雅思作文纠错【一】
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
雅思作文纠错【二】
此类段落不论字数多少，都给人空虚的感觉。考生往往为了凑足篇幅而“不择手段”。表面看来扩展了许多，但仔细永远只有一个意思。不得不让考官觉得即单调又啰嗦。
雅思作文纠错【三】
写作我也一直不差，因为以前背过新概念的一些文章。雅思的其实想要提高也不是难事，我买了一本《雅思万能八分作文》，还不错，里面有很多句子值得借鉴；然后我看了一些从3G上下载的范文，又从里面挑了一些句子和表达；在最后一天的时候，把我挑的句子和表达都罗列在一起，大概也就50条左右，我背了一下，接着就计时练了一次，结果在规定时间内直接写超了，TASK1写了200多，TASK2写了350，当时把我吓了一跳，因为我怕考试的时候按这样的思路写这么多时间会不够。所以在考试的时候，我写的比较慢，控制好节奏，每句话都是想好了再下笔的，最后字数差不多。
建议：1，一定要看一定数目的
雅思作文纠错【四】
即按事情或动作的先后顺序表达.
例如:7月27日凌晨两点,九江赛城湖的大堤塌陷了.//400多名官兵闻讯赶到.支队长一声令下:"上!"顿时,一条长龙在崩塌的堤坝下出现了.官兵们肩扛沉重的沙包,在泥水中来回穿梭.有的为了行走快捷,索性赤脚奔跑起来.嶙峋的片儿石割破了脚趾,他们全然不顾,心中只有一个念头:"大堤,保住大堤!"//狂风卷着巨浪,猛烈地撕扯着堤岸.战士们高声喊道:"狂风为我们呐喊!暴雨为我们助威!巨浪为我们加油!"一个个奋勇跳入水中,用自己的血肉之躯筑起了一道人墙.//经过几个小时的鏖战,大堤保住了,官兵们浑身上下却是伤痕累累."风声雨声涛声,声声震耳;雨水汗水血水,水水相融."这是人民子弟兵在这场惊心动魄的大决战中的真实写照.
这一自然段共有四层意思,把四层意思归纳起来概括段意:
当九江赛城湖大堤塌陷时,官兵们闻讯赶到,扛沙包,筑人墙,终于保住了大堤.
通过上面对顺承式组合自然段方法的内容讲解学习，相信同学们已经能很好的掌握。
雅思作文纠错【五】
太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹，缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例：A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.（一项调查显示。。。）
"65%"让文章看起来有些假，有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
雅思作文纠错【六】
时间状语和地点状语，都是你的扩句好朋友，不信我们来看：
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money in their early ages.(时间状语
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on luxurious purchases.(名词状语
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on souvenirs.(名词状语
即使是状语，也可以通过叠加将句子变得更加丰满。有能力的烤鸭当然可以通过状语从句定语从句等等来让句子更不一样。
