中考英语作文写建议【一】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
中考英语作文写建议【二】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
中考英语作文写建议【三】
春天到了，春姑娘迈着轻快的脚步向我们走来，我建议同学们到太仓的金仓湖公园去走一走，看一看。
一走进金仓湖公园的大门，眼前就呈现出一副如诗如画的景象，让你陶醉其中，正面是一望无边的金仓湖，湖面波光粼粼，湖中央还有一座小岛，小岛上全是碧绿色的大树，如同一片森林。听说这湖是人工挖掘的，真是来之不易。
就在我欣赏的时候，突然，一阵香草味迎面而来，我忍不住左一看，哇！好大的一片草坪，在春姑娘的吹动下，小草们翩翩起舞。在离草坪不远处有一座四角小亭子，还有几间可爱的小木屋，人们玩累了，可以去那里休息一会儿，如果下雨了，到小木屋里去避雨。
我往对面一看，原来右面是小朋友最爱的游乐场所。那儿有两棵粗壮的人造树，在树与树之间有一条晃动的吊桥。勇敢的你也会走上去，你往下看原来树的另一端，聪明的设计师布置了一个用冬青树围成的小迷宫，在迷宫的区域内，有吊环，踩板，木桩……让你既练了胆量，有从中获得快乐。走出迷宫，是一个光滑的水泥地，在中央，有3个旋转椅，坐在上面轻轻一转，觉得整个世界都跟随着转动起来。
接着还有很多玩的，我就不一一介绍，你们还是自己去玩一玩，看一看吧。
中考英语作文写建议【四】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
中考英语作文写建议【五】
春姑娘又迈着轻盈的脚步向我们走来。不要以为只有公园、果园里有她的足迹，其实到处都有她的踪影。趁着大好春光，我建议同学们到郑东新区走一走，看一看，那里的春天别有一番情趣。
郑东新区有许多花草树木，我最喜欢五彩缤纷的花朵儿，每种花都洋溢着春天的气息。你瞧，黄灿灿的迎春花正在向我们挥手；香气扑鼻的海棠花仿佛在向我们微笑；洁白如玉的梨花正在翩翩起舞；还有绚丽烂漫的樱花矗立枝头好像在欢迎前来观赏的人们。走进桃园，粉里透红的桃花，再配上点点嫩叶，一朵紧挨一朵，挤满了整个枝头，真是美不可言，仿佛置身于云霞之中。人们被这姹紫嫣红的美景所吸引，纷纷拍照留念，记录下这美好的瞬间。
一眼望去，蓝天白云，垂柳桃花，大草坪上一片碧绿的景象，清新的空气让人神清气爽。小朋友们你跑我追，追逐嬉戏，有的在放风筝，有的在打球、玩游戏，还有的在野餐；池塘边，小朋友们在捉鱼虾，青年们在写生绘画，老人们在锻炼身体。每个人在这里都可以尽情地欢笑、尽情地玩耍、尽情地陶醉，享受大自然的风光。
大家如果有时间，一定要来这春意盎然、充满绿色、空气清新的绿色家园玩一玩，那里的景色一定会让你流连忘返。
中考英语作文写建议【六】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
中考英语作文写建议【七】
我仿佛看见春姑娘又迈着轻盈的步伐向我们走来，她的到来，使大地万物复苏，一片生机勃勃的景象。我建议大家到园博园走一走、看一看，感受大自然，而且啊，那里的春天与众不同，别有一番情意。
上星期我和爸爸妈妈到园博园玩，我们都被那里的景色所吸引，流连忘返、不忍离开。
刚进门，我就感受到了一阵温暖的春风，那春风吹绿了柳梢、吹走了寒冷、吹青了小草、吹皱了河水、吹来了小朋友们的微笑。那一片花园里，各种鲜花逐渐盛开，个个争奇斗艳，小嫩芽们也迫不及待的探出头来看看这千姿百态的世界。再往里走走，就到了一座小山坡上。旁边柳树的枝头上有几只小鸟在愉快地歌唱，公园里到处都是山清水秀。太阳公公也再次露出了他那慈祥的笑容，散发着灿烂的光芒。孩子们脱掉了沉重的外套，正放风筝呢！“哇，真高呀！”各种各样的风筝在天空中飘荡，真是一片独特的景色。
述了这么多，你们是不是也感受到了春天的气息呢？那些剩下的美丽景色，我建议大家自己去看看，亲身体验才有意思呐！
