20XX年12月31日,我放学后爷爷接我去我妈妈单位,这时我妈妈来电话说:“我们三个朋友要聚会”,我听了非常高兴,爷爷带我就向西餐厅“好思佳”方向走去,还没有走到我远远就看到了,我好朋友尚可宇的妈妈和马绎淳在门前等我.然后就上楼等我妈妈下班.不一会妈妈就来了,我们就开始点菜了,我们三个唱着“新年好”的歌曲开始吃饭了,我们吃完饭,来了一个非常好玩的地方那就是“名人氧吧”于是我们三个开始疯狂了,看我们的照片 看到那个是我了吧,累的我们到最后 连唱歌的力气都没有了.时间过得真快,一会时间就到了,我们该离开了,妈妈们喊着我们说:“该走了,该走了”,我们三个依依不舍的离开了.
回到家很长时间我的心情就没有平静下来,因为自从我上了一年级以来,从没有这么开心过,更没有这样快乐的玩过.我多想在这样疯狂的玩一次,不知道还有这样的机会吗?看来我要慢慢的期待了.
好糟糕的假期。没有“明月几时有?把酒问青天”的自在,没有“众里寻她千百度,蓦然回首,那人却在灯火阑珊处”的惊喜,更不必说“采菊东篱下,悠然见南山”的闲情了。面前摆的除了千奇百怪的几何线条就是畸形的蝌蚪文,耳旁还常常回荡着妈妈一句一个的“劝君莫惜金缕衣,劝君惜取少年时”的谆谆教诲。可怜她老人家望女成凤的苦心,孰不知她的苦口婆心跟《黑色星期天》的作用大同小异,逼得我直想买根面条吊死算了,哎,也只有“以手抚膺坐长叹”的份了。
眼见日近开学,再的突出重围恐怕就回天乏术了。凭着《绝代双骄》中小鱼儿的真传,我倾尽全力攻打我妈这座“碉堡”。起初,我与她促膝而坐,尽现我油嘴滑舌之本领,最终只得围着她手舞足蹈,上蹿下跳,终于得到吾母之大赦尽管只有一天而已。乐得我屁颠屁颠地狂跑欢呼,彻夜未眠地合计明天该怎么玩,生怕浪费一秒光阴。
看电视?无聊。玩电脑?没劲。游南河?更烂。哎,缘愁似个长?白发三千丈!我们满园花朵只能在这个乌龟不下蛋的鬼学海里挣扎,现在出去怎么换气都不知道了,哎!足见中国传统教学之失败呀!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
假如,今天是我这一生的最后一天,那么,第二天将会面临着痛苦的死亡,与繁华精彩的世界就此告别。就在今天,在这时,我们每个人又会做些什么?想些什么?如果是我,我将会叹息,因为自己该做的事情还没有做或是没有完成,自己远大的理想根本没有实现,如果就这样匆匆即逝,带着无限的.悔过与痛惜离开,我相信,没有人不会惋惜。就像你有一大堆工作或作业,可是你在如期上交的时刻没有完成,要上交作业时,你一定会有许多的不安与忐忑。没有完成它,你心中就会像有一块大石头堵在那里,总也落不下,做什么也不安稳。由此来说,更不用提有梦未圆,有志未报,有情未了的最后一天。
我常常听父亲抱怨,都带着惋惜与无奈地抱怨说:“我的理想是考上北大,可当初……”又常常听母亲叹息,带着悔过与无助的叹息着:“我当初要是一直努力干下去,现如今早就是……”而从他们打话中又流露出自己在时间后面追逐着,但自己却在中途打了个盹儿,这不,一个打盹,打到了中年。一想到青春,一想到那曾今的美好的那个梦,心中都隐隐作痛。突然感觉时间像是人们最把握不好的东西,又是一个战胜不了的对手。面对时间,我觉得自己太那么不堪一击了……
值得我高兴的是,我还年轻,还有很多路要走,离自己的梦想说远不远,说近不近。但我认为最远的不用质疑就是最后一天与自己未实现的梦想。每天的开始,都想一想这最后一天,我相信这会像“卧薪尝胆”一样激励着我们,催促着我们,赶快为自己的梦想努力着。每当你倦怠的时候,再想一想这最后一天,我相信这会让你加快脚步,打消倦怠和懒惰。每当你要放弃的时候也想一想这最后一天,或许你会重振旗鼓,坚持下去,迎难而上。
又是新的一天,假如这是你一生中的最后一天,你要做点什么呢?如果你每天的答案都一样,你就知道自己需要改变了……
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