To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
每一座山,每一条河,每一只鸟,每一朵花
甚至阳光,甚至雨露
只是人所承受的挤压不仅仅是物理学上的大气压,还是物质的压力,精神的压力,还有感情的压力。
汶川的地震使我明白,我们的地板一直在运运,而险峻的高峰就是挤压的产物,当然挤压不仅形成高峻的山峰,还有低洼的盆地。我只能说上帝的创造是公平的.,只是盆地不能承受剧烈挤压,最终堕落,深陷黑暗,生活的社会低层。
我所说上帝是公平的,即使是盆地也有一次拯救,去接受更剧烈的挤压,踩着痛苦的刀子,增加自己的积累和自己的高度,只是这种奇迹所承受的挤压,便使小生怕怕。
我们是高四,我们在创造奇迹的路上。而我等的心理防卫是否可抵挡无限的痛苦、剧烈的挤压。希望不会像挤青春痘那样,太大的挤压使面孔不能承受,最后搞得皮开肉绽,血肉模糊。至那时。
我们的脸往哪搁?
古往今来,如果没有压力,人类便不会制造工具,汉武帝也没必要强兵兴国,唐太宗更是不会登上皇位。当今世界,科技迅速发展,产品更新速度之快令人咂舌,为什么?这都是因为企业间面临着激烈竞争的压力,它们,创造了奇迹。
中国自建国以来,为什么能迅速发展?就是因为外国的坚船利炮等着再一次轰开我国国门!这份压力,迫使我们迅速发展、成长。正如自然界的动物,有的刚出生不足一小时就可以和大部队一同奔跑,猎食者不会因你的弱小而放弃,而会因为你的弱小而兴奋,要活命,必须成长!
有压力和没压力时做一件事,效果是截然不同的。一件事,没有压力时,你可能会闲懒散漫,轻松惬意慢吞吞做着,心里只觉得不急不急,可一旦有了压力,便会全神贯注,浑身上下都在全力运转,效率成倍提高。但过多的压力也会让人的心弦紧绷,如同弓弦一般,终于“啪——”的一声,彻底崩溃。而且过多的压力还会急剧降低反应能力、灵活能力,让人变得迟钝,更会让绝望的感觉充斥心间。
历史上有不少压力过大而自***的人,也有不少因压力而成功的人。对于压力,我们要控制它,该紧绷就应紧绷,该放松就应放松,唯有这样,我们才能更好地发挥出我们自身的潜力,释放出独属于自己的独特的光芒!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
科技是人类进步的桥梁,在我们现实生活中的每个角落,科技产品随处可见。
现在,一个科技十分发达的世纪,所有人都信赖着科技,当然,从衣、食、住、行,以及人的沟通方式都有很大的变化。未来式的变化会更大。
衣,远古时期人们就穿的都是用树上的树叶或者是地下的小草编制的衣服。新中国成立以后,人们就穿的纯棉,皮衣,羽绒,等极其高档华丽的衣服。
食,不必多说。以前人们吃饭都是吃一些窝窝头,再带一些蔬菜,当然,如果生活条件不好时,就会每天忍饥挨饿,甚至有些伟大的父母为使不让自己的孩子饿死把自己所有的食物让给自己的孩子吃,自己一口不吃。而,我们现在,不用说过年过节了,只要我们有金钱就可以买到世界各地丰富的山珍海味,时令蔬菜,新鲜水果。
住,从以前的茅草屋到现在的水泥、砖瓦楼房。以前的茅草屋又矮又小,最多容下两三个人。可现在却不一样了!现在的楼房一栋栋摩天大楼拔地而起,如雨后的竹笋那样比比皆是。
行,最明显不过了。从以前的乡村小马路变成了如今宽阔平稳的水泥路。以前,战争时期能骑上自行的人还真不多。那时只有当官的才买得起。不管是从中国到美国,还是从美国到英国,都是用行驶较慢的火车来运输。而,如今就连我们这样的小学生也不太喜欢骑自行车,别说大人了。对于我们现代人来说汽车,火车,飞机,可真是天壤之别啊。
所有这些变化都是科技进步发展的功劳。
科技的变化全是融入生活中的点点滴滴了,我相信随着科技的发展,我们的生活一定会变得更加幸福美好,祖国的明天也一定会变得更加繁荣富强!
科技发达的令外国人都刮目相看!科技给我们带来了日新月异的变化,我们不得不相信,只要我们努力学习科学文化知识,提高我们的素质,我们的生活也一定会锦上添花!
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