要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
How time flies! Three years has passed. I will graduate from junior high school. I will enter a new school to study. What will my new head teacher be like?I imagine that she/he is not only young but also beautiful/handsome. She/He maybe both patient with us and kind to us. She/He is also strict with us. I hope she/he is outgoing. She/He can understand us and make friends with us. If she/he likes doing sports, we can play together after class. She/He can get moreknowledge from her/him.I am looking forward to seeing her/him!
我的新班主任
时间过得真快!三年过去了。我将从初中毕业。我将进入一所新学校学习。我的新班主任会是什么样的'人?
我想她/他不仅年轻,而且漂亮/英俊。她/他也许对我们既有耐心又对我们很好。她/他对我们也很严格。我希望她/他是外向的。她/他能理解我们并与我们交朋友。如果她/他喜欢运动,我们课后可以一起玩。她/他可以从她/他那里获得更多的知识。
我期待着见到她/他!
打篮球的都知道,平时打球,要是防守对抗强,就说“跟打季后赛一样”,要是大家都只得分不防守,那就是说“这打全明星呢”,篮球赛观后感。今天中国男篮心态简直如训练一般。随便的让别人扣来扣去。
美国队也知道,来中国地盘上,稍微玩一下就算了。如果不是第一节和第二节开局中国队集体千年爆发的三分球人品,半场输个三十分简直跟玩一样。
开局第一节还稍微好一点,没怎么送球。从第二节后半段开始,29:29之后,那球送的,跟古彩戏法一样,前一秒钟还是中国队员运着球,下一秒钟一个黑人已经在30米后面扣篮得分了。科比、韦德、詹姆斯、霍华德轮番用尽了各种的体位,最后只好无奈的跑起了慢三步,心里暗想:“不扣了,中国队今天不是在玩我们吧?”
姚明、易建联根本不去篮下,因为进去了也白进去。姚明多次篮下要位,根本没有人给球。后卫们在第一节三分冲昏了脑袋以后,顿时掌管了中国的球权,姚明被迫3次3分出手,易建联更是4次,什么概念,尤纳斯再通天本事也没有办法,所有布置的战术顿时在中国控卫手里化为了三种:弧顶三分、45度三分,底角三分。
最后,终于“开了窍的”尤纳斯脑子里只有一个想法:“丫爱怎么玩怎么玩吧,进了算逮到兔子,不进是‘美国防守侵略性太大,中国球员身体单薄,观后感《篮球赛观后感》。’——当然官方的说法而已。”
再给一组镜头:姚明被犯规罚球,罚完球,被人打快攻,韦德一个箭步到篮下,居然是姚明跳起来封盖,且不说韦德在空中焚香沐浴更衣之后把球投进。在进攻端姚明罚球,位置最后,回头防守,姚明跑在最前面。中国的后卫不觉得羞愧么???同样的例子还有很多。德隆快攻上篮、韦德快攻上篮、保罗快攻上篮,最先快下的每次都看到是姚明!中国的战术是如此的特殊,以至于姚明冠绝全场的33分钟左右的上场时间根本不够用。他应该幻化成五个。然后真身抽出空来把中国后卫轮流揍一遍。这些后卫不是意识不行,不是体力不行,就是欠缺斗志,懒散惯了。第一节上来咬着牙的劲头全部散掉了。
刘炜,好吧。他确实压力很大,但是不得不说除了开局进了一个三分球以后,各种失误,开局被基德完爆,第二、三节化身失误版的阿尔斯通,只突破不进球。连续4、5次坚强的在被犯规失去平衡之后,依然稳稳的.送给对方一个后场篮板。显然急躁的老毛病又犯了。
陈江华,这么多年了。一点没变化。开场那个突破进球确实漂亮。然后人就跟疯了一样,不管有人没人,不停的快速运球,快速失误,快速抢断,快速进攻,快速被盖帽。一位一次进攻能在半场附近来回运17秒的后卫,如果我是尤纳斯,我坚决不会要。根本丧失战术啊。
孙悦,确实打的越来越好了。除了传球还有待提高以外。明显一个标准控卫的命,球队逼着去打分位,结果现在除了积极的防守和三分球以外,助攻感觉比以前降低了很多。盖帽,又见盖帽,除安东尼之后又一个被钉在耻
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
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