五年级英语作文要不要空两格【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文要不要空两格【二】
如纷飞花月，如乱鸣喧嚣，生活中存在着完美与不足。细细观察，方得其妙。
人们追求完美，这是人之本性。人人求之，证明完美的可贵。侧面看也能看出不完美是人们所不喜的。为何呢，无非在于粗陋与其后果。
其一之粗陋，这需是普遍的。而首讲变化。正所谓人无完人，每个人总归是有其不完美之处。不完美可以理解为一种督促。人们想让不完美变的完美，这就是不完美的美妙之处。让人们变的完美，是一种进化的过程，也正符合生物进化论。又再说不完美其实也是一种吸收，一种责任。我们老师经常会给出一些奇奇怪怪的题，同学们不会。而老师却会说：“如果你们都会的话，还要老师做什么？”同学们在知识上的残缺，不完美，恰是老师的'一种责任，播撒知识，传授知识，让同学们知识漏洞中的不完美逐渐变得完美。生活中的责任也大同小异。如戴圣《礼记》所言：“使老有所终，壮有所用，幼有所长”，生活中的不完美让不同的人解决，从而造就了就业岗位。夸张一点说，生活就是由不完美构成的。
其二呢，要论其后果。其实后果已在上一点中说明。不完美需要弥补，弥补需要付出代价，代价呼唤劳动力。这与生活中的生产关系是有照应性的。其实“不完美的后果”一词不够匹配，用“不完美后发生的事”才足够贴切。
如上文所说，不完美构成了生活。如若生活没有了不完美呢？恐怕难以想象。人人都是完美的，事事都是完美的，物物都是完美的。人们无需努力，因为生活已然完美。在此后，人们便会失去对生活的希望，生活已经丢失了它本身存在的意义。人们就会贪图享乐，《孟子》中载：“生于忧患，死于安乐”，其此之谓乎。这可能就关系于人类的消亡了。从此看，完美可能造成消亡，生活中确实需要不完美。而又从侧面看，如果人们贪图享乐，便已然又存在了不完美，因为人们缺少了完美的心态。所以，完美的生活不存在。
学术同样如此。人类的知识体系始终不完整，所以人类在不断探索，逐渐完善。不完美的知识产生了讨论，产生了争议，产生了猜想，产生了探索。从此中，不完美激发了人们的探索精神和想象力。不完美在学术上同样存在意义。
法国卢浮宫，有一尊雕像。那是美神维纳斯。看着断臂的维娜斯，我有点遗憾。有人曾告诉我，曾经有好多个方案，为雕像恢复原貌，最后发现，没有一个完整的，比残缺的更美。我恍然大悟：原来这个世界游戏的规则设计者，也就是那位隐身的造物者，根本就没有设计“完美”。生活需要不完美。
五年级英语作文要不要空两格【三】
想想，如果人的`一生太有规律，没有任何的突发事件，那这个世界会变得怎样呢？如果没有偶尔被父母骂，没有偶尔被狗追，没有心情的波动，每天只是重复上、下学，过着一成不变的日子，我想，这个世界应该会变得极其无聊吧，生活在其中的人也将变得死气沉沉，没有半点活力。
所以，人偶尔要打破规律，做点改变，走条以前没人走过的道路，做些以前没人做过的事，不要安于平凡。如果大家都安于现状，那社会便不会进步，便不会有各种好看的电影，不会有推陈出新的电子产品。改变，将会使人不一样，或许有些人改变后是向下沉沦，但也有些人改变后是力争上游，还有些人的改变，无关乎成就，无关乎努力，仅仅是心灵上的改变，便让生活变得多采多姿。
我想要不一样，因为我不想和大家一样，不想死气沉沉的过日子，不想和那株小草一样，一辈子待在那里，任风雨吹打，我想要像风一样，像风一般飘荡，像风一般到处见识，我想要不一样的人生，我想要不一样。
五年级英语作文要不要空两格【四】
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance
fee should be charged for parks.
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
