雅思大作文arts【一】
太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹，缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例：A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.（一项调查显示。。。）
"65%"让文章看起来有些假，有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
雅思大作文arts【二】
Confucius loved and respected the art of cooking. He established culinary standards and proper table etiquette. Most of these are still considered to be the standards even today. The tradition of cutting foods into bite size pieces during preparation is unique to the Chinese culture. The use of knives at a Chinese dinner is considerd poor taste. Confucius taught that good cooking depends on the blending of various ingredients and condiments rather than the taste of the individual elements. He believed that in order to become a good cook one must first be a good matchmaker. The flavors of the ingredients must be blended with harmony. Without harmony there is no taste. He also stressed the use of color and texture in preparing the dish. Most certainly Confucianism helped elevate cooking from a menial task to the status of an art, "the art of Chinese cooking." Taoism was responsible for the development of the hygienic aspects of food and cooking. The principle objectives of this philosophy were people's wish for longevity. In contrast to supporters of Confucianism who were interested in the taste, texture and appearance, Taoists were concerned with the life-giving attributes of various foods. Over the centuries the Chinese have explored the world of plants, roots, herbs, fungus and seeds to find life-giving elements. They discovered that the nutritional value of vegetables could be destroyed by improper cooking and that many items had medicinal value. For example, ginger, a favorite condiment, is also used to soothe an upset stomach and as a cold remedy.
雅思大作文arts【三】
在这个句子中，我们先选择advertisements，influences， people这三个词汇，然后开始准备扩句。
雅思大作文arts【四】
雅思考试有条写作指令叫做：Include relevant examples from your own experience. 所以很多考生在考试时都喜欢使用举例法（exemplification。这一扩展方式本身无可厚非，然而在使用时几种例子是不适合的。
雅思大作文arts【五】
Most female consumers shop unwisely.
雅思大作文arts【六】
阅读一直是我的强项，中国学生一般都是阅读很强哈，呵呵。在开始复习的前几天，我做了三套真题，分别错了9个，4个，3个，然后我就停下不做了，我想做真题主要是适应雅思考试的方式。接下来的日子，有空的话我就做做《雅思阅读真经》，但总共做了不到10篇。在最后一天做了一套真题，错了6个。考试的时候感觉还不错，但结果不是很理想，没有达到7。5的目标。
建议：1，即使是短期复习，也要尽力去适应雅思的方式，因为雅思很多是细节的题，所以要注意阅读的技巧（关于技巧，其他牛人已经说了很多了）
2，在最后复习阶段，一定要尽全力提高阅读速度（我也知道这不是说提高就提高的，但有这样的意识再加上一些对自己有帮助的方法，还是会有效果的）。我有个建议，大家在阅读的时候不要在心里默读，尽量做到一看到这个单词就反应过来它的意思，然后马上跳过；可以在复习的时候，每次做阅读的时候都这样训练。
