I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
你好!我是纪录你生活中喜、怒、哀、乐的铅笔,平时受到你的爱惜与呵护,所以我才能尽情的在纸上跳舞,做出一篇又一篇有趣的,能遇到你,一定是老天爷眷顾我,给了我一个懂得爱惜铅笔的好主人!
记得以前的你,只要一生气,就会把我抓起来,当作出气筒,重重的往地上丢,所以我老是青一块、紫一块的,全身上下乌漆麻黑的`、都是疤痕。每次你一摔,我就会马上昏迷。而我也常常进出急诊室,可以算是急诊室里的常客了呢!
但自从你的老师告诉你铅笔的好处,你终于不再摔铅笔了!还常常擦拭我,再小心翼翼的将我放在我的床上──铅笔盒。从此以后,你都会跟我好好配合,一会儿写作文,一会儿写童诗,一会儿画画,做出许许多多的完美杰作。每次你用我写功课,得到老师的称赞时,我都好骄傲,听到其它铅笔一句又一句的怨言,我真的觉得我是全世界最幸运的铅笔了!
希望主人你能持之以恒,好好利用我。你出脑,我出力,让我们共同在生命画布上创造美好!祝
学业进步、身体健康
你忠诚的铅笔敬上
Dear Mr. President,
My name is Li Ming, a sophomore majoring in International Trade. Having learned and lived on campus for nearly two years, I have found university life most exciting and instructive.
What happens around me every day has left a deep impression on me, but what strikes me most is the canteen service on campus, so that for some time I have had the keen desire to write to you, sharing with you my positive comments on and negative feelings about it. On the one hand, we are happy to see that the canteen staff has been sparing no efforts to guarantee food quality. As a result, we are relieved from the anxiety that some food might be dirty, stale and inedible. We also feel contented with the service provided by the canteen, enjoying food in a homely atmosphere. On the other hand, improvements should be made for the simple reason that prices for dishes are unreasonably high, and that the canteen is not spacious enough and too noisy at times.
Therefore, to improve the overall service of the canteen the strengths should be encouraged, while the weaknesses ought to be overcome by lowering prices and expanding the canteen if possible.
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