五年级关于雪的作文 英语作文【一】
雪，纷纷扬扬地飘落下来，爸爸的生日在这温柔的初雪中隆重登场。
雪，堆满了我家院子中木板的表面，我和妹妹戴上手套，准备给爸爸过一个有雪蛋糕的生日。
雪，调皮地落到了我和妹妹的头上，可我和妹妹毫不在乎，我们一心想着爸爸的雪蛋糕，我们把雪放在木板上，堆成了一座小山，拿出一只锋利的铅笔（由我操作），把雪拍实，用铅笔在雪上刻画了 一个心形。我们做了3个心形，分别代表我、妹妹、妈妈。雪仿佛也急着来看我们做的心形，争先恐后地落在木板上。调皮的雪宝宝被我们弄走了，我们又在木板上写了句“爸爸生日快乐”。在这之前，我们霸道地向爸爸妈妈宣布了：除了有非常重要的事情，任何人不能去院子里。尽管这样，我们还是在旁边放了一块很大的布作掩护。
爸爸看到了我们的3个雪心蛋糕，高兴得差点跳起来，我们也很高兴，妈妈为了奖励我们，还给我们炸了一盘薯条，特别好吃。
雪，我真心地感谢你，生日宴会中的材料和院子里的美丽景色。
你给柳树披上了披风，给房子盖上了厚被，给大地铺上了地毯，景色多美呀！
雪，还在下着。
五年级关于雪的作文 英语作文【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级关于雪的作文 英语作文【三】
过年了，当大家都沉醉在欢乐之中时，而学娃娃却悄悄地来了。正在雪地上玩耍的我，却已经发现顽皮的雪娃娃来陪我玩了，我很激动，内心想着和雪娃娃怎么玩。
我先开心的和雪娃娃一起堆雪人，我很快就把雪娃娃变成了巨大而威猛的雪人。我还为它准备了丰厚的衣裳。把它打扮的十分帅气英俊。当我再抬头仰望着天空时，一片片雪花还在不停的飞舞着，低头一看，却发现大地妈妈已经披上了一件厚厚的棉衣，好美啊！
我眺望远方，看到翠竹爷爷也在和雪娃娃玩耍，雪娃娃先在翠竹爷爷的身体上来回跳动，然后又骄傲的站在翠竹爷爷的手上，一不留神滑倒在地，它抬头望望旁边的松树叔叔正像战士一样镇守边疆，雪娃娃突发齐想：自己也想和松树叔叔一样强壮，去镇守边疆，它在松树叔叔的身上跑来跑去，锻炼着身子。松树叔叔后面的梅花姐姐，她和雪娃娃玩地最开心。散发着香气的梅花姐姐给雪娃娃讲了一个个动听的故事，并且教会雪娃娃去体会每个故事的'真正含义并学会里面的精神，比如说火与雪是天敌，但雪娃娃不能退缩，要坚强，只有有了这种精神才快乐，雪娃娃听地十分开心和入迷，慢慢的，它累了，然后不知不觉的沉醉在梦乡之中，一动也不动。雪娃娃和大自然的万物都玩地非常开心。
而我却伫立在哪儿，沉醉在雪景中美妙的世界里面，一时回不过神来。
