Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
秋天,不像百花盛开的春天那样生气勃勃,也不像绿树成荫的夏天那样处处生机。在城里人看来,秋天预示着冷清和寒冬。但野外可不一样┅┅
我们可以在周末坐车从学校出发,驶过古老的钟楼、繁华的街道,顺着环城路,穿村庄过小镇,来到我们的'目的地——野外。
田野上,鼓胀的豆角懒散地躺在地里,一片片金黄色的稻谷随风起舞,绿油油小白菜在摆手撒娇,落叶在秋风中飘舞,色彩斑斓的野花在秋日照射下更显得绚丽多姿,起起落落雀跃的小鸟,收获的大人们,嬉戏的小孩,共同构成一幅美丽、热闹的画面。
田野边,有一条小溪。远看是那样绿,绿得像一条翡翠色的绸缎。近看是那样清澈,清澈得能看见溪底的鹅卵石和小小鱼。同学们将折好的纸船放入水中,纸船在秋风的吹动下随着溪水渐渐远去。
田野的尽头,一座座山峰形态各异、连绵起伏。满山树木,野花飘香,让人感到仿佛走进画卷中,神清气爽!此时此刻,你绝不会把“常恐秋节至,焜黄华中衰”联系起来!
野外,没有学习工作的压力,没有城市令人心烦的燥音和拥挤,没有城市的汽车尾烟,没有公园的刻意造作,没有……
我们能不到野外秋游吗,我们能不在野外放飞我们的纸飞机?!
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
4月17日,汽修系组织全体教师认真观看了翟小宁教学思想研讨会报告——《教育:让生命与使命同行》。
翟小宁校长的报告主旨“真正有价值的教育一定是直指心灵的教育,是提升人生境界的教育,是培养美好品德的教育。”对教师在教学中坚持教育情怀,树立崇高教育信仰,坚持教育本真、立德树人,坚持开拓创新、融汇中外,知行合一,树立正确育人理念和从业信念都有很好的启发和借鉴意义。
汽修系组织教师集中观看了报告视频,并结合教学实际开展了教育教学思想研讨、撰写观后感。通过学习进一步领会了翟小宁校长热爱教育、献身教育的崇高信仰,心系祖国、胸怀天下的家国情怀,立德修身、仁爱为本的君子之风,追求卓越、勇于开拓的创新精神。教师们表示要在教学岗位上勤于求索、厚德包容、博学儒雅、奉献教育,人人争做“有理想信念、有道德情操、有扎实知识、有仁爱之心”的好老师,为发展更有内涵、质量更高的教育事业不懈探索。
在此次研讨会上,人大附中校长翟小宁发表了题为《教育:让生命与使命同行》的主旨报告,阐释了他对教育本质、办学理念及学校教育变革与发展的思考与实践。
教育是需要信仰的事业。翟小宁认为,教育是生命对生命的唤醒,是心灵与心灵的交融;教育可以舒展生命,使生命幸福生长;教育可以点亮心灵,使心灵觉醒升华。教育生态丰富多样,教育方式林林总总,教育方法千变万化,但无论何种样式的教育,都要以人的健康、幸福和全面发展为宗旨,都要直指人心,立德树人,培养有道德的心灵,都要以舒展生命、净化心灵、启迪智慧、提升德性、健全人格为指归。人大附中注重君子教育和良知教育。在育德方面,培养学生厚德载物,自强不息,具有传统的君子人格和精神,同时又能与世推移,崇尚民主科学,热心公益,具有现代意识;在育才方面,培养学生继承文化传统,读书行路,具有中华文化精神。
创新是一个民族的灵魂,是人类发展的不竭动力,同时也是素质教育的重要内容。翟小宁在学校的'课程建设、课程改革、教师发展等方面都有自己的创新理念和独特见解,并且积极实践探索,取得了丰硕的成果。人大附中结合STEAM教育、创客教育,将不同类型的课程进行有机结合,进行科技人才培养的同时注重全面性,面向所有学生开设了丰富多样的必修课及选修课,依照学生的兴趣进行自主选课学习。此外,学校还为学有特长或对某些领域有极高兴趣的学生提供了多种学习途径,使其能够最大限度地发挥自己的优势,形成和而不同、纵横开合的办学格局。
未来教育是人大附中一直在探索的方向。新兴技术迅速渗透到教育领域,必将引起未来教育在基础设施建设、学习方式、教育流程三个层次的重要变革。翟小宁认为,未来的课堂应是基于跨学科整合,在真实场景下以项目实践展开的深度学习。未来的人才不仅是人文和科技素养相交融的跨界创新型人才,更应是具备世界眼光且胸怀国家民族的中国脊梁。
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