英语六年级作文爬山【一】
星期六，我和爸爸、妈妈、叔叔、阿姨、还有小朋友去青城山避暑。
到了青城山，我们先找到了喝茶的地方，爸爸和叔叔们在打牌，我和妈妈、阿姨、小朋友去爬山。山上的空气真清新，我们做了深呼吸。青城山的树又高又密，从山上流下来的水又清又凉，真美啊!
下山后，我们看到山脚下有一个水潭，我们就在水潭里滑竹筏。我看见了许多可爱的小蝌蚪，小蝌蚪有着黑黑的身子、大大的脑袋、长长的尾巴，在水里游来游去，有些都长出后腿来了，多可爱啊!我们抓了一些小蝌蚪放在瓶子里。
我度过了一个令人难忘的周末，我想再去一次青城山。
英语六年级作文爬山【二】
星期天，我和妈妈去太子山公园里玩。公园里的小朋友可多了，她们有的在套圈，有的在看猴子，还有的在开小车……看!他们玩得多开心呀!
其中我最喜欢的项目是玩蹦极。蹦极就像蹦蹦床一样，不过用两条绳子把你吊着。我来告诉你，那种感觉可舒服了!我用力地蹦着，想蹦得比杆了还要高，越蹦越高，我觉得我想得太美了，因为那样我就可以看到太子山的全景了。但我从蹦极上下来后，才看见上面有很多树枝，吓的一身冷汗。我要是跳到杆子上的话，恐怕会被树枝打到头哦!
我们还去猴山那儿看猴子。那些猴子很可爱，于是我们就给他们吃的，妈妈还在附近菜地里拔了两根青菜给猴子吃呢!今天过得真快乐呀!
英语六年级作文爬山【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
英语六年级作文爬山【四】
刚进笔架山，在我们面前便展示出一片汪洋大海，海浪拍打着海面，击起一缕缕晶莹透明的水花，仿佛是九天仙女抛下的水晶花。我们乘坐具有独特风味的小艇，向海对面飘去，任海风与激起的浪花直扑自己的脸上，也毫不在意。小艇来到蔚蓝色的大海中央，海风轻轻吹，海浪轻轻的涌，仿佛置身于诗情画意之中，美不胜收，美不可言。以前听说在这海洋的深处有一条神奇的小路，每当海水退潮时，这条小路就会出现，这条小路将会把你送到海的彼岸。
到了笔架山的山脚下，我们稍作歇息，几分钟后我们将会向笔架山的最高峰发起“突击”。笔架山一共有180余个台阶，每个台阶都有一个美妙动听的故事和悠久的历史。以为这里的台阶十分多，我走到一半就走不动了;台阶十分陡，人走在上面仿佛要滑下来一样。为了最后的胜利，我又鼓足力气，向至高点奔去。躲在树林里的知了唱起了动听的`歌，仿佛在说：“小姑娘，别放弃，马上到终点了。”经过几分钟的“艰苦奋战”，我们终于站到山的顶点。站在山上向下望，四周一片蔚蓝，宁静，树木苍翠，草木葱茏，仿佛将人带入了绮丽的梦境一般，好不自在。吹着天地间最纯净的风，望着这神话般的世界，我醉了，醉的悠闲自在……
海水呀，你流吧流吧，装载着我们童年的快乐向远方跑去;青山呀，你绿吧绿吧，装载着我们中国人民的希望，展现中国的恢弘!
英语六年级作文爬山【五】
开始往山上爬，一路上看到了好多个寺庙，我们来到其中一个较大的寺庙的门口，往里一瞧，看见里面人山人海，就使出铁头功挤了进去。呀！一群小和尚正在练功呢！他们的动作时而舒缓，时而迅捷。脸上的`表情时而威猛，时而陶醉。身体动作整齐划一，就像是电脑制作出来的一样，不论围观的游客如何的喝彩与鼓掌，他们都无动于衷，完全沉浸在表演里了。受到感染的我和几个小伙伴心潮澎湃，在旁边“有模有样”的比划起来，直到听见大人们善意的嘲笑声，我们才一个个灰溜溜的钻出人群，向山顶进军。
一路上山路崎岖不平，我们一边消灭着身上携带的“美食”，一边欣赏着眼前的美景，有空还和几个不期而遇的小动物游戏一番，当然最后总是在大人的催促下继续前行。
不知不觉间我们来到了山顶，伸着脖子往下一探头，哇！感觉一阵眩晕，可真高啊！赶紧往远处眺望，山峰蜿蜒起伏，像一条条巨龙在飞舞。山顶上吹起一阵阵微风，舒服极了。我禁不住朝山涧大喊了一声“呵”------，山谷里立刻回荡起我的声音，慢慢的越来越小，过了很长时间才听不见。其他几个小伙伴也跟着一起大喊起来，你一声我一嗓，欢乐的声音在山谷里久久的回响着。我看着脚下的群山，心里觉得无比的舒畅。
嵩山真是美极了！连绵起伏的群山，山脚下树木葱茏，青翠欲滴，山上云雾缭绕，高瞻远瞩，可饱览无限风光。我心里更是赞叹不已：嵩山真是大自然的杰作啊！
