戴君顺同学:
你好!
自从我告别了凤溪小学,由上海转来昆山上学后,不知不觉已经一年多没见面了,回想起我们在一起学习的日子,确实是非常留恋,所以,总想有个机会。再聚一聚。
希望你国庆节到我家做客,我家在昆山周市华城美地社区,你从青浦坐车到昆山新客站下车后,坐6路车,122路均可直达。
我们昆山可美了,不仅有水乡周庄,美丽的阳澄湖,集人文和自然山水为一体的亭林公园,还有一个风景秀丽的森林公园呢。
当然,你到了昆山后,首先应该去我们的学校看看。我们学校离我家很近,非常漂亮,不仅绿树成阴、四季花香,学校的建筑也十分新颖,设施也十分完备。崭新的教学楼里,有一个可容纳50多人的记算机房,学校还有一个室内体育馆、一个拥有200米的塑胶跑道和一个运动场,一个可同时举行两场球赛的篮球场。
然后,带你去观赏阳澄湖的美景,并请你美美地吃一顿正宗的阳澄湖大闸蟹。
如果你有时间,我还要带你去周庄,让你见识一下真正的江南水乡;去森林公园,尽情享受那里的森林氧吧;去亭林公园,那里不但有很多娱乐设施,还是一个观光胜地。
听完我的介绍,你一定非常心动吧,心动不如行动,我等着你的光临。
祝你
好好学习,天天向上!
你的同学、好友:xx
20XX年9月1日
高里奥受封建资产阶级金钱至上道德原则的影响,认为父女之爱是天经地义的。但他的父爱并不是单纯的,而是包含了向上层社会爬的功利因素。他把所有的爱都给了女儿,愿意牺牲自己来满足他们的种种奢望:他愿意为了女儿们的体面,歇了生意,只身搬进伏盖公寓;愿意替女儿还债,当卖了金银器皿和亡妻的遗物,出让了养老金,最后搞得自己身无分文;他也愿意为了给女儿弄钱,想到去偷去抢,去代人家服兵役,去“卖命”,去“***人放火”。
我们可以看到他这种父爱是非常疯狂和盲目的。然而高老头为了他的女儿所做的这些,他的女儿知道吗?高老头在全心全意地为其女儿付出的时候,却忘了告诉女儿要学会感恩。女儿们心安理得地享用着父亲为其所做的一切,却全然不知父亲在背后付出了多少的辛酸和泪水。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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