9. B【解析】熟悉。3分。
10. A【解析】A.连词,虽然。B.转折连词,然而/代词,这样C.连词,并且/连词,却D.连词,因为/介词,拿。3分。
11. A【解析】小户人家不懂得分开来消除疑忌。3分。
12.三 宝 仍 投 旧 媒 媪 /又 引 与 一 家 为 馆 僮 /久 而 微闻 四 宝 所 在/ 乃 夤缘 入 郑 氏 家 /数 日 后/ 得 见 四 宝/ 相 持 痛 哭/ 时 已 十 三 四 矣。
【评分标准】断对两处得1分,断错两处扣1分。共3分,扣完为止。
13. (1)郑氏本来就善良懦弱,二牛、曹宁也是愚笨的乡民,听说违背法令罪行重大,都吓得停止了这件事。
【评分标准】“故”“良”“懦”“乡愚”“慑”“止”共2分,错2词扣1分。全句大意1分,共3分。
(2)只是严某做出这种罪孽的事,不知什么想法,也不知他的结局。但是,天理昭昭,应该不会有好报的。
【评分标准】“恶业”“心”“究竟”“善”共2分,错2词扣1分。全句大意1分,共3分。
14. 参考示例:
我不同意上述观点,本文讽刺了严某的道学家思想和无知的丑态。(1分)“泥古”中的“古”,指古代婚礼规定中表亲不能通婚;泥古,就是指严某不知当下已经没有这一规矩而仍坚持古训。“好名”中“名”,指名声,名望。好名,指严某以读书人自居,通过阻止三宝四宝成亲来维护礼法来获得“君子”的声望。(4分)本文中“讲学家也,不知古今事异”“然我辈读书人,当以风化为己任”等句子鲜明地表达了作者对严某丑恶嘴脸的深恶痛绝。(1分)
【评分标准】共6分。表述观点(1分),结合文本理解“泥古”“好名”(4分),结合句子阐述作者态度、观点(1分)。意思对即可。如学生答及同意上述观点,只要自圆其说,即可给分。
【参考译文】
董家庄有一个佃户叫丁锦,生了一个儿子叫二牛。又生了一个女儿,招曹宁做倒插门的.女婿,他帮助丁家人干活,关系处得很好。二牛生了个儿子叫三宝。女儿也生了一个女孩,因为住在娘家,就随着排下来取名四宝。这两个小孩出生在同年同月,只差几天罢了。姑嫂一起看护、哺养这两个孩子,在襁褓中就已定了儿女亲家。三宝四宝又很友爱,渐渐长大后,两人便形影不离。小户人家不懂得分开来消除疑忌,在两孩子玩耍时,常指着说:“这是你丈夫,这是你媳妇。”两孩子虽然不懂是什么意思,但是,听多了就已经习惯了。到了七八岁,渐渐懂事了,但是两个孩子都跟着二牛的母亲同睡同起,相互间也不避忌。适逢康熙辛丑年到雍正癸卯年间,连年歉收,丁锦夫妇相继去世。曹宁先流落到京城,穷得养活不了自己,便把四宝典卖到陈郎中家——不知叫什么名字,只知道是江南人——二牛接着来到京城,赶上陈郎中寻找馆童,也把三宝典卖给了陈家,并告诉三宝不要说他和四宝已定为夫妻。陈郎中家法严厉,每当打四宝时,三宝一定悄悄地哭;打三宝时,四宝也是这样。陈郎中生疑,把四宝转卖给郑家(有人说,就是“貂皮郑”家。),并赶走三宝。三宝又投奔介绍他来陈家的老太太,老太太又把他介绍到一家去当馆童。时间长了,他暗中听说四宝生活的地方,便通过拉拢关系来到郑家。几天后,才见到四宝,两人抱头痛哭,当时两人都十三四岁了。郑氏觉得奇怪,两人就谎称是兄妹相逢。郑某根据他们名字排行相连,就不怀疑了。但是,内宅与外宅隔开,两人只能在进出时彼此看看罢了。后来年成好了,二牛、曹宁一起到京城赎子女,辗转寻访到了郑家。郑氏才知道两孩子本来定为夫妻,心里很同情他们,想帮助操办婚礼后仍留他们在家中劳动。郑家的馆师严某,是一个道学家,他不了解如今世情与古时不同,提出异议说:“中表结婚是违背礼法的,也是律令禁止的,触犯了它上天要惩罚。主人的想法虽然好,但是,我们读书人,应当把端正风俗教化作为自己的责任,看到违背常理扰乱人伦的事却不阻止,这是促成别人做坏事,不是君子的行为。”他用辞职相要挟。郑氏本来就善良懦弱,二牛、曹宁也是愚笨的乡民,听说违背法令罪行重大,都吓得停止了这件事。后来四宝被卖给一个后补官员做妾,没几个月,四宝病逝了。三宝发疯跑出去,也不知去哪儿了。有人说:“四宝虽然被胁迫去,但她毁了容貌不停哭泣,实际上没与后补官同房。可惜不能知道详细情况罢了。”如果真是这样,这两个人在天上或在人间,必定能相见,一定不会闭上眼睛不能再见面啊。只是严某做出这种罪孽,不知什么想法,也不知他的结局。但是,天理昭昭,应该不会有好报的。有的人又说:“这不是严某拘泥于古法,也不是追求好名声,大概是对四宝有非分之想,想用四宝来侍奉他自己罢了。”如果这样,那么设立的地狱,正是为这种人预备的。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
A constantly doing memory work
B making frequent adjustments
C going through specific training
D taking part in various mental activities
注:考第三段末句。
Many experts are so convinced of the benefits of challenging the brain that they are putting the theory to work in their own lives. The idea is not necessarily to learn to memorize enormous amounts of information, says James Fozard, associate director of the National Institute on Aging. Most of us dont need that kind of skill. Such specific training is of less interest than being able to maintain mental alertness. Fozard and others say they challenge their brains with different mental skills, both because they enjoy them and because they are sure that their range of activities will help the way their brains work.
23. The findings of James and other scientists in their work _________.
A remain a theory to be further proved
B have been challenged by many other experts
C are practised by the researchers themselves
D have been generally accepted
注:第三段首句中的theory等同于findings。
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