在这个句子中,我们先选择advertisements,influences, people这三个词汇,然后开始准备扩句。
在写作时我们同样需要注意词汇搭配的问题,下面让我们来看一个雅思写作的常见句子:
Advertisements have influences on people.
相信所有备考过关于广告和传播话题的烤鸭对这个句子都不会陌生对不对,那么我们现在开始试着扩句。
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹,缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例:A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项调查显示。。。)
"65%"让文章看起来有些假,有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
假如我有数不完的钱,我会造一个全世界最好的医院。里面的医生都是从世界各地百里挑一请来的专家,没有什么病是他们治不了的。不管是谁,不管你在多远的地方生病了,只要向我们医院求救,我们就会派出超高音速的急救飞机,第一时间把你接到医院里来治疗。不管你得了多重的病,就算是癌症、艾滋病等别的医院治不了的病,在这所医院里,都可以治好。而且在我这所医院里治病,所有的钱都是免费的。
假如我有数不完的钱,我会造一所世界上最大的图书馆。里面有全世界各种各样的书。这所图书馆里最神奇之处是,所有的读书的桌子上都有一个阅读头盔和一块平板电脑,你只要在平板电脑上点击你想要阅读的书籍,戴上阅读头盔后,所有的内容马上会直接呈现在你的脑海之中。而且我的图书馆和一般图书馆不同,别的图书馆借书要付钱,但在我的图书馆里读书,不但不用给钱,而且我还会给你钱,让所有的人都爱上读书。
假如我有数不完的钱,我还会给那些大山里吃不饱饭穿不暖衣的可怜人,送去粮食和衣服,没有房子的我会给他们修房子。如果有小朋友没得读书,我就会把他们接到我的\'学校里来读书。如果有人生病了,我就会把他们接到我的医院里来治病。
唉,如果我真的有数不完的钱就好了!但这只是我的一个白日梦,现在的我只会花钱,不会挣钱,为了以后真的可以有数不完的钱,我现在就要好好读书。不是有句话是这么说的嘛“黑发不知勤学早,白首方悔读书迟。”是呀,如果我不好好读书,找不到好工作,就可能会变成我白日梦里被帮助的人了。
Most female consumers shop unwisely and spend too much money.
这里的shop and spend就是复合谓语结构,但是到目前为止,这仍旧是一个简单句,我们继续丰富它。
此类段落不论字数多少,都给人空虚的感觉。考生往往为了凑足篇幅而“不择手段”。表面看来扩展了许多,但仔细永远只有一个意思。不得不让考官觉得即单调又啰嗦。
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