1.If all those factors are contemplated, the advantages of... carry more weight than those of... From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...
2.No doubt that we can’t control the problem... unless there is an immediate action... The chance is very good that...
3.From what I have mentioned above, we can see clearly that violence on TV has (a great influence on young adults’ behavior. Therefore, one can naturally reach this conclusion that...
4.In conclusion, .../In short, .../All in all, .../By and large .../To summarize...
5.In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of... Only in this way can... in the future.
6.Taking into account all these factors offered above, we may carefully reach the conclusion that...
7.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...
8.This fact provides strong reason for thinking that..., thus... is actually preferable to ... rather than the reverse.
9.Judging from all given evidences, we can safely come to the decision that...
10.With the two opposite opinions discussed above, it is clear that neither of them is reasonable. As for ...I think, the latter... .If, on the other hand, the former...
改写括号中的内容,使其句式整齐,韵律和谐。
醒来眼里布满了泪水;(大病之后我疲乏,依依不舍的离别,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实,)都到心上来了。
分析:这是一道典型的语言运用试题,在近年中考语文试卷中经常出现。这类句式修改,一般要求句式整齐,语意连贯,可调整个别词语和句子顺序,但不得改变句子愿意。
句式整齐,语意连贯,其实就是修改为整句。整句是什么呢?整句就是把结构相同或者相似的一组句子整齐地排列在一起。整句形式整齐,音律和谐,气势贯通,能够把内容表达得鲜明集中,有利于突出作者的思想感情。
本题的实质是将原句修改为排比句(排比句就是整句的一种),但在题目中并没有明确指出,意在降低试题难度,只要句式基本整齐,意思和原句差不多都能得分。
查看本题中要修改的部分,我们很容易发现,出现了“大病之后”、“旅行途中”、“到家后”三个时间状语,只要第二个短语“依依不舍的离别”可以修改为时间状语修饰,句式基本上就整齐了。“依依不舍的离别”就是离别的时候依依不舍呀,“离别时”不就是一个时间状语吗?
看看,这样修改后就变成了“大病之后我疲乏,离别时的依依不舍,旅行途中的'辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
是否还需要进一步修改呢?同学们在修改中也要试着读一读,看看还有不有别扭的地方。我们很快就可以发现,第一个短语和后三个是不同的。我们只需要把第一个短语也修改成的字短语修改的偏正短语就行了。
“大病之后的疲乏,离别时的依依不舍,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
这已经非常不错了,当然,你还可以进一步美化。
“大病后的疲乏,离别时的不舍,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
前三句字格式、字数完全相同了,最后一句是不能改为“到家后的事实”的,也不能改为“到家后的恐怖事实”,因为去掉“可能”,就改变原句的原意了。
“健康使人快乐,快乐使人健康”这句话出自于美国散文作家爱默生之口。确实,长期的身体毛病会使最光明的前途蒙上阴影,而强健的活力能让不幸的境遇也释放出灿烂的阳光。今天我们班的几位小伙伴,就健康与饮食展开了讨论。
“机灵鬼”骆梦佳开始亮嗓门了:“随着家庭生活的富裕,我们小学生的零用钱逐渐多了起来。大多数的同学在放学回家时,总要过过零食这个“瘾”。”“嗯,我也认同”陈丹青说,“大家对油炸食品似乎有一种与生俱来的偏好。往往在油炸食品的摊位上,总是最热闹的。”我接着回答:“有些同学明知道油炸的食品并不卫生,可是那脚却不听使唤地跑过去,虽然好吃,可对身体的伤害不小。”“智多星”陆燕接过话茬:“我从电视上看到,某小学的一位同学,前些日子因食用过多的油炸食品,在上课疼痛不止,经过检查这位同学下是因为食用了不卫生的油炸食品而引起的。要知道这些小贩们在食物制作的过程中不讲卫生,任凭苍蝇、虫子在上面玩耍,吃了这样的食品肯定会给身体造成不适。”
看来多吃零食给我们带来的危害不小那!同学应该在日常膳食中注意什么呢?我想注意荤素搭配,粗细粮搭配,每天吃一些水果、蔬菜来补充人体必需的营养是我们正确的饮食习惯。只要我们合理搭配饮食,改善饮食结构,保证我们获得均衡的营养,不吃那些不卫生的食物,健康就在我们身边,我们将天天过得开心、快乐。
1.So far as I know, such a phenomenon comes up as a result of the following facts. To begin with, ... And more than that, ... Last but not the least,...
2.So far as I know, some factors that contribute to the above tendency may be summarized as below. First of all, ... What’s more, ... The last one is ...
3.Some people favor... as..., and they argue that.. It seems to be so at the first sight, however, on reflection, we are convinced that it is just another coin with two sides. Firstly, ... is, of course, valid as far as it goes, and we can benefit from this point... However, we must be fully aware of its potential danger, taking into account the risk resulting from...
4.As far as I know, the above tendency may inevitably give rise to some effects as follows.
5Considering the social atmosphere today, it is not a time to... It is high time to... The fact that... is what should be emphasized. Those who object to this idea forget a universal truth that... As I remember... In addition... An instance that accompanies this reason is that... On the other hand, ... Finally...
6.There are several significant reasons as follows. Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Thirdly,...
7.It would be possible to think that ..., but it would be more foolish to claim that..., and it would be more foolish to believe that...
8.We all know that... plays an important role in... However, many people believe that... depends on two aspects of... The first is... The second is... A further argument is...
9.In many cases, however, there is something beyond our expectation: yet we can compare and contrast all the relevant factors and find a way out /in/ between.
10.There are, I think, at least two possible ways to cope with it. The first way to tackle it is to appeal to the authorities to take drastic measures to (do... The other policy that is worth adopting
is to work out new regulations to (do ... Only in this way can we succeed in dealing with the problem in the near future.
科学的饮食可以使身体健康,比如:吃肉,肉可以使自己的能量大大提高,特别是牛肉,吃了以后,再弱的人都可以变得强壮。还有青菜,青菜有维生素C可以提高自已的身体机能,增强免疫力,吃鱼可以让我们变聪明。
饮食也可以治辽疾病,比如:便秘还可以服用蜂蜜水,吃番薯,香蕉的方法,使便秘的粪便轻松地排出来,还可以排毒。这些饮食都对治便秘有好处。
饮食该怎么吃,还很有讲究的',俗语说,早上吃的是皇帝餐,中午吃的是平民餐,晚上吃的是乞丐餐。这样的吃法对健康有益。
想要红润脸蛋,就去吃红枣,喝鸡汤。还有如果晚上失眠的话,可以睡前喝牛奶,吃莲子汤,喝一些红酒。
如果你体质很弱,运动没多久就累了,那么我建议你,吃炖羊肉,烤牛排等等。这些食物可以增强体质。
买东西也很有学问,要看它的日期和包装,这才能准确保那东西是不是过期。
还有吃饭的时候不能说话,因为如果说话了,就会被噎到或哽到,尤其小孩子这样做很危险,所以吃饭的时候不能说话。
还有吃饭的时候,要先喝汤再吃饭,因为这样才能开胃。
美丽,丰富的饮食也会使人快乐,比如吃自助餐,种类多,颜色绚丽,吃东西自然会快乐。
只要多知道一些饮食中的科学,那我们的身体就会健康,快乐,开心!
生活就会更幸福更美好!
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