我最爱的季节是冬天。
冬天,没有春天的百花盛开,没有夏天枝繁叶茂的大树,也没有秋天的果实累累,但它有孤傲的腊梅,有洁白的雪花,这是别的季节没有的。
冬天的腊梅花十分美丽,腊梅有种特别的清香,很香很美的清香。腊梅是黄色的,充满活力的黄色让色彩单调的冬天变得阳光活泼起来,腊梅不怕寒冷,在寒风中坚强开放,腊梅坚强的品质值得我们学习。
冬天最开心的事当然是下雪。下雪了,可以打雪仗、堆雪人。雪,多好的雪。瑞雪兆丰年,厚厚的雪被子让麦苗睡一整个冬天;来年,土里的害虫都被冻死了,再加上阳光一晒,雪化成了水,麦苗喝饱了,长得就更好了,这也是我喜欢冬天的原因之一。
冬天,寒风磨练我们,让我们更坚强;冬天,白雪让我们快乐,让农民有丰收的希望。冬天是在为春天做准备。我喜欢冬天。
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你在这个季节离开了我,我也在这个季节放下了你,你不知道我的痛楚,我也不知道你的疲倦,我们就像陌路,一个往南,一个往北。
我在寒风刺骨的夜里为你写下,盼望你能读懂我的那一丝不舍和眷恋,盼望你可以知道我的无奈和痛彻心扉。几许忧愁后,我憔悴,你也不想再问前尘的是是非非,这个季节你离开了我,这个季节,我也迷失了自己。
你说,仰头看着天空,这样泪水就不会留下来,可是让眼泪留在心底,流水早已将心灵淹没。你可知,当我仰头看到的是你在天空的笑容和那些点点滴滴。低下头来才发下,你早已离我远去,去寻找不属于我的你的幸福。
好难得的缘分就这样匆匆别过,我们谁是定格,谁是结束,谁又是夜里醉过,醒又不记的路人。时光不会撒谎,让我记住你,也让我忘却繁华与你!
我在深夜里收拾,收拾着纸上零散的文字,收拾着散落的脚印,收拾着飘远的歌声。纸上的文字告诉我向前看,散落的脚印告诉我向前行,散落的歌声告诉我,一路高歌去往明天!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
花季似乎就是每个人一生中最多姿多彩,富有朝气的时节。如果把人的一生分为三天:昨天、今天和明天的话,那毫无疑问,花季自然是美好的今天,是有过去也有未来的时节,是人一生中最丰富多彩的时节。
因为它为你开满了“花儿”。童年时,虽有无限憧憬,但却没有经历,因此也没有奋斗目标,日子只能茫茫然的“度”,而不能清楚的向未来奋斗;老年时,拥有无限经历,知道了该怎样做,因为你从经历中明确了目标,但此刻未来已不复存焉了,没有了发展的首要条件。所以说花季才是人在一生中最宝贵重要的时刻,此刻你万事俱备,只欠东风了,不仅如此,你还能充分花季这个五味瓶,人生的酸甜苦辣都会在此刻出现,慢慢地接近你,使你生活过得愈加充实。自从步入初中后,我也成为了一个花季少年。在短短时间内,我不能充分体会花季的美好,除了拥有自己的隐私自由以及疯狂的戏耍稍让人兴奋外,我几乎没有拥有花季的“鲜花”。
但在前不久的校篮球比赛中,我终于体会了花季的美好,使自己置身于万花丛中。在前两场篮球比赛中,我们皆胜了,所有同学都为我们高兴,并在比赛中不遗余力的给我们加油,老师也身在其中,这使每一位队员都十分高兴轻松,干劲十足,时常超常发挥,但在第三场比赛中我们因轻敌而惜败后,听到的不是责备,而是鼓励与关心,使我们迅速走出黑暗,化悲痛为力量投身于另一个目标――学习,拿现在的美好与小学的“残忍”比,真是天差地别啊!那时,我们在第一场篮球比赛中输了,还不是全无机会夺冠,只要后面全赢就行了,可漫天的责备几乎压的我们喘不过气,幸而后来我们全胜并夺冠,但这似乎很平常,没有任何人向我们祝贺,除了我们几个运动员
。现在回想起来,真不禁让人感叹花季的温馨,花季的快乐,以及花季的成熟。花季的美好不得不让人赞叹,它培养、训练我们,给予我们人生真谛,在大起大落的变化中,给我们以美的享受,因为人生的花儿成熟在耀眼的花季中,它的魅力无人可挡。
今天是七月七日(农也就是明间所说的七夕。牛郎和织女相会的时间。古之来者便有词,迢迢牵牛星,姣姣河汉女。纤纤擢素手,扎扎弄机杼。终日不成章,泣涕零如雨。河汉清且浅,相去复几许?盈盈一水间,脉脉不得语。好诗。昨日下午,天空像牛郎的心阴沉起来,他立于河汉一岸,等待织女,还未见面,心中的激动,日夜痛苦的心,使牛郎涕零如雨。
一夜的等待,终于相会,执首相看泪眼,竞无语凝噎,他们拥抱,怕是去那短暂的每一分钟,可是时间终究到了,只有泪满面,忍顾鹊桥归路,泪水落在大地,凉透着土地,滴在万木,黄了叶子,于是落木萧萧为他们叹息,土地不在柔软,为他们苦恼,动物失落,归家待到明年,秋来了,冬去了,春又到,便盼望未至的夏至,直至七夕。
可如今雨水浸湿了地面,屋檐还有一颗一颗晶莹的水珠欢快的碰撞在已经满身使孔的红砖上,孩子们踮着脚躲过积水,天阴雨湿,安静的校园,听着远处隐约的篮球声,看着矮矮淡蓝色的墙壁。身边还有许多同学匆匆走过的脚步声。心中的感觉像春天一般温暖,像少女的微笑一般平静,就像“空山新雨后,天气晚来秋”一样清新的感觉,就像过年后还在回味幸福的感觉一般的愉悦。
这是个美丽个季节。
秋天是一位爱美的姑娘,她带着魔法颜料,轻轻的,轻轻的,趁你没留意,把大地涂的五彩缤纷。
秋姑娘迈着轻轻的脚步来到田野里,用魔法颜料把苹果娃娃涂得通红通红的,苹果娃娃高兴极了,对秋姑娘说:“谢谢”。苹果树后面有一棵高大的枫树,风一吹,枫叶落在了树妈妈的脚下,树妈妈好像在说:“好孩子,你真乖。”秋姑娘又把银杏树叶涂的金灿灿的,银杏叶醒来,发现秋姑娘在辛勤的劳动,银杏叶马上动动身子,好像在给秋姑娘扇风呢!低处的灌木丛也很羡慕他们,突然,秋姑娘走到灌木丛身后,把灌木丛涂的叠翠流金。秋姑娘最喜欢菊花仙子了,她把所有的颜色给了菊花仙子,红的、黄的、蓝的美丽极了,菊花在秋雨里频频点头,好像给秋姑娘敬礼道谢。
在金秋时节,最快乐的当然要数我们小孩子了,你看吧!老师带可爱的小朋友在摘苹果呢!最大的那个男孩可聪明了,他拿着竹篓,把苹果一个一个放在里面,露出了满脸微笑呢!一个穿着桃红色上衣的小女孩,她蹲下来,捡起一片又一片枫叶,枫叶在说:“小女孩,你还认得我吗?你看我又长高了多少。”在不远处,一个带鸭舌帽的小男孩捡起一片银杏叶,小男孩拼命的跑,拼命的大喊,他的汗珠滴落下来,银杏叶看见了,马上给小男孩扇风呢!
秋姑娘看到了这一切,弹起琴来,给大地的是一首丰收的歌,给小朋友的是一首欢乐的歌。
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