啊!让我盼望已久的漫画课终于到了,我兴高采烈地提着画箱朝画室跑去。到了画室,老师说:“今天我先每人发一张打印出来的画,仔细观察,然后再画。”“好”!大家兴奋地说。
同学们都端端正正地坐在自己的位置上,一边听老师讲一边认真观察。老师讲完后,我们便拿起笔,画起画来。
首先,画个脑袋,那个脑袋像一个酒坛子,然后画上一对明亮的大眼睛,接着,画一个“八”字形的鼻子,再画上一张红红的嘴巴,最后画上身体和一个立起的头发,他的头发像头上长着的无数根小草,下面,就该涂颜色了,我拿出心爱的彩铅,刷刷地涂了起来……
终于画完了,我拿给老师看,老师夸我画得非常棒,还拿给同学们展示,同学们哈哈地笑着说:“画的好像呀!”那一刻,我的心里像吃了蜂蜜一样甜滋滋的。绘画课结束了,我提着画箱高高兴兴地跑了回家。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
Hello!我是张佳懿,今年9岁啦。我是南街小学三年级学生。是一个活泼开朗的女孩。我的兴趣爱好很广泛,我喜欢唱歌、跳舞、喜欢交朋友,希
“叮铃铃……”上课铃响了,肖老师迈着轻盈的步伐走进教室,一进教室就在黑板上画了一个大头娃娃,那个娃娃有头发、眼睛、耳朵、鼻子,就是没有嘴巴。原来,老师让我们给大头娃娃画嘴巴。
游戏开始了,老师让坐在第一排的张欣蕊先来画,她笑眯眯地走上讲台,只见老师递给她一支粉笔,然后用金笔书包把她的.眼睛蒙上,接着说了一声:“开始!”张欣蕊原地转了三圈,就开始画了。这时教室里立即活跃了起来。有的喊往上画,有的说往下,还有的喊着往左画。张欣蕊显然不知道听谁的,于是自作主张地画了一张嘴。刚画完同学们就哈哈大笑,她立刻取下书包一看,啊,原来她把嘴巴画到了娃娃的下巴上。
终于轮到我了,我迫不及待地走上讲台,接过老师手中的粉笔,把金笔书包套在我的头上,顿时我的眼前橘黄一片。我想,这下惨了,肯定画不好了。正想着,突然,我听到老师一声:“开始。”我赶紧原地转了三圈,啊!已经晕了,还怎么画呀。于是我小心翼翼地摸着黑板前进,我听到后面有人在为我指引方向,可惜人太多,听起来很模糊,我自作主张,画了一张小嘴巴。刚画完,身后传来一阵笑声,我心里很着急,取掉书包一看,啊!我竟然把嘴巴画到了娃娃的鼻子上!
游戏在我们的欢声笑语中悄悄地溜走了,可我们还沉浸在刚才的快乐之中。
今天就您你们读讲我们的爱巴,”老师一罗老师。
我们老师的眼睛又大又圆头发很对老师的外貌描写。
老师的性格有时温柔有时腺气暴膜躁膜但平时很默很搞笑,但罗老师有时吵人很厉害,但平时温柔到会让我看我们而影。
好了,该讲同学之间和老师的事了记得有一次我们班里的同学没有交作业老师把他叫到办公室,他很害着他很怕罗老师老师说:“怕什么我又不把评你,说为什么不带作业,他说:“忘带了,老师说:“学习不是你父母的事,而是你的事不能让自己的父母给你操心。记住了
么?“纪住了。”
还记得有一次上课一个同学在底下搞小动作,老师到了他的旁边,老师都走到了他的旁边了他都没注意到,同学一回头结果被老师吓了一跳老师直接让他站起来了。
这就是我们的老师,有时温柔有时暴躁还有时幽默。
有人说,师恩如山,因为高山巍巍,使人崇敬,我还要说,师恩似海,因为大海浩瀚,无法估量。我很感谢我遇到的每一位老师,我拿起笔,写下心中的感激和怀念。
王老师,长着一头黑色的短短的秀发。浓密的眉毛下镶着两颗黑珍珠的大眼睛,让人觉得好神气。一副黑色的眼睛架在鼻子上。她的鼻子梁很高。红红的樱桃小嘴十分鲜艳、美丽。
上一星期,使我们一起上课的最后一次,我们每个人都很舍不得王老师,我们在一起聊了很多之前的趣事。拍了很可爱和搞笑的照片。
从老师那里,无知的我汲取了太多的恩泽,我知道这恩泽我一辈子也难以相报。“滴水之恩,当涌泉相报”,老师的恩泽也将永远留在我的心里。
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