雅思作文差距(雅思作文成功率高吗)

雅思作文差距(雅思作文成功率高吗)

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雅思作文差距(雅思作文成功率高吗)

雅思作文差距【一】

2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?

3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?

4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.

7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.

雅思作文差距【二】

虽然来源于身边社会,但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮,拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到,只需要把事件中某一个具体的你,我,他,变成是客观群体,比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。

举例的常见表达方式:

for example,/for instance,(后加句子)

Such as/ like      (后加词组)

Take... as an example,

A case in point is that......

其次,在举例时还应注意尺度。

1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称,为了加强客观性,应将人称写成第三人称。

改正:Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.(那些养宠物,例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感)

2. 应避免引用一项调查研究,并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉,用含糊的方法表示。

改正:There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. (大量证据表明。。。)

3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家,尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。

改正:Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.(在全世界,许多孩子在屏幕前待太久,导致了他们的视力减弱。

“全世界”的表达方式:around the world, all over the world, across the globe

【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.

雅思作文差距【三】

太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹,缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。

例:A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项调查显示。。。)

"65%"让文章看起来有些假,有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。

雅思作文差距【四】

所谓议论文,最关键之处在于论述得当。支持句应使主题句更加令人信服,令考生的想法更加鲜明的呈现在考官面前。然而,中国考生在论述时往往存在一些误区:

雅思作文差距【五】

世界上按财产,只能分成两种人,一种是富人,另一种是穷人。而中国人则分为三种人,富人,穷人,普通人,假如这三种人按金币量来算,自己的财富,富人赚一万个金币,普通人则只有几十个金币,而穷人,可以说,只有一两个金币。富人下辈子就算不劳动,躺着睡着,也能大富大贵的生活下去,甚至这财产几十辈人也花不完,而他们依然拼命的赚钱,无止无休地寻找财富。可是他们轻轻地动动脑子,轻轻松松的赚个普通人的几百倍财富。而补充的,类似平湖只能混个自己,养活自己的钱而已。而且永远,一辈子,汗流尽,血流光,过着风餐露宿,吃不饱喝不足的`,简陋生活。穷人只希望能吃一顿饱饭,普通人只想生活过得更滋润一些,稍微轻松一点。而富人只想赚更多更多的钱。

而不管从古至今,富人都是在压榨穷人,穷人拼命的劳动换来的只是能有一口饭吃而已,而富人通过对别人的压榨,换来的是更多更多的财富,更加丰裕的生活。地主压迫平农,资产阶级压榨平民,可以说不同的社会形态,都存在着富人压迫着穷人的现实问题。而面对这种问题,不同的统治者还有领导级的人物,都用不同的方法去解决。但是,这种贫富差距的分化,还是很难很难去解决。

贫富差距,在现代生活,变得很明显,他对于国家的发展,也有很大的阻碍力。因此,我希望祖国能够让更多的普通人功能上更富足的小康社会,不,贫富差距的问题在当代这个文明的时代,严重的上演,影响民生,影响国家的前途发展。

因此协调发展,是祖国将真正强大的重要途经。

雅思作文差距【六】

这是我最头疼的地方,我BEC的成绩里听力是WEAK:(而我在复习计划的前几天是听真题,做点分析,但做下来的效果很差,基本都是错20到15个,虽然天天在空闲的时候都挂着个MP3听真题和BBC,但真的进展很小。听力这玩意,确实不是一天两天的'事情,是长时间积累的结果。所以在最后8天,我改变了策略,我在这里下了听力机经,发现其实版本并不多(没我想像的多,我想起码100来个VERSION),而且每个SECTION的主题很少有重复的,这就为牢固的记忆提供了保障,雅思英语《很高兴,10天,7分》。所以我用了7天,每天4个小时来背机经,然后最后一天把全部看了一遍,然后运气特别好,在考试的时候正好遇到两个SECTION(考的时候我都快笑出来了),而且另外两个部分我都听的不错,虽然最后一篇很有几个没听清楚。

建议:短期复习的朋友,在最后一段时间去背机经是很有用处的,因为听力这东西一定要经过长时间的锻炼(虽然背机经是一个很痛苦的过程),既然没有足够的时间,那就背机经当抱佛脚吧。

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