初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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Ive a puppy. Its lovely and brave. My puppy has two clear eyes and four strong legs. It runs faster than any other dog. My dear puppy can see something with its his eyes, but other dog cant see them. It is also very brave. It kept other animal from attacking(袭击 me. Thats my real experience(经历. I love my dog very much.
我有一只小狗。它可爱又勇敢。我的小狗有两只清澈的眼睛和四条强壮的腿。它跑得比任何其他狗都快。我亲爱的小狗可以用它的.眼睛看到一些东西,但其他狗看不到它们。它也非常勇敢。它阻止了其他动物攻击我。这就是我的真实经历(经历)。我非常爱我的狗。
我家有一只可爱又顽皮的小狗,它已经两岁了。名字好还没有起,就叫小白白吧!但它也不是全白的,就在它出生刚满九个月的时候,背上长出了一些灰黄色的毛,就像梅花鹿身上的一朵朵小梅花。它有双一圆溜溜的小眼睛,可爱里透露着顽皮。一只小鼻子黑的发亮,摸上去滑溜溜的。一张小嘴被压最底下,一颗颗洁白而锋利的小牙,整齐的排着,红红的舌头,中间有一条细细的线。耳朵是灰黄的。脖子那儿的毛雪白雪白的,好像脖子那儿围上了一条用雪编织的围巾,十分柔软。背上有一件“毛大袄”,摸上去有点滑。它这件大袄上面也有花纹呢!
我家的小狗是个“工作狂”。它十分热爱“看家”这门职业。胡同里掉一根针,它也会“汪汪”地叫起来。如果有陌生的人来了,更别提了,那可是个狂吠不止。还曾经有人提起过说我家的小狗是一只小疯狗。(哼,我才不信呢!我认为这是小狗很爱它的工作,可爸爸却说这是狗仗人势。
我最喜欢看小狗吃瓜子了。它先把瓜子咬开,再连皮放进嘴里,一会儿,瓜子皮被小狗从嘴里吐出来,但瓜子仁就消失在小狗的嘴里了。小狗吃食时,先用它灵敏的鼻子闻闻,确定够可口后再吃。唉!真是只挑食的小狗!
小狗的尾巴是向上翘的,毛茸茸的.,雪白雪白。每天,我放学回到家,第一个来迎接我的就是小狗。它摇着毛茸茸的尾巴,用身子使劲蹭我的腿,还用前爪抱住我的腿,这时,我也会弯下身子来摸摸小狗的背。
那一年冬天,有一次,我回到家,小狗没有出来迎接我,我在屋里找了找没有小狗,我定睛一看,原来小狗正在它的窝里瑟瑟发抖,我十分心疼,连忙找来一个小褥,给小狗垫上。可小狗毫不理解我的用心,把小褥抓的遍体鳞伤,连里面的棉花都散出来了。唉!这只调皮的小狗!我想,它一定认为玩比冷暖更重要。
我喜欢小狗,更喜欢我家的小狗。你们说它是不是很可爱啊?
A month ago, my parents asked me what present did I want for my birthday, then I told them that I wanted to raise a dog. I thought they would refuse me because they did it all the time, but this time they said yes. I was so surprised. My parents believed that I have grown up enough and could take care of this puppy. Indeed, I took charge of my little dogs daily life, even including her shits. I was so happy I had someone to accompany. The moment when I got home, she would run to me and sway her tail. What a lovely scene. I treat her as my close friend. Before I sleep, I will play with her and share my secret. Now I not only can take care of myself, but also learn to look after other people.
一个月前,我爸爸妈妈问我想要什么生日礼物,我告诉他们我想养一只狗。我以为他们会拒绝我,因为他们一直都是这么做的,但这次他们答应了。我很惊讶。我的父母相信我已经长大了,有能力可以照顾这只小狗了。事实上,我照料着小狗的所有日常生活,甚至包括她的便便。我很高兴有它的陪伴。当我到家的那一刻,她就会跑到我跟前,摇摆着尾巴,多么可爱的一幕啊。我把她当作是我的密友。在我睡觉之前,我会和她一起玩,分享我的秘密。现在我不仅能照顾好自己,还学会了照顾别人。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
My dog is very cute. Body hair is light yellow, it has small ears, and eyes twinkle like black stones. Its very thin. Foreleg short, long hind feet and ran ran fast, wind.
Its living habits, is lying down to sleep, like to eat dog food, more like bone or meat, I tease it, holding the dog food for very high, it suddenly jumped up and just eat here. He eat very cute, it exhaled eat, eat with relish, it was lying bed lazy, looks very sleepy. In the evening, however, it becomes very spirit, eyes also will shine.
He like cat likes to play with thread, he when I write my homework on my side. Darling. And I watch TV together, it will look very ecstasy. When I was playing on the computer, it is very curious staring at the computer, while wang wang cried, as if to say: I want to play too!
It also likes to play football. It will roll the ball with its claws as he ran.
I sometimes lose a fly basin to make it to pick up and then back it with my mouth.
I like the dog, because it is very cute. Can also know from it the knowledge of the animals, so my dog, I like it very much.
我家的小狗很可爱。身上的毛是淡黄色的,它的耳朵小小的,,眼睛像黑宝石一闪一闪的。它很瘦。前脚短,后脚长,跑步跑得很快,像风一样。
它的生活习惯是这样的,睡觉是趴着的,喜欢吃狗粮、更喜欢吃骨头或肉,我逗它的时候,手拿的狗粮举得很高,它就猛地跳起来,一下就吃到了。他吃东西的样子很可爱,它大口大口的吃,吃的津津有味,它睡觉趴着懒洋洋的样子,看起来很困。可是,到了晚上,它就变得很精神,眼睛也会发光。
他跟小猫一样喜欢玩揉线团,他在我写作业的时候趴在我身旁。乖乖的。它和我一起看电视,还会看得很入神。我在玩电脑的时候,它就很好奇的望着电脑,一边汪汪的叫着,好像在说:我也要玩!
它还喜欢玩足球。它会一边跑一边用爪子滚着球。
我有时侯丢一个飞盆让它去捡然后它用嘴叼了回来。
我喜欢小狗,因为它很可爱。还可以从它身上知道动物的知识,所以我家的小狗,我非常的喜欢它。
我最喜欢的小狗名字叫小黑,它是一只特听话的小狗。它有一双乌黑的眼睛,这是我和它唯一可以交流的心灵之窗。它有一层黑色的毛,就像黑披风一样,还平添了几分英武。它下面的毛是白色的,十分的好看。
小黑是我的外婆外公送我的,我最喜欢小狗了。我第一次见到小黑就非常喜欢。小黑在我们家发生了许多有趣的事情。我就给你说说吧。
小黑非常调皮,只要它一看到我,就发疯了一样,往我身上狂扑,我还记得我有条裤子就是死在它的爪下。无论怎么驱赶,它都无视,于是我无可奈何得让它把我折腾一番。当他累了,到一旁休息时,我才发现我身上已经多出数几条红色的爪印。
但有时它也挺听话。有一次,它不知道怎么了,用尖爪刮地毯,我一看,怒了,大喝一声:“你再刮地毯的话我就宰了你!”它好像听懂似的立刻停止了它的行动,趴在地上一动不动。一脸无辜的样子望着我。我真不知是打是爱。
它非常喜欢管闲事。一天,一只老鼠偷偷摸摸的进了我家,在厨房偷吃。可惜被小黑看到了,这可怜的老鼠啊!鼠狗本无任何恩怨,可惜,如今,这可怜的小鼠碰到了个闲事老!小黑冲上前一把抓住老鼠,老鼠还不知道,还津津有味的吃着,过了老半天才反应过来。小黑把老鼠一放又一抓玩似的折磨老鼠。小黑真是狗拿耗子多管闲事。
我家的小黑给我们增添了很多乐趣,它在我的记忆中留下了不可磨灭的印象,小黑我会永远记住你这个好伙伴的。小黑,我最喜欢的就是你!
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