要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
螃蟹(páng xiè丁丁在池塘里悠(yōu闲地游来游去,哼着歌儿:“我是一只快乐的小螃蟹……”
忽然,丁丁停住了,它看到莲花茎下有个圆圆的东西。是什么呢?丁丁好奇地张望了半天,断定那是一枚银圆。
“我有新玩具了。”丁丁飞快地爬了过去,用两只钳(qián子搬运银圆。
不料,银圆说起话来,把丁丁吓了一跳!
“我不是银圆,我是小螃蟹当当……”银圆的声音慢吞吞的。
丁丁惊讶地叫起来:“啊!您的八条腿呢?”
当当伤心地说:“昨天,我在池塘边脱壳,一个男孩弄掉了我所有的腿……”
丁丁叫了一声:“太可怕了!”
当当流着泪说:“我活不了多久了,因为我不能挪动身体去寻找食物,朋友,你能陪我度过这段最后的时光吗?”
丁丁看了看当当,坚定地说:“我愿意!”
丁丁想:夏天才刚刚开始,它们还有好一段美好的时光要过呢。它不仅要好好陪伴没有腿的朋友,还要想办法让它活下去。
丁丁快乐地说道:“没什么大不了的,只要你的身体在,快乐的精神在,腿算什么?再说我有八条腿,我觉得我的腿太多了,你和我一起分享吧。”
说着,丁丁就钻到当当身下,把它背了起来。它们在池塘底部慢慢移动,找到食物一起吃,有风景一起看。在清澈(chè的池塘里,好看好玩的东西那么多,当当慢慢开朗起来。
有一天,丁丁和当当遇到一群游行的蝌蚪。领头的蝌蚪问:“小螃蟹!你背着锅盖吗?”
丁丁解释说:“那是我最好的朋友,小螃蟹当当!”
“啊!当当的腿怎么没有了呢?”蝌蚪们七嘴八舌地问。
当当伤心地说:“一个坏男孩把我的腿弄掉了。”
领头的蝌蚪连忙安慰(wèi说:“腿还会长出来的。你看我们,生出来只有尾巴,一条腿也没有,但是我们不停地游动,腿就长出来了。”
丁丁惊喜地问:“真的吗?”
“当然!我们已经长出两条腿了。乌龟大妈说,再游一段时间,还会长出两条腿呢。到时候,我们就成青蛙啦!”
丁丁高兴地对当当说:“朋友,听到了没有?你也一定会重新长出腿来的!”
蝌蚪们要继续自己的游行了。临别的时候,领头的蝌蚪千叮咛(dīng níng万嘱咐(zhǔ fù:“一定要不停地游动,不然腿是长不出来的!”
丁丁暗下决心,一定要让当当长出腿来。
丁丁不会游泳,它就设计了一套独特的游泳方法:在塘底一阵猛跑,然后顺着水流漂(piāo一起,来一阵短暂(zàn的滑翔。虽然不能算作真正的游泳,但也有点像那么回事了。
丁丁不分白天黑夜,背着当当在池塘里猛跑。当当感动极了,连忙说:“你会累死的,我的朋友!”
“我是有名的大力士,哪会累死呢?”丁丁猛跑,一刻也不停歇(xiē。当当感觉到温暖的塘水流过身体,它想,眼泪的温度就是这样的吧?
秋天,洁白的莲花变成莲蓬(lián peng,泥里的藕(ǒu长成大白胖子,当当长出八条新腿来啦!
当当跳下丁丁的背,激动地说:“我的腿长出来啦!咱们可以并肩在池塘里走来走去啦!”
丁丁疲倦地笑着:“我想,我还是先睡一觉比较好……”它闭上眼睛,伸直了八条腿和两只钳子,不再动了。
有了新腿的当当伸出钳子,轻轻握住丁丁的钳子,决定永远守护在它身边,直到它醒来。它不会放弃丁丁,就像丁丁不放弃它一样。
灰狼和褐狼都是草原狼,它们被猎人捉去,送进动物园,供人观赏。
灰狼每天都在狭小的空间里跑步,褐狼很不理解。
“整天瞎跑什么?歇着吧!”褐狼没好气地说。
“奔跑,是狼的捕猎本领啊,歇久了,就会失去奔跑能力,以后还怎么捕猎呢?”
“没用的,我们已经被关进铁笼了,还会有捕猎的机会吗?”
“身体被关住了,可是心灵不能被关住啊!”灰狼说,“我的心。仍然在草原上奔跑!”
过了些日子,人们在两只狼的家乡建立了自然保护区,两只狼又被送回草原。
灰狼的捕猎能力丝毫未减,褐狼却再也跑不快了。
灰狼每天都能吃到鲜活的兔肉或鹿肉,褐狼却只能凭运气捕些又老又病的草原鼠充饥,有时候连草原鼠也捕不到,饥一餐饱一顿的,过着艰难的日子。
“哎,我怎么没想到还会有重获自由的这一天呢?”褐狼常常懊悔地想。
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
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