五年级英语m6和m7作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语m6和m7作文【二】
今天我们学习了《小草和大树》这篇课文，篇幅不长，但我从中懂得了很多人生哲理……
我深深地被主人公——夏洛蒂。勃朗特不屈的精神与不懈努力的顽强意志所深深折服。夏洛蒂。勃朗特的母亲早逝，她从小就失去了母爱。迫于生活，她承担起维持家庭生计的责任。尽管如此，她却不肯放弃读书，要强好胜的她，并没有因为沉重的打击而低头叹息，而在痛苦中昂起头来，向梦想的方向努力奔跑。
读到这里，我羞愧了。记得有一次期中考试，我的数学成绩只考了八十九分，这是一个多么耻辱的分数啊!此后的一段时间，我都很消沉，整天无精打采。经过妈妈的开导才逐渐恢复了自信心。夏洛蒂。勃朗特面对着生活和写作上的沉重打击，都没有悲观退缩，而我，却被一个小问题给打倒了。相比之下，我是那么渺小。
小草象征着卑微。但是夏洛蒂。勃朗特通过自己的努力，用钢铁般的意志、坚强不屈的精神、汗水和心血，冲破世俗，把“小草”浇灌成“大树”，终获成功。她在成功背后，付出了艰辛的努力，在逆境中成长，才成为文坛上一颗璀璨的明星。
想想自己，真是自叹不如啊!为了我们的健康成长，家长、老师付出了多少心血，可有些同学却不认真学习，浪费时间、浪费生命。
小草，虽然没有大树那么伟岸，鲜花那么迷人，但是她们仍然昂着头。在暴风雨来临时，小草虽然被风雨吹打得东倒西歪，但是仍牢牢地扎根在泥土里，坚强不屈。雨过天晴，仍然会朝着太阳微笑。这正可谓“离离原上草，一岁一枯荣。野火烧不尽，春风吹又生。”啊!
从夏洛蒂。勃朗特身上，我学到了：在逆境中，只有具备坚强的意志力和聪明智慧的人，才能拥有精彩的人生。逆境并不可怕，只要不向困难屈服、拥有坚定的信念和顽强的毅力，又怎能不成功呢?
在今后的学习生活中，我要学习夏洛蒂：
永不言败、不屈不挠、不懈努力的精神，
让我们扬起梦想的风帆，展开理想的翅膀，
向未来起航吧!
五年级英语m6和m7作文【三】
今天我们学习了一篇文章——《小草和大树》。文章主要讲了勃郎特三姐妹出身贫寒，经常靠打工维持生计，但一直在文学的道路上行走着。她们的`诗寄给桂冠诗人罗伯特、***塞，换来的是冷嘲热讽;她们自费出版了诗集，却只卖出了两本。但她们没有放弃，改写小说，终于三人的小说震惊了世界文坛。
读完这篇文章，我觉得勃郎特三姐妹勇敢地去挑战偏见及社会保守的观念，真是可敬可佩。当时桂冠诗人罗伯特、***塞在给她们的回信中这样写道：“在大自然里，小草和大树都是上帝的安排。放弃你可贵而徒劳的事业吧——文学，不是妇女的事业，而且也不应该是妇女的事业。”这封信表面上是讽刺勃郎特三姐妹，实际上也揭露了当时旧社会上对妇女的偏见。
所有男人都认为妇女做的是最卑微的活儿，带孩子、洗衣，烧饭等等。像文学这样的的大事业，只有男人可以做，男人注定高女人一等。可勃郎特三姐妹偏不相信，顽强地在文学道路上行走着，最后证明了：世界上不存在什么“不是妇女的事业”!在这个社会上，男女是平等的!
事实盛于雄辩!如果勃郎特三姐妹看到罗勃特、***塞的信后，也写一封信和他对骂，这时候的语言就是苍白无力的。勃郎特三姐妹写小说，以行动证明了一切，以行动庄严地向传统的观念和陈腐的偏见宣战。在河滨的4班，一位身体有缺陷的同学小A，他的考试成绩基本不合格。自从三年级碰见了我们的英语杨老师，他改变了自己。
杨老师很漂亮，非常和蔼可亲，上课幽默风趣，我们都很喜欢她。她知道小A和几位同学学习不是太好，就利用中午的休息时间来帮他们补习，并成立了“小组一帮一”。小A在爱上学英语的同时，语文和数学也有所提高。他不再门门科目只二十来分，不再厌恶学习。从四年级开始，英语迈过了及格门槛并渐渐高升，最高的一次居然考了95分，语文和数学也正一步步靠近及格。他用行动证明：身体有缺陷的人学习不一定就差，只要努力，没有什么不可能!
勃郎特三姐妹是美丽的仙人掌花，仙人掌在恶劣的环境下成长并开出美丽的花，勃郎特三姐妹在逆境中成才。也许她们的外表很美丽，但更美丽的是她们的自强不息。她们用顽强的毅力磨练自己，直至骄傲地绽放!
五年级英语m6和m7作文【四】
书的世界，是那么丰富多彩。让我在知识的海洋里，尽情遨游，享受着知识给我带来的无穷乐趣。读了《小草和大树》后，我掩卷深思，不禁感触万分。
《简。爱》的作者夏洛蒂是《小草和大树》这篇文章中的主人公，她是一位在逆境中成才的典范。她生活在极度贫困的家庭，家中有两个妹妹，一个是《呼啸山庄》的作者爱米粒，另一个是《艾格尼斯。格雷》的作者安妮。虽然生活十分贫苦，但她们三姐妹还是坚持写作、学习。虽然在写诗的过程中遭受了打击和失败，但她们还是坚持下来了。并最终获得了成功。
虽然，人生的路上有太多的厄运降临，但是，人生如茶，只有敢于用沸水洗礼自己，才会益处真正的清香与光泽。凡是都有好的一面，我们应该向夏洛蒂姐妹学习，她们是那么得乐观，遇到了困难，她们都以乐观平静的心态去对待，她们身上也充满了一种不屈不饶的精神。当***塞否认了她们的诗作后，她们并没有因为自尊心受到伤害而放弃。反而用那封信来激励自己，让自己处于一种战斗状态，直到获得了成功。
在我们的生活中，缺少的正是这样的人。有多少人，因为被别人否认了，自尊心受到了创伤，而半途而废。我们不能向困难屈服，而应该勇于面对困难，努力克服困难。因为我们最大的敌人不是困难，而是自己，是自己的内心。
一个人假使具有这两种品质，一定会以顽强的生命力、钢铁般的意志，从小草长成大树的。因为没有人天生只能当“小草"，也没有人天生就拥有成为“
大树"的本事，只要信念坚定、锲而不舍、勇往直前、不屈不饶，风雨中的“小草”一样能长成"参天大树"。
直到现在，我才突然明白：人生吥选择我，但我却可以努力拥有精彩的人生!
