怎么点评学生英语作文【一】
Everyone has a familiar place in his life, such as parks, supermarkets, and their own rooms. Of all, my most familiar is my room.
The door is west, and there are two windows on both sides of the door. They are "North Window" and "south window". Opposite the doorway is a small balcony, there is a small wardrobe in the balcony, with my clothes when I was a child. My bed is toward the south window, the bed is neatly placed with pillows and quilts. My computer desk faces the North window. There is a regular computer on the computer desk. As soon as I got into the room, I saw my favorite, the computer, and an eye light. Northeast corner is an unusual desk. There are many books on the table. There are dictionaries, books borrowed in the library, encyclopedia books bought by ourselves, and snacks: egg rolls, candy, and my favorite large bottle of coke. The southeastern corner is my wardrobe, with school uniforms, clothes, socks and underpants in the wardrobe. Also with bed sheets, quilt towel. There was an almost useless old TV on the cupboard. There is a DVD player on the TV. In the southwest, it's a big wardrobe for mom and dad. Beside the wardrobe, it was a dresser. I had a photo of my childhood on the platform. It was very lovely.
This is my room, is it beautiful? You are welcome to visit my colorful room.
怎么点评学生英语作文【二】
你喜欢吃桃子吗? 是的',我喜欢. 你喜欢吃橘子吗? 不,我不喜欢
.你爱吃梨吗? 我非常喜欢吃梨.让我们一起分享桃子和梨吧.好的
怎么点评学生英语作文【三】
1、文如其人,你的文章和你的为人一样真实。语言平实自然,构思合理,行文层次清楚。这些都是你自己努力得来的。希望你在今后的学习过程中写出能打动人心的文章!
2、捉住了“”的特点，非常正确;“”，给人的感觉“”。
3、刻画风景时，写出了本身对风景的领会，表达出了自己内心最真实的感觉。好比，看见第一棵小草抽芽时的惊喜，瞥见在自家屋檐下筑巢的燕子时的高兴，闻到桃花吐蕊的清香时发出的惊叹，听到老师宣布春游运动时的快乐??这些都是心田的感觉。在形貌风景的同时，恰到好处地表达出心田的感觉以致遐想，使习作生动，更真实，也会令他人冲动不已。
4、把看到的、听到的、闻到的、感觉到的统统关于春天的美好的部分写到习作里去，使习作和春天一样生动而美好!
5、放鹞子是孩子们最爱的运动，此中的兴趣不问可知，通过细致的形貌，把天上鹞子争奇斗艳、五彩缤纷的腾飞局面显现出来了。
6、读着你的习作，让我们看到一颗何等可爱何等晶莹无暇的童心呀。
7、捉住春天的草、树、花等差别的特点，根据“”的次序，刻画出春天生机盼望盎然的景象，反应出本身由衷的高兴之情。
8、逼真地写出了“”快乐嬉戏的景象，语言生动，形貌详细，运用了形象的比喻写出了“”的美。
9 、再加上微风、杨柳、花香，笔下的春天就像一首诗，好美!
10、对“”和“”的形貌很有特色，颇带童趣，令人线人一新，“”这句古诗引用也很适当，加强了文章的表达结果。
11、春天的“”真美，捉住了“”写，写出了“”的特点，也写出了“”的特点，固然这些风景我们都见过，但透过你的仔细视察，我们却有全新的感觉。
12、视察细致，按先总后分的要领，写清楚“”的特点。语言正确，形象详细，使我们有身临其境的感觉。
13、这段话有归纳综合地形貌，有详细地形貌，有动态，有静态，写出了“”的可爱之处。习作前后照应，视察细致，还把本身的喜好之情也写了进去。
14、由于有了富厚的遐想，以是笔下生辉，看吧，把“”比作“”，把“”比作“”，这些形象的比喻，何等生动地写出了“”。
15、写景捕获风景的特点，形貌景象融会，由远而近，由面到点，处置处罚得井井有条，写出的文章更是层次明白，景有各自差别的.形态、颜色，捉住了形状特点。
16、在你的笔下“”俨然像个小花圃，那么富有生命的气味，对“”的形貌，顺序序睁开，读起来一目明了。
17、从外到内，先容了“”的特点，视察有次序，也很细致，写得正确生动，变更了多种感官，内容逼真详细。
18、先写“”，再写“”，又写“”，末了写“”，写作思绪何等清楚，形貌何等精致，你看，用适当的比喻，把“”写得形象，逼真，突出春天的美景，别的“”局面也写得生动逼真，突出了一个“乐”字，有景、有情，何等美好。
19、写出了特点，写出了新意，景美―――天然美;人美―――可爱灵活无瑕的美。
20、偷偷的画面充满了生机盼望和活力，大天然的美景，有静，另有动态呢―――都是美，没有动态怎么办?于是你又遐想到了。
21、春天寂静的来了，在不经意中就充满了各个地方，春天的脚步真是挡也挡不住，
22、引得我们驻足抚玩，视察何等细致，写得有何等有层次，真好!
23、文笔天然清新，很多地方适本地运用了比喻，“”这些笔墨形象又富有美感。
24、在精致的文笔中明白对春天奇特的感觉，的却很有“诗情画意”。
25、通过本身的细致视察，逼真刻画，将这一刹时，化成了永恒。
26、运用了优美的文句，使春天里的竟越发饱满、充分。
怎么点评学生英语作文【四】
Everyone, there is a room for their own, I am no exception. My room has walls, windows, bed, pillow, and desk, bookcase and. Of course, there's a baby - like the Pearl River Piano, finish the homework every day, I will sit on the stool practice half an hour.
There's a secret in my room that you can't guess. Guess what, what is it? As a matter of fact, my room has two floors, and there is a push door beside the bookcase. Open the door, wow, and staircase, and go up to the platform. This is my little pet - Rabbit white. I have a sunny place, mine mother planted flowers, green onion, Dad cactus.
Sometimes, I wish my room had wings, so that it could fly to the sky, look at the white clouds, feel the white clouds, and try the taste of white clouds, like cotton candy.
I also hope that everything in my room is made of food. Your homework is hungry, you can chew on the desk; like sugar, you can lick the wall; hungry you sleep at night, can you just bite the pillow to chew in any case what does not matter, because all of the food.
Of course, I hope that my room long wheel, so that I can open a house car, ran to the river Yachun home to a good friend. She will be surprised. But I just smiled: "Hey, don't tell you how I dragged my room to your home."
But from dream, back to reality, my most favorite room, or my room, an ordinary little girl's room. At noon, after dinner, I will take a quiet lunch break in my room; in the afternoon, after school, I will do my homework in front of the desk. Father and mother often come to my room to help me with my homework. In the evening, I lie in my little bed and go to sleep. In the morning, a ray of sunshine comes into my room and sprinkles on my cozy little bed.
怎么点评学生英语作文【五】
The biography of the famous is composed of the famous French writer romain rolland, the biography of Michelangelo and the biography of Tolstoy, all of which were created in the early twentieth century. These three are famous people all over the world, but they do not give in to their fate and fight against their fate.
The first was Beethoven, a German musician who was born poor and dropped out of school. His life was rough and he was brave to fight his fate. His only family had failed him, and he was badly hit, but he survived. The great musician wrote an immortal masterpiece after hearing the deaf. He conquered the disease and overcame the difficulty. Beethoven was successful because of his spirit, unwilling to yield to his fate, and his spiritual values.
The second was Michelangelo, an Italian composer. He was born to a richer family in Florence. He has a high culture and artistic foundation. He spent his life working for the church. And his family kept asking him for money, and Michelangelo never refused their demands. The Pope had erected a monument to himself, which made Michelangelo less than his ideal. He encountered many difficulties in his life. He insisted that he lived to be in his seventies for his own ideal. Only a man with dogged perseverance like Michelangelo will succeed.
The third is Leo Tolstoy, a Russian writer. Tolstoy was born with a silver spoon in his mouth. He has a happy family. He has a high literary talent. He had been successful before, but he didn't care about what he had. He would not enjoy life, he would not spend his life, he would like to reflect the value of his life through human beings. Tolstoy was one of those people who let us see the different sides of the writer, the kind of inner shock that made me feel a lot.
This book tells us to fight our fate bravely, as long as you don't give in to your destiny, one day you will change your fate. There is an old saying that "destiny is in your hands".
怎么点评学生英语作文【六】
"Freedom and progress are the goals of art, just as they are the goal of our whole life," said the great musician Beethoven.
This winter holiday, I read a great book - celebrity biography. The book touched my heart deeply. The author of celebrity biography is French romain rolland. The book is composed of three biographies of Beethoven, Michelangelo and Tolstoy.
Each of these three biographies enlighten me. One of the things that struck me most was Beethoven. Beethoven devoted his life to music, but fate always played a trick on him. He was sickly and sickly in his childhood. At the age of 3, hearing gradually declines, as a musician, this is a fatal blow, and his character, determined, does not bow to fate and continues to advance on the music road. Middle-aged, he hearing has completely recession, can only use to communicate with people, but this does not make him stop writing, but not to abandon all, into the arms of nature, continue to compose the immortal music chapter.
"Man, you must strive for yourself!" This is one of the words Beethoven tells people. Yes, people can't cling to vegetation, create life with tough, bold heart and create art! Read more book notes in YJBYS!
怎么点评学生英语作文【七】
"Open the window! Let the free air come back! Let's breath the breath of heroes." This is a line from romain rolland's book, "celebrity biography". Perhaps this is his interpretation of all his work.
The author of "celebrity biography" is French thinker and writer, romain rolland. "Celebrity biography is about Beethoven, Michelangelo and Tolstoy in grief stuck on the journey of life, to seek the truth and justice, for can show the true, the good and the beautiful immortal masterpieces, laid down their lives. They may be tortured by sickness, or by the misery of their sufferings, or by the confusion of their hearts, or the three of them, which are all overlapping in one body, with deep anguish, almost suffocating their breath, and destroying reason. But with strong will, they walked through the glorious and arduous life.
There are 5 famous biographies of famous people
Many places in "celebrity biography" are amazing, but my most memorable one is Beethoven's saying, "man, depend on yourself!" This sentence seems to be the advice to every living thing, if not to be self-reliant, then to ask for trouble. These three great men, on their own, forged a glorious life.
Beethoven came from a poor family, dropped out of school at thirteen, started the whole family at the age of seventeen, and when he was twenty-five years old, he had just emerged from the music scene and was deaf again. The pain of this very deadly disease to the musician, who could have imagined who could think of his immortal masterpiece, was written in the vast majority of his deafness. He had always been unlucky in life, and his love life was full of desolation and regret, due to poverty and disability.
Meters open the ROM and Tolstoy luckier than Beethoven, they don't have any physical disability, but they refuse to enjoying life, will not live in vain, for the own goal, fighting.
What kind of victory could be compared to their achievements that the glory of the sun that was the day of the Napoleonic wars was never won by spiritual power. They forged themselves with difficulty. As Beethoven summed up his life in one sentence, this sentence has become the motto of the brave man: "for its pain, there is joy."
