初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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“春蚕到死丝方尽,蜡炬成灰泪始干。这句千古名句是对老师的赞美,在老师的影响下,我也想成为一名光荣的人民教师。
那天是星期四,我因病旷课了一天。星期五,我昏昏沉沉的脑袋才清醒了许多,“叮铃铃铃……清澈的铃声响起,我忙抄起电话,“你的病好多了没呀?老师温和的声音在我耳畔回荡。“下午放学时我顺道回家,在公园内帮你补补课吧。“好好,谢谢老师!我内心欣喜不已,对老师千言万语的感谢却只化作一句谢谢,挂了电话,我的内心还是暖融融的,如沐春风……下午,我准时应约来到小公园的桌凳旁,远远地便看见一个倩影,“老师--我扯着嗓子喊,那身影回头,入目的是红润的脸庞。我忙落坐,心里像打着鼓,有些紧张地捏了捏裤脚,鼻尖沁出了细汗,不自然地拿出课本。老师似是看出了我的刻意,安慰似的拍了拍我的肩,这亲近的动作让我放松了许多。于是,便细心听起了课,老师认真细心地讲着,我沉浸其中。不知过了多久,我慢慢感到了凉意,下意识地动了动脚。老师发现我不断打着冷颤,就把她的风衣给我披在了身上,然后继续一丝不苟地辅导我。我瞬间热泪盈眶,鼻头酸酸的`,眼泪像开了闸似的,心里却如过娟娟细流,一点又一点地滋润着我干涸的心田。初秋的傍晚微微刮着冷风,夕阳在一丝丝云下似无可奈何般慢慢落下,紫红色的长天,我与老师的影子拉得长长的,透过叶隙,斑驳的点点夕阳落一地。
我金色的回忆正在慢慢褪去,有些记忆似生命过客被抛之脑后,然而我的恩师将永远烙在我的脑海中,她一丝不苟的工作态度,她平易近人的洒脱性格,都在我脑海中挥之不去,我要成为他这样的老师。
为实现这个愿望,我要在学习知识的道路上勇往直前,纵使前路满铺荆棘,我也要无畏前行!
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
我叫兑兑,来自九年A班的普通学生。在朋友眼里,我的名片就是会忍。我的忍耐级别可以堪称“忍者神龟”了。
“快来呀!我们玩过山车吧!”阿汤指着那个足以把人甩出来的庞大机械兴奋的又蹦又跳。“不是吧?这个这么恐怖!嘿嘿,还是去玩文雅一点的吧”“是啊是啊”在小伙伴中有人附和道。“什么嘛!出来玩就是要刺激啊!要文雅?回家抱电脑好啦!”阿汤生气的转身就走,我和远儿连忙拉住她“别生气嘛,我们俩陪你去”远儿一副拍胸脯干大事的样子,可是我的心里却是打起了鼓,我很怕的。一阵翻天覆地后,我站在垃圾桶旁一通狂吐“兑兑,远儿你们两真好,下次我还让你们陪我”阿汤说完就高兴的走了,留我一个人在垃圾桶旁凌乱,好吧,我忍。
“还记得许多年前的春天,那时的我还没剪去长发。”正当我唱的相当投入的\'时候,阿汤站在一旁冷冷地说“别人唱歌要钱,你唱歌要命啊!”此时此刻我想起一句诗’在你身后落了一地的,朋友啊!那不是花瓣,是我凋零的心‘好吧,我忍。
“今天的体育课同学们练习跳远。”说完,大腹便便的体育老师就离开了操场,“远儿,咱们俩去练习一下吧”但,“嘿!哈!哎哟!跳远怎么这么难啊?”闷闷不乐的我瘫在草地上,突然头上出现一坨黑影——阿汤,“干嘛呢?你这也算跳远?别人跳远是用米尺,你跳远是用直尺。”然后又剩我在草地中凌乱。啊!!真是叔可忍,婶不能忍啊!
综上所述,乃是我名片形成的过程,那是比“忍者神龟”还要能忍啊!哎,不说了,说多了都是泪啊!
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