青岛四十七中 邹雪辰
大千世界,芸芸众生,每个人都有属于自己的独特魅力,即便你觉得如此平凡,这也是独一无二、无可替代的,就像茫茫夜空中的点点繁星,或明或暗,每一颗都绽放出属于自己的光芒。
你有属于你的光芒,因为你相信自己。有信心未必会赢,但是,没信心一定会输。自信可以使人勇敢追求,但当你失去了自信,就会自甘沉沦在平凡之中。伟大的 指挥家小泽征尔在一次世界级的指挥大赛中演奏评委们给的乐谱,在乐队的演奏中发现了一个不和谐的声音,他向评委们提出了这个问题,当听到评委和观众们质疑 的声音时,他没有放弃而是坚持了自己的选择,通过了评委们故意设下的陷阱,获得了大奖。
你有属于你的光芒,因为你不断追求超越。古希腊的德摩斯蒂尼,他天生口吃,但为了成为一名辩论家,不断超越自己,去实现更高的目标。他在严酷的条件下口中含石,一次又一次地磨砺自我,不仅是在矫正口吃的坏毛病,更在强化自己的心智,最终成为了伟大的辩论家。
你有你的光芒,因为你不断积蓄力量。有志者,事竟成。有心人,天不负。不要被暂时的黯淡消磨了我们的意志,做最好的自己,就是要相信自己在学习、生活中的积累,最终会成为绽放璀璨光芒的能量的源泉。
汇聚我们每个人独有的光芒,照亮寻梦前行的方向!
【兰姐姐点评】
考场作文必须体现你积极向上的人生观。作为一篇议论文,此文正能量丰沛,摆事实,讲道理,夹叙夹议,一气呵成。需要注意的是,进一步提高驾驭语言的能力,使表达更顺畅。
兰君,兰姐姐。青岛晚报资深教育主编、晚报小记者团负责人、中科院家长学院特邀专家、中小学生作文指导专家,校长传媒专栏作家。其主持的品牌栏目\"作 文课\"、\"兰姐姐热线\"、 \"家长学堂\"、\"教育三人行\"等多年来广受好评。著有《父母好好学习 孩子天天向上》《优秀母亲教子锦囊》。
青岛实验初级中学 胡凯宇
一把提琴,操在乐师手中,音乐就动听了;一支画笔,握在画师手中,春天就盛开了;一碗米粥,在妈妈手中,亲情就融化了。有米粥相伴,滋味更长。
自从上了初中,作业量逐渐增大,每次回家便一头扎在作业堆里。妈妈很是心疼,于是就开始为我煮粥。起初,母亲给我煮的只是乳白的米粥,表面上平淡无奇,实则清香无比,让人神清气爽,好滋味在心头。每每吃过后总会抹抹嘴,开心地说句\"真好吃\"。这不经意间的赞扬,给了母亲无限的\"后劲\"!餐桌上粥的花样开始翻腾起来,从平常的菠菜粥、白菜粥到夏日里的赤豆粥、绿豆粥再到冬日里的.花生粥、皮蛋粥、羊肉粥……各式各样的米粥在妈妈精湛的厨艺下与我相伴。
在静谧的夜晚里,在明亮的灯光下,捧着一碗温暖的米粥,坐在氤氲着舒缓的米香的热气里,伴着母亲关切的询问声\"今天过得开心吗?\"我总能感到无比的惬意与放松,不仅如此,我更感受到了一种更强大更长久的滋味——母爱! 那天,正在享用香菇木耳粥,突然问母亲:\"妈,当时为什么想起给我煮粥呢?\"母亲娓娓道,\"你每天回家,我想和你说会儿话,又怕打扰了你的学习,所以妈妈在家里一边慢慢地煮粥,一边慢慢陪你写作业……\" 听着妈妈的话,我心里莫名感动,觉得那粥的味道更浓郁了。
最长情的爱就是陪伴!相伴儿子成长的过程,就像等待一锅粥煮熟的过程。爱,就在浓浓的粥里,有米粥相伴,滋味更长!
【兰姐姐点评】
一碗粥里的浓郁亲情,从胃里穿越到心里,成了最好的精神给养。作者的选材小切口大写意,感情表达得恰如其分,语言自然流畅,且首尾圆合,多处点题,是一篇佳作。
Up a slightly-left-of-center masterpiece. The emotional impact of the beautiful, wordless summation of Carls life that opens the movie the bass note that resonates through the whole film and at least as affecting as the scene in Wall-E when he holds h own hands while watching Hello Dolly. The rest of the movie, of course, breathtaking on just about every level, especially the tactile quality of all the characters and textures and the completely realized weather effects and action scenes. With no "new" technical milestones (fur in Monsters, Inc., water in Finding Nemo, realtic camera effects in Wall- E, the design the main focus, from the hilariously stylized characters to the amazing setting of the tepui.
I know----thats a interesting trip!
读书的滋味?书,也有滋味吗?那么,酸,甜,苦,辣……究竟哪一种,才是读书的滋味?
读书是酸的?看着书中鲜活的人或欢喜、或悲伤地生活着,我也不禁想,若能穿越到那书中去,我又该如何?羡慕诸葛亮“前后知晓三百年”的神机妙算,羡慕曹操刘备“煮酒论英雄”的惬意豪迈,羡慕关公“单刀赴会”的勇敢大胆……也会嫉妒地想,若我也能有这般智慧的头脑、洒脱的心境、超人的胆魄,那该多好?若我遇上这些,会如何?大概,我做到他们那般的冷静智慧。读书,酸,夹杂着敬佩。
读书是甜的?很美好的结局,大家最后都幸福地生活在了一起。小时候特别喜欢看公主和王子的童话故事——不管过程如何挫折,结局总是“从此,王子和公主幸福地生活在了一起”。美好的结局,总是令人向往。即使主角不是自己,想象着书中的人们幸福地生活,也是很美妙的一件事。小时候总喜欢在睡前读上那么一个美丽的故事,仿佛这样,就连梦境都是美好而甜蜜的。读书,甜,令人心醉。
读书是苦的?合上眼前的书,我脸上还挂着淡淡的泪痕。为什么,一定要这般结局呢?为什么,主角一定要在打倒坏人后死去?“HappyEnd”不好吗?眼泪滴落至书页,仿佛就连那洁白的纸张,也沾染上了一丝苦意。落泪之后,仍不禁思考,这般描写,是否能更加体现出主题,更加能体现出某些精神?读书,苦,却回味无穷。
读书是辣的?书本身就是一只只辣椒,即使你回味无穷,又让你羞愧地意识自己的错误所在。如读完了《赤免之死》,我才知道诚信的重要。看完《母爱如山》我才知道平时的所作所为为什么会让父母如此伤心……书是全世界最好、最受欢迎的“大辣椒”。
朱熹说过:“读书有三到,谓眼到,口到,心到。”我说:“读书有四味,如酸味,甜味,苦味,辣味。”
人间百味,读书百味。
A simple dcussion about Up
Pixar Animation Studios a superior about talking story at all times: Toy Story a story about deeply fraternal affection. Finding Nemo a story about a father’s introspection about h education road. The Incredibles a story about middle-aged man and wife’s life cr. Cars a story about moralities in physical education’s world by telling a star’s experiences. Ratatouille a story about a spirit that never gives up and you can realize your dream. Because of those wonderful cartoons, Pixar makes itself become an excellent symbol in cartoon sphere.
Therefore, Up worth being expected. And the truth that it’s a fantastic cartoon. To my mind, dream, commitment and responsibility the key of Up’s successful.
Children’s dreams are the easiest and the most romantic, on account of they always have deeply interest and passion for new things and strange world. But sometimes it’s difficult to realize their dreams by themselves; they usually need adults’ help. And those behaviors are not only their promes, but their commitments and responsibilities.
Russell and Carl’s relationship a key of Up. They have many differences: age, characters and background. And Up explains the relationship between adults and children by them.
Though Carl and Ellie’s love story just a few minutes, it impressive
and affecting. And it’s my favorite part in Up. Every man and wife wants to live a happy life, but true life usually makes it difficult to realize. But it doesn’t mean dream unpractical, prome untrue. Through Carl becomes unsociable and eccentric, he still remember h prome to Ellie. In my opinion, the thing which flies not the house, but a heart which brave and insts on its dream and prome.
And the adventurer, Charles a special role in Up. I think he stands for the people, who just care about their own benefit, totally forget social benefit and their roles in the society. There are so many kinds of dreams, so there are some persons make fame and wealth to be their goals. In fact, it reasonable, but it’s wrong to damage the social benefit. Th way of doing things terrible, shameful and lamentable. In the film, Charles forges sample at first, then kills many innocent men, and tries h best to get the animal, a kind of big bird. Everything he does for h own fame and wealth. The film has hit the right and wrong on the nose. In the final battle, empty-handed Charles fell down into a so deep cliff. It’s not only a punhment to him, but a satire to th kind of people.
Dream likes a check, prome likes an acceptance. Once you prome, you must try your best to make it come true for it your responsibility and duty.
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青岛的海多,身在青岛的人怎么能不去赶海呢?每逢初一十五退大潮,青岛人男男女女、老老少少,没有不想去赶海的,赶海的时候一定要拿个小桶,用来装你的“战利品”。上周六,我和妈妈去海边赶海,沙滩上有许多小水坑,那些小水坑里,总有几条可爱的小鱼被遗忘在那里。这时你就可以去捞一捞,我也是这么做的。我握着小鱼网,一下子放进水里,来回搅动。小鱼们好像受了“不速之客”的打扰,纷纷躲起来,不见踪影。我没发现小鱼,就把网子拎了出来。不一会儿,小鱼发现“不速之客走了”,就又游了出来,这次,我谨慎了许多,轻轻的往水里放网子,这次,小鱼好像没发现我,一个劲儿的往里钻。我抓住机会,往上一捞,几条小鱼就入了我的网吧。很显然,他们成了我的战利品。
听了我的介绍,你一定会动心吧?来吧!青岛欢迎你!
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