此类段落不论字数多少,都给人空虚的感觉。考生往往为了凑足篇幅而“不择手段”。表面看来扩展了许多,但仔细永远只有一个意思。不得不让考官觉得即单调又啰嗦。
Most female consumers shop unwisely.
不能过于空洞,也不能脱离现时,否则就失去了举例的意义。
最近闲来无事,又看了一遍这部经典的动画影片《年月的神话》,英文译名是onlyyesterday。前次看,现已是两年前了,现在现已28岁的我,越来越能从中找到共识了。
27岁的女孩妙子,一个住在东京的一般上班族,面对被催婚的压力,因从小一向神往着村庄的日子,也为了暂时逃避现实,所以向公司请了10天假,到乡间姐夫家协助采摘红花,影片从这儿打开。
在开往乡间的夜班火车上,藏在回忆深处的幼年妙子,在摇晃的车厢中从成年妙子的梦里苏醒过来。
那个神往去暑假乡间休假,终究被奶奶骗去了海滨浴场一日游的妙子;
那个与校园棒球手广田之间具有青涩模糊的初恋的妙子;
那个央求爸爸买来菠萝,成果等了一个星期,菠萝仍是又生又涩,终究得出了,生果之王的称谓,仍对错香蕉莫属定论的妙子;
那个仅有的一次挨爸爸的打的妙子;
那个考了25分数学试卷被家人以为智力有问题的妙子;
那个失去话剧排练的妙子;
那个不肯与转学生握手的妙子,等等等等。
这些生长旅程上的纤细的心绪与伤痛,全都浮现在27岁的妙子眼前。
能回忆起这么多的东西,可见年月是多么的奥妙。妙子说记起这么多五年级的回忆,是因为五年级的自己正在阅历了人生中的一个转机,那时候的伤痛没有散去,一向留在她的回忆深处。现在她踏上了这次采摘红花的村庄之旅,遇到了小她两岁的俊雄,那些无人倾诉的纤细心绪与生长的伤痛,被一点一点治好。遇到俊雄,应该是她人生中另一个严重的转机吧。
影片终究,十天假日完毕后的妙子终究遵照了良心,跳下了开往东京的火车,回到了这个她从心底喜爱上的村庄,做了她生命中最重要的'一个决议,与俊雄在一起,成为了一个真实的农妇。
看到终究,背景音乐响起,幼年的妙子和她的小伙伴拉着成年后的妙子飞驰下车,朝着俊雄跑去,眼泪又一次滑落。妙子的归宿,我想这是最好的组织,俊雄对天然、农业和一般人的知道,是那么让人惊喜和安心。俊雄很合适她,尽管妙子的年岁比他大,可他却让妙子觉得他才是那个协助认清自己的人,那是可以信赖和依托的感觉,那是让妙子想扎根下来的力气。
我想这部影片之所以能牵动到我,除了我真的老了以外,大约还觉得妙子特别像存在咱们身边的一般的人,终究离别城市,回到故土过那种本真日子的一般人。
想想自从结业后,来深圳一转眼现已7年了,最初的同学老友现已散落在天边,有的已有归宿,有的还在人海踽踽独行。有时候会觉得时刻彻底不够用,似乎一睁一闭间,年月又曩昔久,又如同有一个小偷,声势浩大的偷走了一部分。大约这便是生长的味道,纤细、苦涩、惆怅。
此类例子往往缺乏客观性和说服力,由于第一人称的局限导致所叙述事件难免“鸡毛蒜皮”。要明白,个人不代表整体。
例:I keep my dog to avoid my loneliness and I find a lot of fun.
这样的例子让人犹如在看记叙文,和议论文很不搭调。
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神,总是在主旨周围绕圈子,不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病,看似八九不离十,却总也不愿把话点破,让考官怎能不又急又气。
在所有的扩展方式之中,因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由,再扩展其结果,这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前,若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”,难免缺乏说服力,但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟,若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”,那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展,点头认同。由此可见,善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼,事半功倍。
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