本文的“说理”非常成功。原因有二:一是作者客观、冷静而又饱含感情地分析了美貌、机敏、金钱等失去了诚信后的“危机”,显得全面而科学;二是用散文或诗一般的语言说理,显得活泼生动,具有可读性,富有吸引力;三是说理不矫揉造作,不生硬牵强,如谈话一般,娓娓道来,显得朴实亲切。因此,该文虽然创新成分不浓,但仍是一篇难得的佳作。
Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
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