尽管……可是……,虽然……但是……,……却……,……然而……
尊敬的领导:
您好!
我是xx,是XX月XX号XX位面试者中来自xx校区的大四本科生。感谢xxx公司给了我一个面试的机会。这次面试,从各方面,开阔了我的视野,增长了见识,给我予全方面不同的改进,相信您对我各方面综合能力的肯定,一定能增强我的竞争优势,让我在求职的路上更加坚定自己的信心。感谢公司对我的关爱,感谢公司给我的这次毕生难忘的经历!无论这次我是否能被公司录用,我更坚信――选择xxx公司是明智之举。无论今后我会在哪个单位上班,我都将尽心尽责做一位具有强烈责任感,与单位荣辱与共的员工,一位扎根于单位,立志为社会创造最大价值的攀登者,一位积极进取,脚踏实地而又极具创新意识的新型人才。大千世界,芸芸众生,如我者甚众,胜我者恒多。虽然现在还很平凡但勤奋进取永不服输。如蒙不弃,惠于录用,必将竭尽才智,为公司鞠躬尽瘁!感谢的同时,祝贵单位事业蒸蒸日上,一帆风顺!
此致
敬礼!
写信人:XX
20xx年xx月xx日
尊敬的XXX:
您好!我是12月15日上午到贵公司应聘办公室职员的xx。非常感谢您给了我这次面试机会!很高兴认识您,跟您的谈话是一次愉快而收获甚大的经历。
通过这次谈话,我更加深刻地认识了贵公司,尤其是贵公司企业文化,感受到这是一家有社会责任感的公司。同时感谢您对我“大学生要闯一闯”的认同和赞许;在面谈中,您对公司的真挚情感溢于言表,您专业资深、人际娴熟、深入细微的洞察力、亲和力以及您的谈吐,都令我敬佩不已,也是我今后学习的榜样!能够与您认识是我的荣幸,若能进入公司协助您办事,得到您的指点,共同为实现企业目标而努力,将是我职业生涯中的一件幸事面试中,我也了解到此岗位的职责与要求,纵观自己的学习、实践经历,加之通过以后不断的学习和努力,我完全有信心胜任此工作岗位,同时通过贵公司的指导和帮助,我在电子商务领域内会很快成长的,在这里就本人应聘办公室职员岗位的特长,结合您的问题,总结几点如下:
其一、贵公司的产品技术含量高,与我所学的专业吻合,相信专业出身的我对产品性能、技术指标的深入了解,一定有助于销售目标的达成;其二、尽管我在平时与人交往上比较平和,但对于销售工作,我还是非常有激情的,愿意投入自己的全部人脉、时间与精力,把销售工作做好;其三、虽然是应届毕业生,但在以往,我也参与本专业论坛的管理与市场推广、广告赞助等活动,积累了一定的销售经验。
我自信在贵公司的这个岗位上,我是最合适的。我迫切希望公司能给我一次锻炼的机会,我必将全力以赴、不辱使命甚至超越公司对我的期望,为公司发展做出应有的贡献!真诚希望能有机会和您共同工作,期待能为公司的发展贡献一份力量,期待贵公司是我职业生涯开始的地方。
此致
敬礼!
20xx年xx月xx日
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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