根据新课标的要求,在课本内容掌握的基础之上,要拓展学生的写作能力,为此设计了一堂写作训练课,重在启发学生的思维,引导学生思考想象。希望借此提高学生的写作能力。《诗句改写训练》学案
授课人:张汝友
1、要理解古诗的原意(正确理解诗句的含义)
2、要把握古诗的意境(了解古诗描写的环境和具体的事物)
3、要展开合理的想象(想象发生的事情、人物的动作、语言、心理和表情等)
听故事《解缙的应变之作》,思考回答:
1、皇帝说的事情是真的吗?
2、请把解缙的诗句连起来读一读,你觉得写得怎么样?
3、说说解缙的诗是怎样得来的?说明了什么?
例四:按诗后要求,口述改写诗文内容:
《送元二使安西》王维
渭城朝雨浥轻尘,客舍青青柳色新。
劝君更尽一杯酒,西出阳关无故人。
①变换人称:将原诗改为第一人称或第三人称;
②变换写法:故事新编、情景片断、精彩对话;
③变换体裁:可改编为散文、小说、剧本、书信、MTV分镜头、童话等。
遇见天坛的发现,让我着迷上了历史建筑的宏伟,于是乎发现了《上新了故宫》。连着假期的时间,一口气把这个节目的两季都看完了!
节目每期以不同的嘉宾来完成不同的`任务,然后一层一层揭开这些建筑物和文物背后的故事!通过这个节目,对文物一窍不通的我,开始慢慢的有点喜欢了,那些大作品,那些山水画,那些瓷器,原来还有那么多的故事,原来他的珍重不仅是工艺的精美,还有选料的极致,更多的还有当时那个时代下那么多人的努力和工匠精神,还有那么多的故事和感情!
故宫,明清两代的皇家宫殿!整个建筑宏观上就有很多寓意,天人合一、北斗七星,龟蛇、各种祥瑞等等!然后每一个宫殿都有着许多不平凡的故事,三大殿的太和殿、中和殿、保和殿;后三宫的乾清宫、交泰殿、坤宁宫;还有东西六宫,文华殿、武英殿,还有乾隆帝给自己打造的宁寿宫也就是乾隆的后花园,清代皇帝的正寝养心殿,顺治帝皇贵妃董鄂氏居住的承乾宫,康熙出生、乾隆生母崇庆皇太后(甄嬛)居住过得景仁宫,比较特殊的命运多端的被称为水晶宫的延禧宫,孝庄文皇后居住过得慈宁宫,崇庆皇太后居住过得寿康宫,同治帝的生母慈禧太后居住的储秀宫等等!
一部部鲜活的历史画面通过节目都展现在世人的眼中,那些许多未开放的区域也首次在电视上公布,真正的一堵故宫的宏伟!同时还有许多的国宝级文物,石鼓、千里江山图、慈母的各种釉彩大瓶、大禹治水等等各种,每个文物的背后也是一个鲜活的历史故事!
带着敬意,希望能够再次步入故宫,去感受它的宏伟壮观!
例二:诵读《天净沙秋思》按诗后要求:
《天净沙秋思》马致远
枯藤老树昏鸦,小桥流水人家,古道西风瘦马。夕阳西下,断肠人在天涯。
①.扩词成句:将“枯藤、老树、昏鸦、小桥、流水、人家、古道、西风、瘦马、夕阳”扩写成一句话。
②.扩句成段:将曲中“枯藤老树昏鸦”,“小桥流水人家”,“古道西风瘦”等句子发挥想象,扩展成几句语意连贯的话。
③.扩诗成篇:将上述内容连缀成一篇完整的短文。
改写:
Good morning,everybody.I am very glad to stand here and give you a speech.I'm Ren Wen,from Class 17.Well, the topic I'm going to deal with is ten years later.
I have celebrated my 18th birthday a month before.That means I'm no longer a little kid.It's time for me to think about my future.Mom once told me that I should make the most of my age to get as much knowledge as possible.So ten years later,I'll be probably pursuing my further study.Of course,I'll have enough confidence to get my degree.To tell you the truth,the incentive to study is always my mother's encouragement.I wish that I would never let her dowm.The society will be more competitive.There must be more difficulties during ten years.I really hope that I'll successfully conquer them,for it's a good opportunity to estabish myself.
But that's only a minor point.As you all know,a good life that basically drives me crazy.I like a variety of sports.I'll keep on doing exercise regularly.I shall be an refined woman with long hair.By then,I'll find a man who really knows me at all.We'll live together,talk together and travel together.We'll share the laughter, the pain and even the tears.We are going to build up a world of our own,no quarrel but happiness.And from time to time,I'll pick up my violin and play it with a sweet emotion.I like it that my surroundings are full of music.
Well,that's a rough description of my life.There's ten years to go.Anyway,it's a long way.I don't mind whether these dreams come into reality or not.What I care is the process.Just keep on fighting till the end,and I'll be a success!
Thank you!
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