不能过于空洞,也不能脱离现时,否则就失去了举例的意义。
岩石的缝隙里掉进一些松树种子,后来成活了八株小松树。土地贫瘠,山风暴虐,八株小松树艰难地生长着。
三年后,一个农夫上山,看到了小松树,想把它们移回去,栽在房前屋后。他只刨了五棵,因为另外三棵太瘦小,怕移回去活不过来,就没有要。
十年后,一个园艺师来到高山上,看到这三棵松树是优质品种,想把它们移到公园里去供人观赏。他移走了两棵,还有一棵因为长在山岩边,人上不去,就放弃了。
剩下的一棵松树看到同伴们都被运走,直怪自己长在偏僻处,不然就不用在这山里承受寂寞和苦难了。又经历了无数个春夏秋冬,那棵松树不再哀叹命运的不公,而是坚守足下的土地,承受着狂风严霜,鼓足劲头生长。
两百年后,一条山路从山下修了上来。上山观光的人络绎不绝,都惊叹那棵松树的高大奇绝——它背山临谷,云遮雾绕,苍虬挺拔,亭亭如盖……
不久,一个很有学问的人为它竖了一块牌子,上书“天下第一松”。
那棵松树错过了两次改变命运的机会,却成了“天下第一松”。可见,比机会更加重要的是坚守足下的`土地。
时间状语和地点状语,都是你的扩句好朋友,不信我们来看:
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money in their early ages.(时间状语
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on luxurious purchases.(名词状语
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on souvenirs.(名词状语
即使是状语,也可以通过叠加将句子变得更加丰满。有能力的烤鸭当然可以通过状语从句定语从句等等来让句子更不一样。
在写作时我们同样需要注意词汇搭配的问题,下面让我们来看一个雅思写作的常见句子:
Advertisements have influences on people.
相信所有备考过关于广告和传播话题的烤鸭对这个句子都不会陌生对不对,那么我们现在开始试着扩句。
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
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