寒假里,妈妈专门让我看了一部电影,名叫《阿甘正传》。
这部电影很好看,主要讲了一个名叫阿甘的人,他的智商很低只有75。别人都觉得他很傻,经常嘲笑他,打他,欺负他,只有和他一起长大的珍妮对他好。虽然他智商不高,但是他却做到了很多聪明人都做不到的事。比如说他因为老是躲避追赶而练就了长跑的本领,并且因为这个本领而考上了大学,进入橄榄球队,获得成功,取得了很多次胜利,还接受了总统的接见。后来参军,又成为英雄。他去打仗后,在夜晚,给珍妮写信说他时刻想念着她,连睡觉都想念。阿甘是最喜欢珍妮的`,连他到河边捕虾的时候,给船起的名字也是珍妮。我想阿甘是真的很爱珍妮了。他打乒乓球还来访问中国,最后和朋友去捕虾也很成功,成为大老板。
看到这些我就很感慨啊,他这么傻的人居然这么事都能做好,太厉害了!这是为什么呢?原来他虽然智商不高但是他不管做什么事都会坚持不懈,一直到做好为止,他不想别的专心致志,不断地努力奋进,所以他才会成功。最后他居然有27500英磅,呵呵,他能挣这么多钱呀,虽然我的智商比他高,但是我却连学习都没有做好,看样子我付出的努力还不够,我以后也要像他一样,认认真真踏踏实实的学习,做一些了不起的事。能做成功一些事,那我也就很棒了!
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
老实讲,我从来没看过有人喜欢《阿甘正传》这部电影,今天,我却硬着头皮看了,而且看完了整部电影。阿甘是一个出生很不幸的人,由于低智商和肌肉的问题,通常人们总是认为这种人不能成功地做任何事情,但是,相反,这个不幸的人已经取得难以置信的成功,他是一个足球明星,一名战争英雄,后来是一个百万富翁。
每个人的生命都是独一无二的。阿甘正是听着这样的教诲,一步一个脚印走出属于自己的生活奇迹。幼年的阿甘智商只有75分,不得不进入特殊学校,腿有残疾,母亲不得不为儿子套上一个笨重的铁架子,以辅助行走,渐渐地, 铁架不在束缚着他,他奔跑如飞,凭他惊人的奔跑速度,阿甘进入了橄榄球队,以后又进入了大学并最终胜利。我们常说“没有教不好的学生,只有教不好的老师。”对于一些学习困难生,如果连老师都放弃了,还有谁来引导他们呢?所谓的“差生”就这样放任自流了。其实,教育中还有很多很多小点都很有感触,只是感叹虽说中国是个传统的重视教育的国家,可是仍有很多不足,希望能加快教育改革的步伐,早一日还孩子一个更加纯净温馨的环境。
阿甘的一生中只有一种爱支撑人生,那就是母爱。阿甘一生心如止水,在生命的每一个阶段,阿甘心中只有一个目标指引着他,他也只为此而踏实地、不懈地奋斗。阿甘的一生告诉了我们,上帝创造人,就像纸包着糖一样的不可预测,一切等我们自己去接晓。所以,我想对班级所谓的“差生”说:你必须明白,你和身边的人一样,你和他们并没有什么不同,没有。我们应该相信自己的能力,去做的更好。漫漫人生路,我们要像阿甘一样坦荡的面对生活,把自己仅有的智慧集中到一点,凭着自己的直觉不停的在人生路上跑。
在宾馆休息的时候,发现电视里正在播放我期盼已久的《阿甘正传》!幸运的是,电影才刚刚开始!
《阿甘正传》讲的是一个名为阿甘的男孩的励志故事。阿甘小时候智商很低,有些木讷,腿还不好,但他的妈妈并没有放弃他、抛弃他,而是要求与普通孩子一起去上学,并一直给他正能量,要求他遇到困难时不能放弃,要勇往直前。然而,在第一天上学的校车上,他就受到了同学们的排挤,只有一个小珍妮的小女孩不排斥他,并与他成为了形影不离的好朋友,直到他们长大!
后来,珍妮离开了家乡去了一个大城市,而阿甘去参了军并认识了他的战友丹。在以后珍妮不在的日子里,都是由丹陪着他度过的。阿甘一天天地上进,而珍妮却一天天颓废,她整天去夜店抽烟、喝酒、吸毒,但她活得一点儿也不快乐。有一天,她回去找到了阿甘,他们一起度过了一段快乐的时光。可珍妮又因为一些原因离开了阿甘,阿甘非常痛苦便日夜不停地绕着整个美国跑步,渐渐地,阿甘出名了,他的粉丝越来越多,直到有一天,他不跑了,他找到了丹,与他一起去海边做海产生意。后来,丹给他买了苹果股票,他成了世界首富,而就在这时,他和珍妮团聚了,他们有了自己的孩子,丹也有了自己的未婚妻,一切是多么美好啊!可珍妮却因为长时间吸毒的原因而与世长辞。但他们的孩子却分外聪明,成为了阿甘的骄傲。
我非常敬佩阿甘,他让我明白了什么是坚持,什么是努力,什么是坚强,什么是忠贞!
《阿甘正传》是1994年由美国著名导演罗伯特泽米吉斯所导的一部非常优秀的作品,讲述了一个二战结束后,在美国阿拉巴马州一个闭塞的小镇发生在一个天生有智力缺陷的孩子阿甘身上的故事。故事一开头是长大成人的阿甘,在等公交车,对旁边的人一直在讲述自己的故事,旁人像看待傻瓜一样听他啰嗦。
其实阿甘也是一个丑小鸭变身白天鹅的故事,他凭借着自己那份执着与信念,不断地获得他人的赞同,认可,以至于最后成为成功人士。
这部电影最吸引人的就是阿甘的那些话,看似像是傻瓜的自言自语,其中却饱含着人生的哲理。最让我记忆犹新的就是那句话:“人生就像这盒巧克力,你永远不知道下一块是什么味道”,简单的一句话,说透了人生。人生在世不过三万六千天,每一天都是人生中最年轻的一天。从小课堂上老师就告诉我们,要珍惜每一天,要让每一天过得充实,不虚度。慢慢的长大了,肩上的责任也就越来越多了,操心的事也越来越多。阿甘的那句话其实就告诉了我们,只要快乐的过好当下的每一天,不负青春就好,余下的日子里,谁也不知道会发生什么,我们也阻止不了什么,就像周星驰在《大话西游》里边至尊宝说的一句话“老天安排的最大嘛!”嘿嘿,我们要做的就是过好当下,无论是对家人,对朋友,对孩子,用最好的面貌面对他们,用最亲切的话语与他们交谈,把最好的爱给他们,每一天让自己成长一点,进步一点。
无论发生怎样的事,都是上天最好的安排!
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