六年级写安徒生作文英语【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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六年级写安徒生作文英语【二】
对于写作文，算是习惯了，木木然地浏览书目，心里盘算着随便找本写一通大道理应付得了，眼帘中却映入《安徒生童话》的字样，心里有个什么东西突然被揪了一下。“童话，安徒生童话……”心里默默念到。我不明白，自己为什么会如此执着于写安徒生童话，或许因为这些童话是童年的象征吧，又或许它在记忆里尘封太久了吧。也许安徒生童话太幼稚，可人生不就是一部部童话吗?
就像《卖火柴的小女孩》，漫漫的寒冷黑夜，小女孩独自一人守候着一篮火柴，没有人可怜没有人同情，大家都只是过路人。但她心中仍有自己的美好幻想，圣诞树、暖炉、满桌的饭和爱自己的奶奶，她划着手中的火柴……生活并不是每一处都充满阳光与温暖，寒冷的黑夜也会常常光顾，这时我们需要的或许只是手中的这一根火柴，不忘记怀揣梦想用它照亮希望。
又像《丑小鸭》，出生在养鸭场里的白天鹅，因为外表丑陋与其他小鸡不同而处处受排挤，但他心怀梦想，经历坎坷与寒冬，终于蜕变长大。人生充满了攀比与不公，我们或许觉得自己不如别人，或许自卑至使我们觉得自己就像一只丑小鸭，与周围的人与世界是那么格格不入，但是我们不应就此抛弃自己的梦想自暴自弃，而是怀着信念坚持拼搏，相信总有一天我们也会蜕变成美丽的白天鹅。因为，是金子总会发光。同时，我们更不应该为了自己的一点点出众而沾沾自喜，去排挤嘲笑别人，因为我们永远不会知道，在丑小鸭平凡的外表下，有怎样一颗炽热的心。
还有《皇帝的新装》，皇帝为满足虚荣而雇来骗子，骗子又利用人们的虚伪与自欺欺人获得暴利，对于一件根本不存在的衣服，人们却对它赞不绝口，最后一声孩子天真的话语道破骗局。生活无时无刻不在改变着我们，我们也在成长之路上渐渐的丢失了自己，变的像童话里的人们一样。希望我们不要再将自己丢失，回头慢慢找回那个诚实的\'自己。
安徒生的童话是给孩子们讲的，而不同年龄段的人却能从中获得更多不同的人生感悟。也许这才是安徒生童话能够经久不衰的.最重要的原因。从表面上来看，他是给孩子写童话。而实际上，他是在写回忆，写幸福，写人生。
童话固然曲折美好，但人生不也是如此，我们总在坎坷中开始，在拼搏中向前，在美好中结尾。总要拍拍童话上的尘土，时不时翻翻回忆，这样无论何时，无论何地，只要偶然与之相遇，便能哼出儿时的旋律。
六年级写安徒生作文英语【三】
童话是每个孩子必看的好书，它像一首首美妙的诗歌和一幅幅逼真的画面深深地映入我们的脑海里。童话界最有名的要数《安徒生童话》和《格林童话》了，我最喜欢的是《安徒生童话》，拿起这本书我就爱不释手。
《安徒生童话》把小巧的拇指姑娘、美丽的小人鱼、聪明的小克劳斯和残忍的大克劳斯、坚定的锡兵、可爱的白雪公主和可怜的卖火柴的小女孩等人物刻画地栩栩如生。最可笑的是爱穿新衣的愚蠢的国王，被两个骗子骗得失去了辨别能力，一丝不挂地在街上走，直到一个天真的小孩说出了真相……。。
作者安徒生希望人间出现一个美丽幸福的世界，在这个世界里人们都具有高尚的品质和理想、勇敢和舍己救人的献身精神。“拇指姑娘”——她虽然长得身材微小，但她能乐于助人，追求光明，终于也得了自己的幸福生活。卖火柴的小女孩——她虽然一贫如洗，在寒冷的冬夜忍着饥饿卖着火柴，但她渴望温暖和光明，在一根根火柴燃烧放出光芒的时候，跟着慈祥的祖母走向没有饥饿没有寒冷的地方。
我喜欢看这本书，它让我们明白什么是善良、勤劳、勇敢、坚强、朴素、健康。让我们向着安徒生的美好希望走去吧！
六年级写安徒生作文英语【四】
我喜欢的一本书是《安徒生童话》，其中有一篇《卖火柴的小女孩》给我留下了深刻的印象。
故事讲了：在一个新年的夜里，天上下着鹅毛般的大雪，街上行人已经很少了，大家都围着火炉吃东西……。可卖火柴的小女孩还要光着脚，穿着单薄的衣服在寒冷的大街上卖她还没卖完的火柴，因为她不卖完就不准回家。这时她又冷又饿只好在一个墙角靠擦火柴取暖。看着别人家围着火炉热闹的样子，不由地想起自己的妈妈和老祖母，于是她划过第一根火柴，透过火柴的火焰她看了火炉和食物……因为她现在最需要了。她划过第二根火柴她看见慈爱的妈妈，妈妈用温暖的手抚摸着她的头。“她就这样划了一根又一根……。划到最后一根火柴她看见了自己的老祖母，慈祥的老祖母疼爱把小女孩抱在怀里，最后老祖母带着小女孩飞到了一个没有饥饿没有忧愁的地方……。”读到在我的眼眶湿润了，如果她在我身边我定会把她带回家里给她一些吃的或一件新衣服什么的，看着她，再看看我们，生活在一个温暖的家庭里，吃着爸爸妈妈做得香喷喷的饭菜，看着好看的电视，过着衣食无忧的生活，而这些快乐和幸福对她来说都是那么遥不可及，而我们却常常埋怨爸爸妈妈这样或那样，你觉得这样应该吗?
这个故事让我明白了：我们要珍惜现在的美好生活的同时要好好学习，以后做一个有用的人才。同时也要帮助一些需要帮助的人。我相信人人献出一点爱，人间永远是春天。
