今天,下雨了。我们要去到少林寺和开封府。
在路上听导游阿姨讲了四大怀药,我听得可认真了。我听见四大怀药里有:铁棍山药、菊花、地黄和牛膝。听导游阿姨说,吃地黄要有讲究,讲究是:女生男熟。(女人吃生地黄,男人吃熟地黄。
在去少林寺的路上就下起了大雨,我和妈妈在路上打了一把扑克。到了少林寺门口我们跟着一个男导游聚在一起听他讲解。后来我们感到他走的好慢,到了少林寺大殿,我发现了许多和尚,发现许多人在烧高香。听妈妈说那香要一百元一支,很多人在排队买香。后来妈妈给我讲了院里的坑是和尚们每天练功踩出来的。在回去的路上我和妈妈来到武术馆准备看武术表演,可是因为人太多,大门已经关了,我感到心里非常的遗憾。而且我的鞋里进了水,心情非常不舒畅,嚷嚷着要上车换鞋。我们就开始往门口走。
下午我们去了开封府,来到很久以前包公办公和居住的地方。进门后我看见一个很大的印章,上面写着“开封府印”。听当地的导游介绍,这个章要一个月换一次,因为它是木制的。包公是个很清正廉洁的人。过了一会儿,我们走到一个房间,前面用玻璃隔开,里面有关于包公判案的蜡像。我们出了开封府以后,就准备上车走了。
今天,在去少林寺和开封府因为下雨有些遗憾,没有带着高兴的心情来看这两个景点。
今天我要去开封游玩,你们肯定想知道我去哪个景点玩吧?告诉你们我要去的是万岁山!
早上6点起床,还下着雨,由于我这次是跟团去,只好让奶奶开着三轮车把我送到乘车的地方,我坐上车后,车上都是和我年纪差不多的小朋友,一路上我们有说有笑的,经过了两个小时车程,我们终于到了。
下了车我们都排好队,有序的进入了景点大门,进门后首先我们是认识十八班武器,往里走有个好大的鼓,我们都体验了一下打鼓,再往里我们看看这玩玩那的好开心,接着我们是看表演,看完了表演后,我们到吃饭时间了,我一看好丰盛啊,有卤面、鸡蛋、旋转土豆、肉夹馍、还有绿豆水等,吃完了饭我们就在树下面坐着休息。
到了下午后我们是玩水,起初我怕衣服被水打湿了,就看着他们玩,可是看他们玩的那么开心,我忍不住就也加入了,我手里拿着盆子,接满水泼的别人一身水,相反别人也泼得我一身水,但是我们都看着对方哈哈大笑,好开心啊!
时间过得真快都该返程了,我们都依依不舍的离开了,在回家的路上,我心里想,什么时候可以再去玩呢?
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
龙亭公园位于开封城西北部。
一天早晨,我们迎着清新的空气来到龙亭公园的前门,只见门上雕刻着许多精美的图案。从这些图案上,就能使人感觉到龙亭公园的历史文化氛围。
站在玉带桥上,就能够比较清楚看到潘杨二湖。微风轻轻一吹,波光粼粼,碧波荡漾,湖面上有许多游人正在悠闲地划着游船,尽情地欣赏这美好景色。两湖还流传着一个动人的传说呢:相传两湖中有水路相通,但水色截然不同。因为杨家将满门忠良,被人们敬仰,所以杨家湖清。而潘仁美谗言误国,残害忠良,被人们唾骂,所以潘家湖混。游完潘杨二湖,我们又来到龙亭大殿。啊,真美啊!你瞧:大殿座北朝南,距昔日的龙亭山之上,从地面到大殿共七十二层台阶。台阶中间是石阶,石阶上雕刻有形态各异的云龙图案。登上龙亭山,凭依青石栏杆极目远眺,古城风光,尽收眼底。龙亭还有许多蜡像呢!看,《赵匡胤受禅宋朝开基》、《杨业归宋》、《澶洲之萌》……
作为开封人,我为有这么壮观的景物而自豪。
20xx年10月3日 周二 雨
今天我们去繁塔玩啦。
繁塔是开封最古老的建筑,有一千多年历史了。它一座六边形的塔,建于北宋。它高36.68米,因为精美的砖雕和丰富的文物而闻名。
我们到的时候,那里非常空,简直是包场,一个人都没有,非常的清静。
繁塔看上去不是特别高,只有几层楼的高度。塔身外面有7000多块砖,每块砖上都雕有一个佛像,所以有7000多个佛像。每个佛像都雕得栩栩如生,外貌都不一样,形态各不相同。从外面看,繁塔就像一个铠甲战士一样!
繁塔里面有两个塔室。第一个塔室里是菩萨,高度和一个成人差不多高,是金子做的。背对它的另一个塔室里面,有很多很多的砖雕佛像,室顶上墙壁上全都是。门厅两侧是二十乐伎菩萨,每个都拿着不同的乐器。每个菩萨和乐器都非常非常精美,而且都是彩绘的,这可都是镇塔之宝哟!门厅的墙壁上还有精美的书法经书碑刻,是一个很有名的书法家写的,叫赵安仁,笔力雄劲,工整美妙。
繁塔真是精美绝伦啊!
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