要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
星期天,妈妈带我去北京爬长城。
我们坐车来到长城脚下,哇,这里四面环山,高高的山上有好几处都有长城,仿佛是一条条通天的巨龙,弯弯曲曲,形态各异。
开始爬长城了,我兴冲冲的跑到队伍的最前面,起初爬的时候,并不感觉陡峭。直到爬到第四层的时候,我感觉根本走不动了,妈妈说这是因为太陡的原因,走起来就像拉了一车粮食一样艰难。在第五层时,我站在台阶上向下望,仿佛我是一个巨人。这时,妈妈拿出照相机给我拍了几张照片,然后,我们继续往上爬……终于,让我费了九牛二虎之力爬上了顶,虽然有些累,但是心里好高兴,我高声呼喊:“我爱北京!我爱长城!”妈妈见我这么兴奋,就赶忙掏出相机给我录了下来,然后还让我当解说员,介绍了一下爬长城的感受。我们在长城上拍了好多的照片,才恋恋不舍的离开了。
这次爬长城,不但让我看到了世界闻名的古文化遗产,还看到了古代人修长城的艰辛和智慧。爬长城,真是一件令我开心的事。
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
How time flies! Three years has passed. I will graduate from junior high school. I will enter a new school to study. What will my new head teacher be like?I imagine that she/he is not only young but also beautiful/handsome. She/He maybe both patient with us and kind to us. She/He is also strict with us. I hope she/he is outgoing. She/He can understand us and make friends with us. If she/he likes doing sports, we can play together after class. She/He can get moreknowledge from her/him.I am looking forward to seeing her/him!
我的新班主任
时间过得真快!三年过去了。我将从初中毕业。我将进入一所新学校学习。我的新班主任会是什么样的'人?
我想她/他不仅年轻,而且漂亮/英俊。她/他也许对我们既有耐心又对我们很好。她/他对我们也很严格。我希望她/他是外向的。她/他能理解我们并与我们交朋友。如果她/他喜欢运动,我们课后可以一起玩。她/他可以从她/他那里获得更多的知识。
我期待着见到她/他!
俗话说:“不到黄河心不死,不到长城非好汉。”黄河我是看过了,雄伟壮观的长城怎么也得去看看。这不,今年我就去了长城。
远处看长城,就像一条金黄色的巨龙盘绕在一座座连绵起伏的山峰上。在太阳的.照耀下,一个个烽火台好似龙鳞闪闪发光。我们坐着缆车来到了长城。听了导游介绍,我才知道我们今天登的长城是八达岭长城。它经过三次大修,分别是:秦朝、汉朝、明朝,我们现在看到的长城就是明朝修的,是长城最出名的一段,也是地势最险要的一段。
我们今天的目标是好汉坡,我一边走一边观察,长城是由灰色的长方形巨砖一块一块搭建而成,望不到头尾,我想:古人是怎样造出这样的奇迹?我继续前行,一会儿追赶游人,一会儿欣赏风景。就这样,我还是累得满头大汗,腿也酸得不能前行。就在我精疲力尽的时候我看到了“好汉坡”三个大字,我兴奋地跳了起来。再看看后面,哇!后面人山人海犹如一条彩色的长龙在绵绵青山中舞动。
这太神奇了,这也太伟大了,那个时候没有挖掘机,也没有吊车,这些雄伟壮观的景象都是古代人民一块砖一块砖盖出来的,我真为古代人民创造的劳动奇迹感到自豪。
长城,是我国古代军事防御的一项宏伟建筑,它的建筑历史悠久,工程规模之大,堪称世界历史上一大奇迹。于1987年被联合国教科文组织列为世界文化遗产。整个长城穿梭在崇山峻岭当中,像一条长龙腾云驾雾。
俗话说:不到长城非好汉。我特别喜欢这一句,每一次读到时,我心中感到十分自豪、十分骄傲。
整个长城结构合理,高大坚固,由连续的城墙、关隘、敌台和烽火台构成。城墙为长城的建筑主体,关隘用于屯驻重,是长城防守的重要根据地,敌台供士兵射击、观察、掩蔽用,是城墙上的主要战斗设施。如今,它们仍然魏然屹立、蜿蜒起伏于高山之中
看到这前不见头,后不见尾的万里长城,我便想起,那时候没有火车、汽车、没有起重机,古代劳动人民用无数双手、无数肩膀抬着这一块块两三千斤重的条石,再一步步登上陡峭的山岭,是多么不容易啊!我心想,长城体现了古代劳动人民顽强的毅力和聪明的才智,如今长城显示了中华民族的悠久历史,展示了中国古代建筑工程的伟大成就。
啊!万里长城,中华人民的骄傲,全人类共同的财富,我爱您。长城,我心铭记!
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