上海外教社中学作文评选（上海外研社中小学作文评分系统） - 学习作文网

上海外教社中学作文评选【一】

老师给大家发了纸，让大家写上心目中的班干部。

我正要动笔时，又听到老师说：“今年我们用一种新的方式来选班干部，比如你想选‘洪程’正班长，那就写：正班长：洪程。好，开始投票。”

我觉得，新的方式有创意但也有困难，最难的是要准确判断一个人适合的位置，仔细考虑后，我慎重地做出了自己的选择.只听见同学们“沙沙沙”的动笔声，不一会儿选票就全收齐了。开始统计了，我被指定为参与者，同学们选的都很认真。统计完毕后，老师向全班宣布：“方锐和洪程两位同学被推选为正班长，接下来由他们进行‘招兵买马’选择自己的\'团队成员。其中体育委员选一个，别的委员各两名，不用看票数，只选择认为能帮助自己工作的同学。

很快两队人马就出来了，我的队员们是：张杰、心怡、志尚、亚泓、梁泽、晨露、林藤、万强、文武、肖琦和朝松。我对自己这个团队充满信心，队员们也都信心满满的准备为班级服务，为队伍争光！

放学的路上我想，老师今年用这种良性竞争的方式来激励同学们认真学习，取得成绩，真是一片良苦用心。而我作为一支队伍的领头人，更要认真负起责任，从自我做起，帮助团结同学，最终为班级争得荣誉，让老师欣慰。

有了这么多的班干部，我相信今年我们的集体一定比以往更优秀。队员们，加油吧！

上海外教社中学作文评选【二】

Dear Mr Pan:

It has been a long time since I wrote the last letter. Nowdays, people write letters less and less, instead, they make a call or send a SMS. However, it is still a good way for us to communicate with each other by sending a letter.

It\'s my honour to get the chance to write to you. \"Approachable\" is my first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. Students may fear the teachers that are serious both in and out of class. Smile makes a teacher popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind.

You always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. Before the class, you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher. To be honest, I was surprised in the first class when I learned a teacher at your age could speak English in such a fluent way.(I didn\'t mean you are old, you\'re young at heart. Moreover, you know well how to keep your class attractive. You\'ve got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the whole class without a pause. I always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed listening to you. In your class, I learned not only the writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. Thanks for your excellent teaching.

I\'ve got some suggestions for you. It seems that we students have got few chances to participate in discussion during the class time. Most of the time, we are listening. Seldom did we express our own ideas. I suggest that teachers should interact with students more frequently in the class. Besides, I\'d like to practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?

Happy new year.

With every good wish.

Yours sincerely

Dali Wang

XXXX.X.X

上海外教社中学作文评选【三】

Dear Mrs. Nelson,

My name is Rick Schultz. I don’t know if you remember me, but I was in your English class at Westview High School in 20xx. I used to argue with you about the merits of science fiction as a form of literature. Recently I met several other former students of yours, Gerald Bryant, Ron Brown, Dawn Smith, and Dave Lee. Naturally we spent much of the time we were together talking about your class and how much we enjoyed it. So I decided to write you and find out how you are doing.

As I said, we all remember your class with great fondness. If you are still teaching, I hope your current students appreciate how fortunate they are.

Sincerely yours,

Rick Schultz

XXXX.X.X

上海外教社中学作文评选【四】

Dear Mr.Huang,

We have never seen for one year, I miss you very much.It is say that you did an operation in September.How are you now? I hope that you have recovered.

Thank you for your enlightening in the important time of my life.I won\'t forget your edification. Iam in the XX University now.It locate in the beautiful city Hangzhou. I invite you to have a journey to Hangzhou next summer if you have time then.My major is English,but I always feel shamed to speak and show in English in the class.I would change the actuality gradually.Now I like sports very much especially basketball.You would see a healthy and stronge David next time.The life in the university is colorful.I like it.And I shall study hard.

The new year is on the way, I pray the God to bless you to be happy and healthy in the coming year.And give my best regards to your families. Happy New Year!

Yours faithfully, David

28th Dec