我为南昌代言英语作文小学五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我为南昌代言英语作文小学五年级【二】
虎山雄峙，金鸡高唱;须江盘绕，江郎伫立，千年古道，锦绣江山。
我的家乡是浙江西南部的一个小城市，说小其实也不小。60万江山人在这片土地上过得是有滋有味，近几年来，江城的发展更是突飞猛进。
来到江山，首先不得不提的就是江郎山了，三片参天的巨石直插云霄，如今更是以丹霞地貌成为了世界非文化遗产，每年无数旅客慕名而来，千里迢迢只为一睹神峰风采。江郎山，如今便是江山的标志。
江山，顾名思义，有山亦有江，这江山便以须江最负胜名，奔腾的江水，曲折婉转，弯出了江山的神韵，转出了江山的风采。沿江两岸，绿树环绕，绿意盎然;更有彩虹桥等连架两岸，须江乐园等为来往游客的市民提供了一个娱乐休闲的好去处，同时也是一道靓丽的风景线。
江山的奇山异水孕育了杰出的人才。江山清漾便是伟大领袖***的祖居地，自从领袖寻根之路在江山铺就之后，清漾毛氏便成为江山的另一道标志。伟人故居也成为了江山的代名词，如此盛名，每个江山人都打心里感到骄傲。如今重磅推出的毛氏文化节更是赢得社会各界广泛的关注，江山毛氏，已经逐渐成长起来。
江山也拥有悠久的历史文化，其中廿八都古镇便是一个典型的例子。古镇如今仍保持着明清的古坊模样。古宅飞檐，古风老街，漫步其中，仿佛进入时光隧道，依稀可见过去的点点滴滴。作为历史文化悠久的古镇，廿八都古镇特意保留了这些明清古宅，并斥资修建古街坊市，才让这些先祖的文化精华得以保留发扬光大，它们见证了江城的风风雨雨，岁月风华。
江城在古老文化中沉淀，也从未停下现代化的脚步。不断建起的高楼大厦，各种现代化的设施，让市民们的生活更加方便和舒适。更有江山虎山集团带着江山的名字，走向各地。江山弥猴桃带着江山的风采销往四方，还有无数的人，无数的团体，带着江山的精神，走向世界，走向全球……
家乡是在外游子夜里的明月，
家乡是儿女们日夜的牵挂，
家乡是漂泊孤帆的港湾。
我爱我的家乡，爱家乡的一切，我会用自己的努力，去建设更美好的家乡，向所有的人都知道这个响亮的名字――江山。
我为南昌代言英语作文小学五年级【三】
在金张掖西北部有一个历史悠久，风光秀丽，经济繁荣的小城临泽。
临泽，是一个发展的城市。一走进临泽，一条整齐而又平坦的公路就会展现在眼前。黑得比碳更黑的路面向前延伸，许多的车辆来回奔驰，速度是那么惊人那么的快。是因为有了平坦而又宽的公路，它给临泽带来了无穷的拼搏精神，给临泽人民带来了自己的理想，更让中国发达富强!看!一幢幢高楼拔地而起，给了人们最好的工作，让人们少了烦恼，让人们认真工作，去共同创造临泽的明天!
临泽，是一个富有强大生命的城市。近几年来，临泽努力改善投资环境、道路的建设、旧城的改造、河道的美化、城市的绿化和亮化工程等都得到了改善。随着临泽的发展，大量的企业纷纷投资到临泽来，他们看准了临泽是一个富有强大生命力的城市。
临泽，是一个绿色的城市。路边的树木和花草正在茁壮成长，让人们呼吸最新鲜的空气，帮人们遮挡风沙，帮鸟儿建了一个幸福美好的家。
临泽，是一个商品丰富的城市，有番茄酱、临泽小枣等富有地方特色的产品。每当人们缺少了什么就可以直接买到自己满意的商品。精美的商品让人们赞叹，稀奇古怪的商品让人们好奇不已。几乎每天每家商场都会出现人们在捧商品时的喜悦情景。商品既能让商主有收获，又能让客户得到自己喜爱的东西，高兴的满载而归。
临泽是一个美好的城市，清澈的河水可见到正在水中嬉戏的鱼儿，一排排一行行的花草树木向着人们点头致意……
我的家乡水资源得天独厚，城市优美，风景秀丽，而且钟灵毓秀的临泽涌现出大批的英才俊杰，正在为建设出临泽的新面貌大展身手。
临泽风情，临泽文化，它们和谐地交织成一幅画，让人心醉神迷，留连忘返。来到这里你会对临泽的发展和文化历史有所了解，进而会喜欢上这个美丽的城市。
我为南昌代言英语作文小学五年级【四】
我的家乡——温岭地处浙江东南沿海，是一座美丽的小城。今天，让我带大家去细细游赏吧!
从高端大气的火车站出来，一条笔直的大马路引领着旅客们来到温岭。“樱花大道”、“银杏大道”、“一路合欢”……一排排与名字辉映的树木屹立道路两旁，为温岭人民的生活增添了一道道亮眼的风景。
沿着弯弯曲曲盘山小道来五龙山景区。周围便是生机勃勃的树世界：有高的、矮的、大的、小的，青葱苍翠，绵延起伏。山顶之巅有块巨大岩石，浑然天成，样貌惟妙惟肖，酷似一位梳着头髻的女人，取名“石夫人”。端庄美丽的石夫人静静地伫立着，眼睛凝望着前方，给五龙山带来了别具一格的韵味让人看了一定忘不了。
坐半小时左右的车子，我们来到了国家4A级景区——长屿硐天。长屿硐天位于温岭市长屿镇，是我国最大的人工开采石场。据考证，这里人工开凿石矿已有1500余年的历史。坐在观光车上，沿着一条石砌大道来到山谷。一道巨大的石头大门，矗立在我们眼前。石门上面“长屿硐天”几大字，在阳光的照射下熠熠生辉。硐天内有为数众多的石洞。洞套洞，洞叠洞，洞洞相连，形成千姿百态的石壁长廊，组成了一幅雄、险、奇、巧、幽的壮丽画卷。一些考察园林的专家不禁赞叹：多么宏伟的石洞，世界少见，我国独有!
温岭不仅山美水也美。有瑶池仙境美喻的太湖水库，犹如一块耀眼的蓝宝石镶嵌在花木中。平静的湖面在阳光映照下更显得幽光粼粼。泛舟太湖中，真犹如古人说的“人在画中游”啊!
温岭不仅山美、水美，而且物产丰富。这里是海产品之乡。有各种活蹦乱跳的鱼、横行霸道的蟹、品种各异的虾、花色不同的贝壳、营养丰富的紫菜等品种，多得让人数都数不过来。温岭的农特产也是闻名中外。黄澄澄的高橙、甜滋滋的甘蔗、绿油油的大西瓜、紫莹莹的大葡萄让人垂涎欲滴、留连忘返。
我的家乡如此美丽，我爱我的家乡。如果你也被我的'家乡迷上了，请你也来我的家乡游玩吧!
我为南昌代言英语作文小学五年级【五】
红领巾，它是国旗的一角，也是中国少年先锋队的象征，还记录着中国风雨的六十年。
我是一名少先队员，从小我就知道少先队员是带着红领巾的哥哥姐姐们他们背负着重大的责任，尊老爱幼，帮助弱小，使他人可以感受到这个社会的温暖。
我走在上学路上，戴着红领巾，无比光荣。我忽然看见一个小妹妹趴在地上，默默流着泪，手上，膝盖上都不停的淌着血。我立马俯下身来，问小妹妹：“***妈呢？”她支支唔唔的说：“我上…学…和妈…妈走…丢了…哇…哇呜。。呜”我忙拿出纸巾，把她受伤地方淌出来的血檫干，然后把她拉起来，问她：“***妈手机号码多少？”“姐…姐，我…不能告…诉…你。”“可你这要就找不到***妈啦~！”“可。。可…”看样子，她挺难为情。我也我可奈何了，只好问：“你是哪个幼儿园的？”“我…啧啧…不知道。”她抽抽鼻子。
这可怎么办嗱？
我急中生智，问那个小妹妹；“你的书包呢？”“我背。。后…”她拍拍她的书包。我打开她的书包，翻到她的练习本，上面歪歪的写着“西西幼儿园”。我不经意的看了一下手表，唉唉！我上学要——迟到啦！
怎么办啊！我急的像热锅上的蚂蚁，不知所措。
还是先把小妹妹送到幼儿园吧——可西西幼儿园在哪？
我却生生的走到一个叔叔面前，问；“叔叔，呃请问西西幼儿园在哪啦？”“奥！在左拐第一个路口就到啦！”我忙拉起小妹妹，奔向左拐第一个路口。
“啊呼——”我长舒一口气，松开小妹妹的手，看见西西幼儿园的'大牌，一直悬起来的心终于放下了。小妹妹忙奔向一个焦急的走来走去的阿姨，那个阿姨看到小妹妹，开心的抱起小妹妹大叫：“找到啦，找到啦！”一个貌似幼儿园老师的阿姨也会心的笑了，小妹妹妈妈问：“是谁把你送来的，那个人可真是大好人。”我笑了笑，小妹妹指了指我，阿姨忙问我：“你叫什么名字，谢谢你！我给你学校……”我没等阿姨说完，我忙说：“我叫少先队员！”说完就跑了。“诶
我忙赶到学校，早就上课了。
