记得有一次,我们学校举行朗读比赛。可我们班只选了几位代表去参加比赛。我想:若能参加比赛,既能练口才,又能增强胆量,那可是一举两得的事了。于是我就毫不犹豫地举起手报名了。等到老师公布名单时。您们也许都猜到吧,以我的实力。我一定被选上了。在接下来的日子里,我们开始排练,每天起早摸黑,一遍又一遍地朗读着要参赛的课文,既把课文读得滚瓜烂熟,倒背如流,又富有真情实感了。到了比赛那一天,我们怀着激动又紧张的心情来到了学校,到了学校后,我们匆匆地进行了最后一次排练。然后讨论着怎样去争取第一。有一句话,那就是团结就是力量!刚刚讨论完,比赛的铃声就响起来了,我们赶紧陆续地走到礼堂排队。 比赛开始了,我们抽到第十八个上场的,就坐在台下边看别人朗读边想着台词。渐渐地,一个班接一个班的朗读完了,终于轮到我们上场了,我们个个精神抖擞﹑高兴地走到台上。排好队伍,个个挺直腰板,怀着必抢第一名的决心。开始了我人生中的第一次朗读比赛,我们紧捏着流满汗水的手,用富有感情的声调大声地朗读,台下的掌声一个高潮接着一个高潮,也把我们的情感推到顶峰。在一片片掌声中我们完成了朗读内容,个个阳光满面地走下台来。我们想这激烈的掌声也证实了我们的成功。第一名一定是我们的! 演讲结束了。得分也出来了,结果让我们出乎意料,我们只获得了三等奖。为此,我们个个愤愤不平,但想到这次比赛还是重在参与,也有句话说:”失败是成功之母”。我们会以这次的失败为教训,找出原因。克服缺点。争取以后的胜利!所以我也就欣然接受了这个三等奖。
首先由妈妈来读:“今天凌晨六点种,台风魔王黑格比就来捣乱了。黑格比拿着魔杖,披着黑色斗篷,拉着暴雨女王从天上飞下来,咆哮着:“谁不怕的!就来和我黑格比决斗啊!“决斗就决斗!我才不怕你!”读到这里的时候,妈妈让我来扮演小树,我站起来学着小树大声的喊道,并作出小树不服输的姿势。
当读到黑格比残忍的吹打着小树,打得她眼泪哗哗地流。激怒了小树的爸爸时,爸爸也扮演着小树的爸爸怒喝到:“你以为她是好欺负的吗?......”当读到全校的师生都来了以后,黑格比魔王抓走了一个同学时,大家发现不能硬冲,硬冲会有危险。就开始想办法:我们要团结起来,和大家手拉着手,使黑格比的阴谋不能得逞!当读到大家手拉手,肩并肩,围成了一道厚厚的“长城”,把黑格比挡在了外面。无论黑格比怎么进攻,大家都咬着牙、顶着风,坚决不让黑格比破坏他们的防线。黑格比无法进攻,只好灰溜溜地走了。喔!树木胜利啦!我们大叫了起来,为树木的成功拍手称快!
妈妈读完,该我朗读了,我站在爸爸妈妈的面前,大声地读了起来,在读的过程中,爸爸妈妈在旁边扮演着其中的\'角色,大家又感受了一次树木的胜利,开心的笑着。
等到爸爸读的时候,我和妈妈就在一旁扮演着里面的角色,我们学着小树的声音勇敢的大声回击黑格比;当黑格比抓走了一个同学以后,树木变得更团结了,手拉着手,肩并着肩......我和妈妈就把手紧紧的拉在一起,身体左右摇摆着,扮演着在暴风中不屈不挠的小树和它的同伴们......
读书比赛结束了,我们评这次读书比赛中妈妈朗读的最好,得了第一名。我在读的时候,有些生字不认识,读的时候有时会断断续续,得了第二名。爸爸普通话不标准,得了第三名。
读书会很快就结束了,我真是太喜欢这样的比赛啦,爸爸妈妈说读书会以后每星期举行一次。啊!我真是太期待下一次读书能快点到来呀!
星期一那天,老师对我们说:“学校将展开第一届朗读比赛,就在下一个星期五举行。”我们听了都很有信心地说:“我们是非常棒的,我们一定能赢。”可有些人迫不及待就问老师:“我们读哪一篇课文呀?”老师听了就拿起粉笔来,在黑板上写了“鼎湖山听泉”这五个大字,同学们看了就连忙拿起课文,先熟悉一下课文,再开始放声朗读。
后来的十几天里,老师一直在给我们指点我们怎么读好课文,怎么把自己的感情显现出来。
终于到了比赛那天,同学们都穿着整齐的校服,来到了比赛的阶梯教室,这时我们的心里都非常紧张,心“砰砰”乱跳,因为我们是最后一个上场比赛的班级,所以我们吸取了别的班朗读上的弊病,这样使我们班读得更好。
过了一会儿,该我们班朗读了,我们大家都鼓起勇气上台站好队形,我们用最洪亮的声音、浓厚的感情朗读了起来,特别是我们班的黄晓琨同学领读的部分读得非常帅,当我们朗读完毕的时候,得到了全场的热烈掌声,我们心里那块沉重的“大石头”完全放了下来,这时同学们的脸上浮起了笑容。
这次朗读的成功,是同学们集体努力的结果,但也有我们祝老师的一份功劳啊!
今天下午,是我们升入四年级以来举行的第一次朗读比赛,这次朗读的内容是第二单元的四篇课文。我在星期天已经把课文读得滚瓜烂熟了,并且感情也很到位,我觉得我这次一定可以得到冠军的,因为老师说“成功是留给有准备的人”的。
朗读比赛开始了,这次比赛是抽签式的。李老师先从装有课文内容的盒子里抽出了一个白色的小纸条,李老师大声的念着:“第八课的第二段”。我听到后,心想:这次一定不要抽到我啊,这一段课文太长了,并且出错的地方一定也很多!我心里默默地祈祷着。“王——”老师故意拉长声音,我的心提到了嗓子眼了,认真地听老师读完这个名字。“王——亚——博”,我顿时深深地呼出一口气,为自己感到非常幸运。王亚博利索的站了起来,很流利的读完了这一段,他表现得很出色,老师和同学们都为他鼓起了雷鸣般的掌声,以此鼓励。
过了五分钟,李老师又抽到了那篇课文(第八课的第二段),我跟同桌赵子萱打赌:“这一次肯定抽不到我”。结过,李老师真的抽到了我的名字,真是“躲过了初一,躲不过十五”。我慢吞吞地站起来,眼睛还时不时地看第二段的内容,争取再熟悉一遍。我深吸一口气,定了定神。开始大声朗读起来,同时,我暗暗叮嘱自己千万别读错字,别漏字,一定要向同学们展示最出色的自己。我读着读着被作者母亲讲的话感动了。这段主要讲:作者陪自己的母亲去医院看病,扎针的时候,因为护士是实习生所以扎了两针也没有成功,在母亲的鼓励下果然成功了。我富有感情的读完了这一段,对我自己的表现还很满意。
这次朗读比赛我虽然没有取得名次,但是我会继续努力的,争取下次能取得好成绩。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
这个星期的星期三,我校举办了三年级朗诵比赛。这可不是每个年级都可以来看,只有我们三年级可以来看噢!黄老师今天给我们班同学打扮地很特别,全班同学都身穿礼服,女孩子每个人都扎两辨子,至于男孩子吗,我就不用说啦!
第一节美术课刚下课,有一些同学迅速地背好书包,飞快地跑到一楼了。等所有的人全都到了,班长说了好几声排队,队伍依然是一点也不整齐,就在这最关键的时刻——黄老师来了,黄老师见了我们非常不高兴,我们大家见黄老师这样,才慢吞吞地排好队。黄老师带我们来到比赛的地点,我们坐在地板上,很有耐心地等待比赛的到来。比赛终于到来了,第一个过去了,第二个也过去,第三个终于来了,我们迫不急待地走上声,我们念得是《中国随想》,随着音乐的响起,我们异口同声地朗读起来了,但是,又很快地结束了。最后,我们班的李子涵同学朗读了一首诗歌,精彩的朗诵比赛就结束了。
我是我们班第一次参加朗诵比赛,虽然有一些同学表现得不好,但是也让我们学到了很多,也增强了我们对班集体的热爱,我希望我们能取得优异的成绩!
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
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