这一天,森林里发生了火灾,只见森林里燃起了熊熊烈火,火光冲上天,红透了整个森林上空。百兽们闻讯从家里跑出来去救火。有的拿着水桶、有的拿着棉被、有的拿着树枝豹子凭他奔跑的特长一马当先,老虎不甘示弱紧随其后。他们俩奋力扑火,豹子拿来了森林里最大的水桶一桶一桶的泼向火里,老虎用沙子往火里扬大家干得热火朝天,谁也没有留意脚下,豹子不小心摔了一跤,他拍拍屁股爬起来接着救火。在百兽们的齐心合力下大伙迅速被扑灭,大家收拾完战场准备回家的时候,豹子这时才发现他的'脚不能动了,可能是刚才滑倒的时候把脚骨摔断了。老虎扶着豹子一瘸一拐地回到家。
过了几天,森林里召开救火小英雄的表彰大会。豹子和老虎都获得了救火小英雄的称号。由于豹子脚受伤不能来参加表彰大会,更不能站在讲台上领奖杯了。老虎替豹子领回了奖杯。
老虎捧着金光闪闪的奖杯迫不及待来到豹子家,他想在第一时间把这个好消息告诉豹子。他急切地敲了两下门,开门的居然是豹子本人,他的脚已经好了很多。老虎把奖杯递给他,他俩互相看看都会心地笑了。
过年了!过年了!大家都喜气洋洋。小花和小明还有爸爸、妈妈都在忙。小明把鞭炮点燃,鞭炮开始“噼里啪啦”的响个不停。爸爸开始贴了,贴完对联就和妈妈把灯笼一个一个地挂上。小明看见小花把耳朵给捂上了,小明就说:“小花你真是个胆小鬼!”
今天,小明和小花真高兴呀!
新年到了,家家户户放鞭炮,迎接新年的到来,爷爷、奶奶、爸爸、妈妈,小青一起团年。桌上有年糕,有汤团。小青在院子堆雪人,爷爷点燃鞭炮,咚,咚......吓得小鸡小鸭东躲西藏,有的小鸭小鸡跑到雪人的身旁,有的躲到墙角,还有的跑到远远的地方去。小青的脸上挂满了笑容。
森林王国要开新年联欢会了。狮子国王派小鸟去通知大家。大家知道后各自排练去了。
新年到了,所有的小动物都来到森林王国的广场上表演节目。
小兔子表演刻萝卜花,它用牙齿刻了一朵美丽的萝卜花。
大象邀请小松鼠一起表演杂技。大象用长长的鼻子把小松鼠抛到树上。小松鼠把藏在树上的松果洒到地上,天上好象下起了一场松果雨。当小松鼠跳下来的时候,大象又用鼻子把它稳稳地接住。大伙儿都拍起手来。
长颈鹿和小猴子一起奏乐。小猴打起了鼓,长颈鹿吹起了笛子。
联欢会还在进行着,整个森林里不断传来阵阵快乐的笑声......
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
听了这个故事,我觉得爸爸妈妈不会欺骗我。我还到,在学习中或者做什么事情一定要一心一意、专心致志,而不能三心二意、一心二用,只有这样才能学到很多知识。
这是一幅大象的图片。我看见了大象的脑袋、鼻子、耳朵、大腿、牙齿、身子、尾巴。
大象鼻子像滑梯,牙齿像长长的尖刀、耳朵像蒲扇,大腿像根柱子,身子像一面墙,尾巴像草绳……一头大象就像一座城堡。
大象实在太大了,有时间我要去动物园看真大象去。
第六幅春天像图画
春天来了。
温暖的太阳照耀着大地,小鸟儿在天空中叽叽喳喳地唱着歌,柳树在风中摆弄着它那绿色的长辫子,河边的草地里开满了五颜六色的花儿,河里的'波浪打着欢乐的节拍和小鱼儿一起跳舞,一群小朋友在岸边和蝴蝶玩耍、游戏。
多么美好的春天啊!
第七幅我做小主人
阿姨领着小弟弟来我家玩,我高兴极了!
小弟弟一进门,我就赶忙和他拥抱,然后拿出家里最好的茶水请阿姨喝,把我最喜欢的玩具飞机拿出来和小弟弟玩。
天黑了,小弟弟和阿姨要回家了,我真舍不得他们走,希望他们早点再来。
第八幅机智的小明
一天,小明独自一人在家做作业。
“咚咚咚!”忽然,一阵敲门声传来。
“谁呀?”小明问。
“我是你老爸的一位朋友。”是一个陌生的声音。
小明搬来一张凳子站起来,通过猫眼一看。啊!不认识!
“我该怎么办呢!”小明自言自语。哦,有办法了。
“叔叔,我爸爸不在家,他一会儿就回来,你等一下哦。”
“好的!”那个陌生人说着却转身走了。
看到这一切,小明拿起电话,给老爸打了一个电话,老爸好好地夸奖了小明一番。
我也要像小明一样,想办法处理一些事情。
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