头，本以为老师会斥责我。我在她的脸上找不到一丝的不耐烦。伴随着放学铃声响起，老师的声音已经有些沙哑。我多么希望这个下午没有尽头，尽管太阳已经落山，尽管蟋蟀奏起了大合唱。噢，那纯纯的师生情！
往事如清茗，如山花，当它变成了过去，留给人的却是无尽的遐想和美好的回忆。在漫漫的人生路上，回首过去，又何曾不会多一份理性的感悟，又何曾不是一种美好的享受。
