亲爱的小主人:
你好!
收到我的来信,你一定很惊讶吧,那就让我先介绍下自己吧:我是您笔下的错别字,今天我提起笔来,想大声地向你倾诉我心中的痛苦。
记得那时啊,你可把我们这些原本正常的字弄得晕头转向,给了那些橡皮、修正液等捕猎者欺负我们的机会!我总是藏在你的笔尖里,期待着你能把我们写得正确又漂亮,让我们幸福地睡在又白又软的本子上。可是,由于你的一不留神,我那柔弱的身躯常常缺胳臂少腿,有时候甚至和远方亲戚搞错了,这下可惨了,我们被那可恶的红叉死死地关在监狱里,动弹不得,喘不过气来。还有那可怕的橡皮,昨天你用它在我的身上磨啊磨的,你可知道,我的身上真的好痛好痛,我瞬间从白纸上的光辉靓影变成了在角落旁一坨落寞的橡皮屑,真是伤心欲绝!一听到修正液的名字,我就害怕得瑟瑟发抖。那一层层灰白的脏东西黏糊糊的,腐蚀我的身体,让我差点窒息而死。前天你的妈妈又用眼睛扫到了好几个错别字,我们都被致命的修正液给淹没了。可怜的我们再也看不到湛蓝的天空,悠悠的白云,绿绿的草地……还有那美好的.明天!
想到在学校里,你还让我们个个都出了丑,闹出不少的笑话呢!我的亲戚朋友,也都被小主人毁了容。被折磨得最惨的还数我的好朋友群,你竟然把它写成了羊君。怪不得班里的同学都笑得前仰后合呢!
小主人啊小主人,你真得改改粗心的毛病啦!要不,既连累了我们,又害了你自己,这是何苦呢?不过,我们所有小伙伴都对你有信心,相信你一定可以改掉常写错别字的毛病的。
祝你
告别粗心,取得进步!
你的字朋友
20xx年7月7日
我们贵州省清镇市有机化工总厂有一个美丽的小公园,叫“水上乐园”。 水上乐园的门是一个“月亮门”,上方写着四个鲜红的大字—水上乐园。 走进月亮门,一座弯弯曲曲的浮桥展现在眼前。桥下有清澈、碧绿的池水,水里有一群群活泼的小鱼正在玩耍、嬉戏。 在浮桥的右侧,有一座石头砌成的别致的“荷叶桥”。走过荷叶桥,就到了一个亭子。跨进亭子,能看见柱子上、天花板上绘着许多漂亮的油画,每一幅油画都是一个美丽、动人的传说。 在靠近亭子右边的水中,有一座假山。假山顶上,有一棵小柳树。微风吹来,小小的柳树轻盈地左右摆动;水中,时而可见一条条金黄色的小鱼在假山四周悠闲地游动。
从假山上又走回浮桥上,再朝前走几步,就到了拱桥。拱桥两旁是洁白的栏杆。拱桥倒映在微波荡漾的水里,就像一只大大的眼睛在眨动着。走下拱桥,可看见好几条颜色各异的小船拴在浮桥旁随风轻轻摇摆。夏天,人们一边划船,一边谈天,有多么惬意啊! 沿着浮桥再往前走,就到了一座休息亭。休息亭的天花板上也画了许多油画,显得古香古色。夏天,人们可以在里面乘凉,傍晚,还有一些老年人在这里下棋呢! 顺着休息亭再往前走,就能看见一个高架的电动飞椅。
只要你坐上去,电动飞椅转了起来,就会看见那水边的柳树,长长的柔枝像少女的长发随风飘动;还能看见下面绿毯似的草地上开着的红、黄、蓝、白、紫等五颜六色的鲜花,随着电动飞椅的快速旋转,构成一道彩虹,美丽极了。 我爱这水上乐园,它给人们带来欢乐;我更爱有机化工总厂的叔叔阿姨们,他们有着创造美好生活的心灵啊!
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
我家的旁边,有一个小公园,那是我最喜欢去的地方。
春天时,公园内景色怡人,柳树姐姐的长发随风而飘,小草弟弟从土里钻了出来,正在享受着它的“日光浴”,美丽的花朵妹妹正在高兴和姐妹们交谈着什么。
人们在慢慢地散步,还有那些阿姨们聚在广场中央,跳着精彩的广场舞,孩子们在比赛跑步、堆沙子、踢足球,你追我赶,玩得不亦乐乎。
夏天,荷花妹妹从水中露面,只见她那粉红的脸蛋,好像看到别人给她拍照时的害羞的'表情呢!青蛙弟弟开心的跳着舞,鱼儿们也天天在他身旁跳舞,从而有了那曼妙的身材。
人们在一起交谈,老爷爷们一边下象棋,一边喝着茶。
最美的,要属那音乐喷泉了,忽高忽低的水柱让人们激动不已,孩子们欢快地在水中奔跑,多么清凉呀!
秋天,也是这里最美的时候,风姑娘缓缓地吹来那清凉的风,杏叶从杏树爷爷的头上掉了下来,形成了一场“杏叶雨”,另一旁的蝴蝶仿佛在笑着说:“爷爷,你又掉头发了!”
大家在那冰凉的石板上坐下,拾一片杏叶,捡一根树枝,不一会儿就完场了一幅佳作——林!
冬天了,大雪如同鹅毛般洒落,大地瞬间变成了一个素白的世界,一切都是那么的安静、圣洁!白茫茫的一片。
可是有一种花,它成了点缀物,那是梅花,粉红的身躯,好似那火焰!如此的漂亮!
孩子们打雪仗、堆雪人、滑雪板,无比开心。
这时,我想起了***曾写过的一首诗,是这样的,“北国风光,千里冰封,万里雪飘!”多么的雄伟啊!
这就是我们的公园,多么的美丽、景色怡人,因此,我爱它至极。
我家小区里有一个中心公园,春天来了,公园里杨柳依依,鸟语花香,行人如织,它虽然不大,却承载了我放学后的快乐时光。
这个小公园其实并不长,但是,一进入公园,你会看到一条弯弯曲曲的小路向前延申,小路的两侧,各有一个不高的小山丘,让人有一种曲径通幽的感觉。不远处,你的视线里出现了一条小溪,小溪的水清澈见底,流水潺潺,一直流向远方。走着走着你会遇到一个小亭子,走累了,或者下雨天,人们可以在里面休息。小公园里有一个人工湖,到了夏天,人们就放很多金鱼在里面,金鱼在湖里面自由地游来游去,吸引了小孩子在岸边喂食。湖中间有一个湖心岛,上面有座椅,小桥,在湖心岛上休息,偶尔还会听到青蛙的叫声,和鸟叫声交织在一起,汇成一首动听的旋律。
小公园里有高大的松树,开着花的槐树,大大叶子的椴树,杏树,已经结出果子的海棠树,开着米色小花的葡萄树;还要许多低矮的灌木,花园里还有各种小草,有玉簪,开着紫色小花的野蓟,开黄花的苦荬草,还有开着小铃铛的风铃草,风儿吹过,仿佛风铃在风中摇曳,好像要奏响一曲春的乐曲。
只要一有空,我就和妈妈去小公园散步,骑车,优美的景色让我忘了一天的辛苦,让我有一种回家的感觉。
我和妈妈常常去小公园散步,骑车,它是那么慷慨,它从不拒绝我,不管是春夏秋冬,它都在那里。
在我的书桌上,摆着一个精致小巧的小闹钟。这个闹钟是妈妈一年级给我买的,它已经陪伴我6年的时光了。如今小闹钟已成为我最亲密的`伙伴,我非常喜欢它。
这个小闹钟外形像一只公鸡,我叫它公鸡小闹钟。闹钟上有一个大红冠子,红扑扑的脸上有两只黑溜溜的大眼睛;金黄的爪子成了它的底座;浅黄色的钟壳镶在它的腹部。小闹钟正面有一圈金边,金边的正中间镶着一块玻璃片,在玻璃片里有着三根永不停息的针,这三根针在雪白的表盘上赛跑。时针又短又粗,分钟不粗不细,秒针是最细的,别看它最细,它可是这三根针中跑得最快的。每到12点钟,这三根针就会相聚,不过它们相聚的时间也只有一秒钟,真是太短暂了。
小闹钟发出的声音很好听。平时它唱的是“滴答、滴答”的歌,到了早上,它就会“铃、铃、铃”的长鸣,好象在说“快起床,小懒猪!”
小闹钟不仅好看,它还教会了我要珍惜时间。记得有一回,我刚拿出课本准备写作业,电视里传出了一阵悦耳的音乐声,我一看,原来是我喜欢看的动画片,我便津津有味的看了起来。这时,我听到了一个熟悉的声音——“滴答、滴答”,好象是在提醒我快点写作业。这个声音是多么的严厉,又是多么的亲切啊!我赶紧关掉了电视,在“滴答、滴答”声中专心致志地写起作业来。
小闹钟不仅让我知道时间,而且还教会我要珍惜时间。我真想让小闹钟休息一下,可它日夜不停地走着,不知疲倦地发出“滴答、滴答”的响声。
我爱你——可爱的公鸡小闹钟!
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