如何打造英语高分作文【一】
每次去买菜，奶奶总会挤到秤杆前看老半天，生怕摊主缺斤少两。对此行为，我一直很不屑，干吗把人看得那么坏，不是谁都会做这种缺德事的，信任才能构建和谐社会嘛！——以前的我一直是这么觉得的。
我和妈妈平时都不喜欢买衣服，但一看到什么“大减价”、“几折起”就会忍不住停下来逛逛买几件。拎着“战利品”喜滋滋地回家，总觉得捡了个大便宜。减价时一定比平时更划算，这应该是大多数人都有过的想法吧？
一次放假回家，以前的一位朋友让我去她店里玩玩。因为没上高中，她家里人就给她找了份看店的工作。
一进店门，就看见她正给一排排衣服贴标签。看她那么忙我也不好意思干坐着，也起身帮她一块儿贴。依葫芦画瓢，看着她把原来的.标价撕下来，又重新贴上一个新的价码。贴了一会儿，我发现新的价格怎么都比原来贵了二三十元啊！看到我疑惑的神情，她笑了笑，说：“贴完你就知道为什么了。”她又故作神秘地笑了笑。
一个小时过去了，所有的衣服都贴上了新的价码。这工作刚结束，她又抱出一大摞花花绿绿的彩纸，贴在店门上和墙壁上，那彩纸上都写着“换季清仓”、“大减价”等字样。
这下我懂了。
“怎么能这样做呢？这不是欺骗消费者吗？”朋友无奈地耸耸肩，说：“我也没办法呀！老板交代的，这样才能吸引更多的顾客，我们才会赚钱呀！”原来顾客不是上帝，光顾折扣店的消费者原来是被商家榨取暴利的“冤大头”！
倍感失望地离开时，朋友说了一句话：“那群老板减的哪儿是价呀？减的分明是良心！”我很赞同，却也很无奈，有一种被人耍的感觉。
当“三鹿奶粉”、“红心鸭蛋”、“地沟油”等事件发生时，商家们“鼓腰包，减良心”的做法早已受到了全社会的谴责。但这种风头却一点也没减。商家怙恶不悛，顾客无可奈何，已然成了商品交易的常态。
减少了对顾客负责的态度，人们也就减少了对商家的信任，社会多了隔阂，少了应有的和谐美好，一个个恶性循环让人心冷漠了。
减掉良心，天地何容！只有人人都以诚待人、以心交心才能让社会在和谐与信任中日益美好。
如何打造英语高分作文【二】
①Recently , …has become the focus of the society . ②…has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life . ③Nowadays there is a growing concern for … ④Nowadays it is common to hear /see … ⑤…has become a common occurrence in our daily life . ⑥Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of … ⑦It is only during the last /past few years that man has become generally aware that … ⑧There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes … ⑨In recent years , there is a general tendency … ⑩Nowadays … has become a problem we have to face .(3
如何打造英语高分作文【三】
在结尾抒情，往往可以进一步打动或感染读者，让读者产生强烈的共鸣。如2010年高考一天津卷考生的作文《我生活的世界》一文的结尾：“通过我的亲人、朋友，我的世界才会有那么多的颜色，才会变得五彩缤纷。纯洁的白，热情的红，暖暖的黄，清澈的蓝……每一种颜色在我的小世界都有属于自己的一个小角落。
‘爱是什么颜色？’
‘爱没有固定的颜色，每一种颜色中都饱含亲人对你的爱。’”这个结尾，通过饱含深情的抒情语言，表达了一个盲人对色彩和爱的真实体验，感悟深，情感浓。
如何打造英语高分作文【四】
①Some people like / prefer …, while others are / feel inclined to … ②There are different opinions among people as to … Some believe … whole hold … ③Some people claim that … is superior to … Others , however , disagree with it . ④Some people believe … Others maintain … Still others claim … ⑤Some people suggest … Others , however , hold the opposite opinion . ⑥On the one hand , people tend to … On the other hand , they feel … ⑦Some people argue that … Others , in contrast , believe that … ⑧Although more and more people come to believe … there are still others who insist that … ⑨On the contrary , there are people in favor of … ⑩There are some people who hold different opinions about …(4
如何打造英语高分作文【五】
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ________(A的优点之一. Besides ____________(A的优点之二.
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ________(A的第一个缺点.To make matters worse,____________(A的第二个缺点.
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ________(我的看法.
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ________(对前景的预测.
如何打造英语高分作文【六】
①As the graph depicts , … ②From the cartoon /picture , we can see that … ③According to the statistics shown in the first /second graph , ④The table shows / indicates / reveals that … ⑤It can be seen /concluded from the picture / table / figures that …(2
如何打造英语高分作文【七】
①From what has been discussed / mentioned above , we may conclude that … ②Therefore , it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that … ③It is high time that something was done about … ④From all the reasons / consideration above , it is evident / clear / obvious that … ⑤Taking into account all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that … ⑥Given the reasons / consideration I have just outlined / discussed / presented , I strongly recommend that … ⑦It is clear , therefore , that … ⑧All in all ,what really matters is , in fact , to … ⑨It is essential that effective measure be taken to … ⑩From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that … ⑾ In conclusion ,the most important is … ⑿ On the whole , it is high time that every one … ⒀ As a result , we should take some effective steps to … ⒁ Judging by the figures / statistics , it is not difficult to see that … ⒂ Only in this way / in so doing , can be really …(6
