My father is of middle height.His eyes are sharp and full of expression.He always appears serious and looks like a judge.At first sight you may think he is hard to come near.In fact he is very kind and thoughtful① of others and their feelings.Appearance often makes people think wrongly; therefore we cannot give an opinion about a person by appearance.
My father is a man of success.By his own talents and efforts,he has achieved great achievements in what he does.He has not only created wealth for society but also provided our family with a rich life.Now he is well-known to people all over the city.People of all walks of life②come to my house and,as a result,I gain lots of hard-earned social experiences③and see more joys and sorrows of the world.
At home my father is a severe parent.He is very strict with my mother and me.He does not allow my mother to accept anything from others.He requires that my mother should go to office in time and leave it last.He has high expectations of me.④ When I am lazy and idling away my time⑤,I can see that it hurts him deeply.When I am doing something great,such as carrying out an experiment,he is more than excited.With such a father I am always reminded of going on and on,never giving up.
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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炎热的夏天,正是我们放暑假的时候,我可以悠闲地宅在家里,吹着空调,吃着冷饮,看着自己喜爱的电视节目,多么惬意;我可以穿上泳衣,在清澈的游泳池畅游,和好朋友追逐打闹,感受那份独有的清凉,多么舒服;每天早晚,我还可以去荷塘边,观赏那一朵朵亭亭玉立的荷花,闻着荷叶的`清香,令人神清气爽。
在我眼中,夏天是位勤劳的姑娘,用她智慧的双手带给大地勃勃的生机,带给人们无穷的希望。她催促荷花快点儿开放,早日绽放它们美丽的笑脸,让那“接天的莲叶,别样的荷花”将世界装扮得更加清丽。她让树儿快点披上豪华的绿装,让人们在遮天蔽日的树荫下休憩乘凉。她让太阳加快脚步,光芒四射,好给果子们更多的营养,给庄稼拔高的力量。
在我眼中,夏天是位神奇的粉刷匠,她挥挥画笔,世界便变得多姿多彩。她把天空染成了淡蓝色,让洁白的云朵在上面自由地飘荡,随意地变幻;她把大树染成了墨绿色,让鸟儿们有家可归,从而快乐地筑巢,放声地歌唱;她让花儿们竞相争艳,红的、白的、紫的、黄的……让大地变得色彩斑斓;她把丛林里的小溪染成翠绿色,让鱼儿在里面欢快地游动,自由地嬉戏。
在我眼中,夏天又是位优秀的音乐指挥家,她叫来各种各样的鸟儿,叽叽喳喳,唱着婉转的乐曲。又叫来蛐蛐、蝈蝈和知了,随声附和,有的清脆悦耳,有的低沉悠扬,有的缠缠绵绵,它们共同谱写了一曲大自然的赞歌。每到晚上,人们在这美妙的乐曲中进入梦乡。放下一切琐事,放松心情,以更加良好的精神状态,迎接又一个黎明的到来。
我爱夏天的勃勃生机,又爱夏天的多姿多彩。夏天带给人们无尽的遐想、无穷的希望!
Dear Lily,
How is everything? I do not see you for a long time, and I miss you very much. So I write to you. I was very busy in the last month, because I have much homework to do. The final exam is coming, so I must work hard. Besides, I must learn piano very two days. It takes me some time, but I feel happy. These are my life in recent. And what’s yours? I am looking forward to your letter and tell me about your life.
Sincerely Yours,
它身穿粉红色的连衣裙,盒盖上是一个公主,留着粉红的`头发,穿着绿色的裙子,金灿灿的高跟鞋,非常讨人喜爱。
虽然是用硬纸做成的,但很坚固,也非常耐用。它比普通文具盒要大三倍呢!我按开密码一看有三层,我都不知道该摆放了,文具盒的空间实在是太大了。
我决定把第一层放上学用时的笔,第二层有两个正方形的,右边放的是一些贴纸,左边放的是一些汽车形状的小橡皮,第三层放的是备用的笔芯。
我真恨不得把所有的文具都塞进去,摆的满满的,我特喜欢这个高级的密码文具盒。
My father is a handsome man . He is tall and medium build. He has short black hair and big eyes.
My father works in a hospital. He is a doctor. He wears a uniform in the hospital. He drives his car go to work. He is a good doctor. He loves his job.He works hard.
My father likes sports. He gets up at 6:00 clock every morning.
Then he runs go out. In the afternoon, he plays basketball.Sometimes
he plays chess with my brother.
My father also likes listening to music and watching TV. He likes
listening to the popular music. He likes action movies best. His favorite movie star is Li Xiaolong.
My father thinks healthy food is good for our health. So we eat apples every day. We don't eat French fries. We often eat vegetables,fruits and fish.
My father is also a humored man. I love my father very much.
Hi, my name is Cindy. I have a good father. I like him very much.
大家好,我叫Cindy。我有一个好爸爸。我很爱他。
My father is a policeman. He works in the police station。He is tall and strong. He looks very cool in the black police uniform.
我爸爸是一名警察。他在警察局上班。他长的很高,很强壮。他穿着黑色的制服看起来很酷。
He likes helping people. He often goes everywhere by his motorcycle. When he sees people in trouble, he will try his best to help them. He is a good policeman. And many people like him very much. But my father always has a point: Helping people is his duty.
他喜欢助人为乐。他经常骑着自己的.摩托车到处去。每当看到别人有困难,他就会努力帮助他们。但是我爸爸的观点是:帮助别人是自己的职责。
My father likes reading books very much. Because he thinks: A good book is a good friend. So he reads books after work every day.
我爸爸很喜欢看书。因为他觉得:一本好书是一个好朋友。所以他每天下班都要看说。
Sometimes he plays games with me. We are very happy.
有时候他会和我一起玩游戏。我们很开心。
I like him very much, because he is not only my father, but also my good friend.
我非常爱他,因为他不仅是我的爸爸,还是我的好朋友。
小作者分别从爸爸的职业,爱好,习惯等方面,非常形象的介绍了自己的爸爸。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
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