初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我家养了两头小白猪。它们全身雪白,一对大耳朵像两把有力的扇子,忽上忽下不停地扇动;鼻子长长的,一对圆圆的鼻孔,像两个小山洞;鼻子下面藏着个大嘴巴,不仔细看,真不会发现鼻子下面还有张嘴;鼻子上面有一双让人捉摸不透的小眼睛,满脸的皱纹,实在不怎么好看。
农忙时,妈妈下地干活,让我在家喂它们。我把猪圈门打开,把调好的食料放在猪圈门口,馋嘴的小猪鼻子尖极了,香味早被它们嗅到了,还没等我把猪食倒在食盆里,它们就一拥而上,把满满的一盆猪食给拱洒了。猪食溅到我脸上、裤腿儿上、褂子上,气得我顺手拿起棍子想揍它们。可刚举起棍子,它们就“嗷嗷”地叫起来,似乎在向我求饶。看着它们那可怜的样子,我又不忍心让棍子落下去了。
小白猪渐渐长大了,更暴露出了它们的本性--贪吃、贪睡。每当妈妈喂它们时,它们便狼吞虎咽,大口大口地吃起来,还不停地发出哼哼声。
父亲的一生是忙碌、是劳累、是无奈。他比村里所有人起的都早,比村里所有的人如果说别人是日出而作、日落而息,那他便是日未出而做,日落仍不能息。他的身影总不断的出现在田间地头、在家里家外。
你听过龟兔赛跑的故事,可你一定没听过老水牛和兔子赛跑的故事,其实故事的本身就是龟兔赛跑,老水牛是我父亲自创的。我父亲是没念过什么书的,斗大字不识几个。龟兔赛跑的故事大概是他路过学堂时,老师给别的孩子上课时他听来的,也许只是路过只是觉得有意思但没仔细去听,也许是他那会还没见过乌龟,也不知道乌龟是什么,恰好他又牵牛路过,就把乌龟记成了老水牛,不管怎么样故事中的道理父亲是明白个大概的,内容也知道了个大概的,也正是这个听来的故事教育着我的一生。
父亲的一生是忙碌、是劳累、是无奈。他比村里所有人起的都早,比村里所有的人睡的都晚。如果说别人是日出而作、日落而息,那他便是日未出而做,日落仍不能息。他的身影总不断的出现在田间地头、在家里家外。在我的心里,穷人家的孩子早当家,小小年纪的我就知道一分钱在家中的份量。父亲从我记事起就给我讲这个故事,每每讲完,无不泪流满面。用手抚摸这我的头说:“只要好好干,咱家也可以在过年时吃上肉。”那时的我“早当家”只是知道多帮父亲干些活,多攒些钱,过年的时候就可以吃上肉。我却不知道父亲为什么要流泪。现在我才明白一个坚强男人背后的辛酸,可一年又一年过去了,我们家过年时从来没吃过肉。
到了该上学的年龄时,我和别的孩子一样进了学堂,不同于他们的是我没有他们身上的新书包,可我并不计较这些,因为我知道书包当时对我们家而言是一种奢侈品。在学校我听父亲的话好好上课好好学习。我总是被别人侮辱,他们骂我是野孩子,上学没书包还光脚丫子,最不能容忍的是他们骂我父亲是穷光蛋,小小年纪的我怎能忍受这般侮辱、、、、、、大打出手的结果是我被学校赶回了家。因为我打烂了三个同学的头。父亲把我从学校领回了家,我跪在父亲面前,我知道自己闯的祸有多大,到家后父亲挑了许久才拿了根稍细点的棍子对我是一顿抽打,我没有躲也没有喊一声更没有留一滴泪,我咬着牙接下父亲的一棍又一棍。他毕竟是父亲,他终究是狠不下心来这样对自己的孩子,他气得直跺脚、掰断了棍子仍在一边。跪下来抱着我的头大哭起来,他的手抚摸着他打过的每一处地方,泪水涌出我的双眼。“爸”我哭喊着紧紧地抱住他不肯放松。
如果让我在人和动物的叫声中任选一样的话,我会选择倾听动物的叫声。
我爱听动物的叫声,是因为动物的叫声透露了它不同的感情色彩。
早晨,几个顽皮的小孩发现了自己今日玩物:一只个头很小的小鸡。他们将小鸡围堵在自己的“包围圈”内。圈外的母鸡则非常的焦急,时不时想偷袭啄啄这些顽皮的孩子。但总是欲出又止,不敢偷袭。它只能一边通过缝隙瞧瞧自己的孩子,一边发出叫声“咯咯咯”“咯咯咯”……这是无奈的声音,因为它只能眼看着自己的孩子被欺负;这是无助的声音,因为它想不出办法来救救自己可怜的孩子;这是自责的声音,因为自己没有尽到一个母亲应尽的义务;这是愤恨的声音,因为它恨这些顽皮的孩子;这是自卑的声音,因为它想和孩子说一声“对不起”……
去外公家玩,我偶然看见了外公抓来的八鸽并对此有很大的兴趣。于是我就试着逗逗它没想到这个顽皮的“猎物”竟叫了起来。这是生气的声音,因为它气愤自己让猎物在眼皮下跑走了;这是好奇的声音,因为它好似从来没有见过这种猎物;这是准备的声音,因为它准备打起精神再次捕捉它的“猎物”。它相信只要自己努力的话,一定能捕到猎物!
和人一样拥有领地意识的鸡,特别是公鸡常常会为了自己的领地和其他公鸡打起‘架’来。两只公鸡一边打架,一边叫着。这是愤怒的声音,因为它恨有别人和它争夺地盘;这是鼓气的声音,因为它要通过叫声来给自己打气;这是必胜的声音,因为它已经确定要为地盘与另一只公鸡决一死战,因为它深知自己的身上背负着是怎样的重担,如果它败了,那些母鸡和小鸡该怎么办呢?我相信,能给予它最大动力的,还是它的孩子……
看门的狗狗在晚上,因在自家门外嗅到了陌生人的味道便一下子警惕了起来。它忽然叫了。这是告知的声音,因为它想要让主人知道有陌生人在门口而警惕起来;这是慌张的声音,因为它嗅到了从未嗅到的味道;这是驱赶的声音,因为它想通过自己的叫声让外面的陌生人离开,它知道不能让陌生人入家来,更知道主人对自己怀着多大的信任。所以它无论如何都要守着主人,守着家的门,让主人始终相信着自己……
在叫声方面,可能动物的叫声不如人类的叫声好听,但是,有时动物叫声所表达的情感却远远超过了人类的叫声所表达的情感……
同学们,你们养过小动物吗?我曾经养过一只小狗,他的名字叫“多多”。
多多是一只博美狗,一身雪白的毛配上头上戴的蝴蝶结,真是可爱极了!
他吃东西的时候不像其他小狗那样狼吞虎咽,总是满满的吃,吃的.时候,左手打右手,真高雅,而且不浪费粮食。他睡觉的姿势也非常优美,把前腿往后一伸,把前爪往前一放,然后头夹在两只前爪之间,不过一会儿,就睡着了。
别以为人才会看眼色行事,其实狗狗们也会。如果他看你心情好,便跳到沙发上,依偎在你的怀里,马上让自己成为你的“宠儿”。如果他看你心情不好,便会回到窝里,不来烦你,等你心情好了再陪你玩儿。
我非常喜欢多多,可惜他已经被送到了小姨家。再多多被送走后,小姨经常在看我的时候把他带上,现在,他已经生了六只小狗了,全部成了警犬。
我真想念我们家的多多。
春雨后阳台的小石缝里,时常趴着几只灰黄的蜗牛。每当阳光洒在长满青苔的方砖时,它们就一只只缓缓爬出来,伴着朝露径直向墙沿上爬去,渴望在最高点多沐浴些阳光。
清晨,一夜的雨停了,阳光透过水滴把阳台照得亮晶晶的。墙面上倾刻问充满了生机,一只只小蜗牛好奇地探出头,慢慢地向着有阳光的墙沿爬去,在墙面上留下了一道道透亮的痕迹。小小蜗牛细心编织着它们重重的壳下那大大的梦想在少有生机的阳台,这是一处极有活力的景致。 对蜗牛的回忆很少,只想起孩提时候住在乡村的老石屋里。每到春雨过后,墙角缝中总会有一只蜗牛背着另一只蜗牛在墙壁上爬,找个洞钻进去。再一次的雨后,便多了许多小蜗牛。这时,我总会同玩伴们到长满许多青苔的老墙根下翻开那些久未挪动的石头,提几只漂亮的小蜗牛放到
筷子上,看谁的蜗牛爬得最快。可渐渐长大后,也便渐渐忘了这个游戏。
生活中再也没有蜗牛,只有成绩了。
想到这里,心中忽然涌上几丝无奈与怀旧。这时,那几只渴望阳光的蜗牛已爬到了半墙腰上,似乎都有些累了,丧失了先前的热情,有几只开始往下爬,有的索性缩回了壳里,不再往上了。 仅有只极小的蜗牛仍有点顽固地向阳光靠近,继续着这有趣而艰辛的旅程。
我叹了口气,开始为那些无心向上的蜗牛们惋惜,嘲笑那几只回头的蜗牛不如把回头的精力用在坚持的信念上,都只差着一半啊。但那口气听来更像是叹息自己。
曾几何时,自己不也在为自己没有坚持努力而无法考好中考而叹着相同的那口气么?偶然回过神。发现那只小蜗牛已爬上了墙沿,与我一同沐浴着雨后清晨的阳光。它尽情地把弱小的身体从壳内向壳外尽力舒展,算是自己成功的仪式。 蜗牛实现了它渺小而简单的梦想,重重的壳里裹着轻轻的仰望。我们一同在此刻呼吸每一缕阳光的味道和泥土的气息。眼前恬静的青山,远处清晰的平房,虽不迷人,但极和谐地罗列在水灵灵的乡城里。
心中一阵莫名感动。或许,蜗牛就像我一样的无奈但充满希望;更或许,我就是一只努力爬向高处,渴望阳光的蜗牛,驮着重重的壳一步步往上爬,幻想乘着那片叫理想的叶子往前飞,寻找属于自己的蓝天。
晨风吹干了蜗牛流过的泪和汗,在墙上化成那道透亮的痕迹,在阳光下闪闪发光。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
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